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A story between Coma and @lydyn!
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I hope you enjoy the intro dear! If you want me to change anything, just let me know :)!
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lydyn Meow!~

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Oh!~ The forums didn't notify me of this... *totally wasn't stalking your profile...maybe* I needs to add my girl and read up now!~ :D
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Oh hey~!

The forums never notify me about anything threads. I thought it was just me? I hope you enjoy the read!

*Installs anti-stalker alarm* >>...
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Guess not, haha... ^-^ Had a couple questions... well, mostly about the girl Olivia has to kill. Is that an actual girl or are we talking about Nettala? :p Either way, I had figured the rangers have camps outside the city since they are usually ran as a division meant for outside threats. Mostly bandits and wild/feral animals though and I'd say they're quite mysterious in how they deal with their problems - mostly in the sense that there are rumors that some of them can calm even a raging bear with a touch. :p

Anyways, I think once I understand where you imaged the target to be and who she would be, I can try and get Nettala in that direction - though them having the stand-off in the wilds somewhere might be best, so no one sees the Outsider. :p

Edit: Also, loving the intro~
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Oh questions! Lets see if I can't answer them!

The girl is not Nettala. The girl happens to be the daughter of the ranger Olivia was sent to kill. The client that gave the contract for the ranger wants to make sure all loose ends are taken care of, which includes family. The wife was already deceased, which left only children as the loose end. Rest assured! This will end of one of two ways. I will skip over the actual assassination, for I believe violence against minors in anyway is horrid and should be a straight ticket to whatever bad place one believes in. The other way is your character somehow intervening.

Namely, what happens here is open. However, I shall write no details whatsoever, if your characters does not intervene. Hopefully that clarifies and prevents and uncomfortableness? I just thought the scenario totally fit within the story :/...

If you want them to encounter one another outside the city, that's totally fine! I'll just go with the first option and think of a way to get Olivia out there!

Why thank you! Intros are always super pressured for me, for my partner will either love it or hate it. That kind of sets the tone for everything else xD!
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Hm!~ Yeah, I have no problem with the scenario - it does fit and it's cool that you want to stay away from describing the scene. I like the idea of her intervening - my idea was that Nettala's best strength is her ability to track and spot things, so maybe she glimpses Olivia just the moment before she shoots her pistol or dives in front if she uses her blade and saves the girl... then runs after Olivia and since her tracking is so good, it becomes really hard to shake her and that's probably why Olivia would turn around eventually and have a stand off. ^.^

I'll try and come up with a post sometime today for you then!~ Setting up where the girl is and where Nettala is at the moment. Might take a little though... um... a bit flustered by something personal, so... :p Nothing bad however... and my stomach is growling at me. o.o But it'll definitely be posted today (for me, so possibly morning for you later).
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Oh please could we do that instead? I love anti-heros, but this scenario is a bit much for me to handle! I honestly hated myself for writing this prelude to the scene, but it fits so well! I'm just saying! It's god awful, but ... like seriously!

Lets have an urban chase :)!

Oh do take your time! Take care of yourself first :)! I'll be right here :)!
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Heheh... it's fine. ^.^ Stuff like that happen in real life. Maybe Nettala will get through to her at some point - who knows. Anyways, sorry for the slow reply... after you went to bed, wifey came home, talked about some 'stuff' (^.-), then I took the kitty to the bedroom and watched Law & Order. We're about to eat dinner soon... and I should start working on it after!~
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