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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
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Not a bad idea but this also has to be the magic that damages the binding spell on the main characters powers. While a slave crown (to quote Final Fantasy XI) would be both an interesting idea to toy with and something to be kept out of the king's hands I don't see how it would be able to do damage to another kind of enchantment.


Oh you're talking about the item she touched. Still, naming conventions. I do suggest you make and abide by them once you do, especially if you're writing this for the long run.

Next, I think the item should be a more neutral force, and part of something greater. Like...

Fragment of Riviera: The Riviera is an object of myth and legend, and is said to be the essence of an ancient civilization that used magic as it's power source. The Riviera is not a single object though, writings found within ruins tell of them being used to power cities, suggesting that they were numerous. In some ruins lay fragments of these mystical power sources, though due to being fragments, their magical power is continuously being emanated, powering the ruins around them, and keeping traps active. Many of the ruins with fragments within them are too dangerous for any normal exploration party, so skilled warriors are sent after them instead. Because these items emanate so much magic, it is dangerous to touch them. Many have reported to have turned into ether, the raw essence of magic, due to their bodies being overloaded, and any defensive spells were broken, and any binding spells applied to it were simply overpowered. They can only be handled with a special satchel that suppresses magic.

A fragment of Riviera can earn someone two lifetimes worth of money if they sell it to the right people, all the same they are in demand by nations to possess, in hopes of having enough to create their very own full Riviera one day.

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  • Power source, can be the focus of an energy crisis.
  • Possesses huge raw magical power anyway, so can be used for death machines or whatnot.
  • Generally a power source, small fragments could even be used for character's magical weapons.
  • Also very valueable, if there is a rush for these, you can easily introduce thief or outlaw characters, or characters who want money.
  • Has historical and magic-scientific properties, allowing those kinds of characters to also become involved.
  • Ruins containing them are dangerous, making the main character and her partner's entry into one have more sense, and discovery of the fragment, more exclusive.
  • Due to being raw and overpowering other magics with pure magical power of it's own, can easily be what breaks the main character's magical bindings.


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I'd like to point out that I did admit to not reading the prompt, AND say that I only made it because Lugu was looking to be the only person posting for that Contest. When a third entry was made, I did look for a delete button, but there wasn't one.
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I'm glad my goofball entry went over so well.

I think Harine had a couple of ideas he wanted to field for the next contest.
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Just to point out for Greyson and Daniel. If you play two person cheat both people always know what the other has cause if it's not in there hand or it wasn't recently played then it is in the other person's hand. Using this you can always tell when the other person is cheating.
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I'm glad my goofball entry went over so well.

I think Harine had a couple of ideas he wanted to field for the next contest.


Yeh. Mehbeh.
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Does that mean you're not putting a contest up?
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Does that mean you're not putting a contest up?


I maybe perhaps am or am not considering possibly.
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See now your just stringing together non committal words.
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See now your just stringing together non committal words.


Your face.
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Posted, finally. Not my best, as I am tired.

Also question for everybody. Have any of you ever see Blazblue or Gurren Lagann RP's appear on the guild?
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Posted, finally. Not my best, as I am tired.

Also question for everybody. Have any of you ever see Blazblue or Gurren Lagann RP's appear on the guild?


Hey um, Emerald didn't stay with the group, she ran away. And she hasn't joined team MODA yet either, that doesn't actually happen till after they get back from their mission.
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Hm. Was I ignored...?
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Hey um, Emerald didn't stay with the group, she ran away. And she hasn't joined team MODA yet either.




I thought she ran out but was just outside of the dining hall which is why I RPed her following the tour. Would have been better if you specified where she ran to. Also Sarina is a senior and an aide to Goodwitch so she would know what team Em would be a part of. Em is even listed on the characters tab as a part of Moda.

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I thought she ran out but was just outside of the dining hall which is why I RPed her following the tour. Would have been better if you specified where she ran to. Also Sarina is a senior and an aide to Goodwitch so she would know what team Em would be a part of. Em is even listed on the characters tab as a part of Moda.


She's running like hell, she isn't gonna stop running once she gets outside the door. Don't bunny my character please.

Also, no one knows that Emmy is gonna be with team MODA because that hasn't been decided yet, Aurellius, the guy she is replacing on the team, hasn't even left the team yet IC. So no she can't possibly know that.
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She's running like hell, she isn't gonna stop running once she gets outside the door. Don't bunny my character please.

Also, no one knows that Emmy is gonna be with team MODA because that hasn't been decided yet, Aurellius, the guy she is replacing on the team, hasn't even left the team yet IC. So no she can't possibly know that.


I'm guessing I should refrain from writing a new post until you two resolve this.

EDIT: Also, wait, were all of us still in the dining hall when that little scuffle took place?
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I'm guessing I should refrain from writing a new post until you two resolve this.

EDIT: Also, wait, were all of us still in the dining hall when that little scuffle took place?


I thought so, at least.

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I'm guessing I should refrain from writing a new post until you two resolve this.

EDIT: Also, wait, were all of us still in the dining hall when that little scuffle took place?


Yeah.
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I thought so, at least.


Oh, whoops, my bad. Super tired me somehow thought that Shadow hadn't addressed the fact that the fight had taken place, but it was totally addressed.
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Wait, fight? What fight? o3o
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Well, okay, whatever you want to call the thing that just happened between Shiro, Gratia, etc.
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