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I added some more to the personality and added a picture. I also finished up the skills, which I forgot to do before. In reference to the history, I would like him to discover the circumstances of his mother's death later on. And it's no trouble really, I am just starting to expand my writing skills. Thank you. :)

Also, do you think my powers are too weak, especially in comparison to my half brother's?

@expllo Hello to you too brother.


"The Emperor of all Potatoes" >.>

State your intentions, so-called ruler of all potatoes.
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Also, do you think my powers are too weak, especially in comparison to my half brother's?


If you're referring to my character, Cole, then I'll inform you that his abilities are heavily watered down. So in terms of strength of the abilities, his are probably weaker. Though Cole is dangerous by the way he uses his abilities, not the strength of them (Just in case anyone reads this and gets any funny ideas <_______>)
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<Snipped quote by Kartoffel>

If you're referring to my character, Cole, then I'll inform you that his abilities are heavily watered down. So in terms of strength of the abilities, his are probably weaker. Though Cole is dangerous by the way he uses his abilities, not the strength of them (Just in case anyone reads this and gets any funny ideas <_______>)


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I added some more to the personality and added a picture. I also finished up the skills, which I forgot to do before. In reference to the history, I would like him to discover the circumstances of his mother's death later on. And it's no trouble really, I am just starting to expand my writing skills. Thank you. :)

Also, do you think my powers are too weak, especially in comparison to my half brother's?

@expllo Hello to you too brother.


Also can't really tell how weak your powers are since you only provide links instead of describing how strong and what limitations you have for your powers.
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Also can't really tell how weak your powers are since you only provide links instead of describing how strong and what limitations you have for your powers.


That is an excellent point. I shall elaborate on that immediately.
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I see your still improving your character. I just wanted to drop by and say that it's coming along and getting better. I'll give the "Okay" when your done. (And when it's not 3 AM in the morning 0.o).
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I am done, btw. Unless you think something else is needed.
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Alright, accepted!
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Okay. How do you think I should join in? Because to me that is the hardest part.
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Run into skylar, she'll kindly rip his throat out
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That's Mean
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U wot m8
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I'm just wondering when someone will post in the IC
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Don't wanna quick post so I'll abstain ~
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Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I guess I will take the fall so none of our kind GMs have to be mean!

@Kartoffel That post was beyond miniscule. Although there is no rules directly addressing this, I think we've all taken it as the unspoken rules of engagement that you do at least do two paragraphs. I'm sorry for being really mean but that post is simply unacceptable! >.<
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First of all, you are right, there are no rules adressing this. Also, I honestly have bo idea what else to write there. So if you decide to actually be helpful, I am open to suggestions. I'm sorry for being mean.

P.S. All my posts will definitely not be this short, I just wanted to see how things would play out from there before posting further.
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First of all, you are right, there are no rules adressing this. Also, I honestly have bo idea what else to write there. So if you decide to actually be helpful, I am open to suggestions. I'm sorry for being mean.

P.S. All my posts will definitely not be this short, I just wanted to see how things would play out from there before posting further.


Hmmm...

Well you could definitely include a lot more information about how he got there. If you didn't want to show that off just yet then maybe you could have a bit more detail on him stumbling up the hill and reacting to the sight of the camp? Maybe you could show what happens when he wakes up in the medical bay thing?
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Hmmm...maybe. I might show run to the camp, but I would like to see some response from the GM before getting fed ambrosia and all that. Thanks fr the suggestions!
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@Kartoffel Probably should have looked at the other posts beforehand go get a better idea of what you should do for a first post. There are quite a few characters who were open to RP for a better first post to be provided.

I'm not even sure if there are still people near the camp entrance to see your character pass out.

An entrance post in an RP is hard to get off, but it should never be this short unless in the Free Section of the forum. If you're having difficulty coming up with something to post you could always wait until something comes to you.

Just trying to help you out here, but I agree with our Potato friend.
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I have edited it some. Lemme know if y'all think it still needs improvement. :)
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