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Checking it out now.

In the meantime: @MonkeyPants has been accepted.
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@AbysmalDemon, your primary species are Humans, correct? You might want to illustrate that point more clearly. You all but imply it in the culture section, but never come right out and say it. As well, the amount of detail across the application is lacking to an extent where I'm having trouble perceiving the faction as a whole. I have no idea how large it is, what it's agenda is, how it's organized, etcetera. In general, the entire sheet is lacking a great deal of detail normally expected of advanced applications. I'll accept it as a work in progress, but until it's more fleshed out I cannot approve it.

Additionally, I'm not entirely sure I understand the progression of events described in your Governance section. The True Vacuum has only existed for four weeks, but you imply that an entirely new faction had time to be founded, splinter, reunited by a charismatic general, fall apart again once he died, and then be conquered. Which probably /could/ be squeezed into four weeks, I just wanted to make sure you knew.

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Ok... Will edit it. Also what is the max size a whole faction could be?
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And by agenda I assume you mean how it runs on a day to day basis
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This is still an absolutely massive WIP, I just want to get what I've thought out already onto a sheet.

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Ok... Will edit it. Also what is the max size a whole faction could be?

And by agenda I assume you mean how it runs on a day to day basis


The max size for factions hasn't been firmly established. I'm mainly playing wait and see for the moment in order to get a feeling for what sort of scene will be established by the factions, so make them as big as you feel is necessary for the moment (as long as it's not ridiculously huge for no reason). Just keep in mind I might ask you to make them smaller depending on how things turn out.

And yes, more information on their internal affairs, goals, operations, etctera.
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Is it ok if I make a separate section for operations
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Is it ok if I make a separate section for operations

Also note, this template is just a base. If you're more comfortable with another format or style, use that - just make sure you cover all the bases listed below.


Absolutely.
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Gotcha
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I'm getting kind of tired, and I've made about three CS today, so I'm gonna have this up, by tomorrow
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I'm getting kind of tired, and I've made about three CS today, so I'm gonna have this up, by tomorrow


Take your time, the IC proper won't be starting for a few days.
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I am here.
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@terminal instead of being an actual planet, could Abysmalia be, a mass(very large mass) in space.
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Like it's all manmade
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@Terminal4 weeks is too brief and expecting people to scout out for 70 kilo-lightyears would be awfully idealistic.
But I get it. So basically we are set straight after the entire mess, right?
Kind of expected that.
Oh well, then I just fall back to one of my other civs.
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@Terminal4 weeks is too brief and expecting people to scout out for 70 kilo-lightyears would be awfully idealistic.


40,000 lightyears. Keep the speed limit in mind. In space volumetrics that would be 33,500,000,000,000 lightyears. I did not say that's how much you had scouted - merely that there was a potential 40,000 lightyear envelop of space that could be scouted in that time. Feel free to have scouted none of it by the time the RP starts.

instead of being an actual planet, could Abysmalia be, a mass(very large mass) in space.

Like it's all manmade
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Here is a list of general rulings on points of contention common to most Space NRPs. These are /general/ rules, and I am open to occasional exceptions as long as there is good reasoning and intent behind them. These will be judged on a per-case basis. Also note, some of the figures listed here are subject to change.

-No dyson spheres or similar megastructures. Space elevators are ok.


While a planet-sized mass is nowhere near the same scale as a Dyson Sphere, I'm afraid it still qualifies as a megastructure. You can have a planet with a surface area that is 100% urbanized (covered entirely in developed cities and industrial infrastructure), and you can have large structural installations in orbit around the planet (such as a space elevator or orbital ring if you want to get ambitious), but unless you have a good reason for having any entirely artificial planet I would prefer if you didn't.
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Here is my massive work in progress nation:
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Ok well I redid it, there will probably be some more flaws but I will be happy to change them

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<Snipped quote by Willy Vereb>

40,000 lightyears. Keep the speed limit in mind. In space volumetrics that would be 33,500,000,000,000 lightyears. I did not say that's how much you had scouted - merely that there was a potential 40,000 lightyear envelop of space that could be scouted in that time. Feel free to have scouted none of it by the time the RP starts.
Yeah, that was a typo.
Anyways, that would sound overly idealistic and quite unbelievable.
Not just because it needs 4 weeks of nonstop travel to all directions and expect that somebody has enough ships and/or long enough sensor coverage to make it possible but because as I said it'd be quite unwise to make FTL speeds right at the limits which your NRP allows.
Good rule of thumb could be around the fraction of this.
Or just leave it vague when there's no particular significance to it.

As others said this game would eliminate many of the issues with space NRPs which is space itself. It's huge and our empires would be most likely just tiny dots in the galaxy.
Still, another reason why 40 kly radius of explored area is problematic because I suppose most of us wish the first contact situations to play out during the IC.
Of course I'm not complaining to you. Partially I didn't even write this for you but to inform the other players and avoid future issues.

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So we scout 10000 cubic light years per week?
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