@CrimmyI think I can't hold back my opinion about this anymore, even more so after your more recent comment for Kotori to initiate the conversation with Brooklyn.
The way you are currently going (yes, I can see you have only just made a few posts) your character is going to end up in the shadows, ether forgotten or players are just going to find it bothersome to go out of their way to interact with Brooklyn since that is what they are going always going to need to do.
First off, you can play a introverted character without just sitting there and hoping for the next person to say something so you can be a part of the roleplay. I have seen introverted/silent type character roleplayed well and interesting without getting others to feel like they have to drag the character along to be nice, and so they don't feel left out.
I just don´t think it is fair to KoL the way you have started things here in the OOC, you are sort of putting things into their hand if your character is going to get any roleplay, instead of just initiating it yourself. If KoL hadn't been nice enough to go fetch you by the looks of it, Brooklyn would have been left in the forest since she seemed too 'lazy' to move.
It's not very, how do I say, flowy. Wooosh. Super woooooosh. That type of thing.
Though, while I am at it, I think I should also just continue to comment on the things I have noticed.
@OnaraxEther write at the start who it is from, or switch to third person perspective.
Though that has already been noted, I thought I would state it.
I don't agree you are more limited when writing in third person, and that first person is any better or "go tight on the character's perspective".
@Bleu Chess Cheeese! My man, my man~
The only thing I can say is lack of posting, and you have already excused yourself. The life of the meat-suit comes first after all. Actually, not to sound like I have favorites, or anything like that... You are actually the one who has impressed me the most when it comes to both writing, and bringing your character across in a really comedic-interesting way.
@KoL and
@karamonnomYou two, I can't say anything else other then I love the characters :) They are fun to play with, as well as I like how you two have stuck to a personality trait.
@TrixyTrixSo far I have only seen two post, but I loved the fact that she enjoyed seeing Ian fear her, and I loved how you played with that as well. Look forward to seeing more.
@RakuraiPffffft... Don't need to say anything here xD You know what I think~