I figured, that while we might have made characters that are badasses, they're still kids so they're gonna fuck up a lot in the beginning, especially when being thrown into shit they've never dealt, both figuratively and, in Nor's case, literally.
Posted Kanika being a total pimp and repeatedly bitch-smacking a King Taijitu with random body parts. she's pretty unflappable, and she knows how to kill things. unfortunately, that's about all she's got, causing physical harm to others. Not exactly the most charismatic of indivduals, you know?
and Kanika. Oh, and because I've been playing WAY too much fallout, Kanika's SPECIAL stats: S:10 P:5 E:5 C:3 I:5 A:6(+1) L:5 traits:small frame, heavy handed Just because she's adorable doesn't make her likeable. except to me.
No offense, Gingy, but you need to find more ways of referring to your character than just his first name. i counted the word turner being used at least 20 times in 2 paragraphs. try things like 'the student' or 'the effeminate young man' adds a bit of variety, you know? makes it more interesting to read.
god damnit. everyone keeps telling me how great is. I'd like some opinions on Kanika's fight scene, by the way. to much? too little? star wars joke too out of place?
Ranulf's just going to use his gauntlets to blast down to the ground at mach speeds, creating a giant crater while throwing a few Grimm everywhere from the force.
@The Fox WithoutHaha, I saw it too, it's all right. I don't know though, it didn't seem like a Jurassic Park film though to me, like it tried to be but just wasn't. It felt different to me