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Neito was born into the Royal Nobility of Naranai. Once he reached four years of age he was given a shiny Vulpix named Burūfokkusu as a protector. At the age of seven he began to learn royal combat and mastered it at the age of Twelve. One year later he received the royal crest to signify his claim to the thrown and his ascent into his teen years. When he reached sixteen his Vulpix was evolved to a Nintails. Two months after his sixteenth birthday the Kings younger brother forced a Coup D'Etat onto the king and was successful. Once the brother became king, he issued a decree stating that the previous king and all of his family were to be executed. After hearing this the former king gave his sward, Nibuidesu, to Neito along with a healthy sum of money and told him to run. Since then Neito has been wandering from country to country fighting anyone he views as corrupt.


So 50 years ago the Xuirong region got destroyed and all the inhabitants fled to Argent thus becoming migrants/refugees mostly in the city while the rest of the locals spread themselves around the country. Because of this I assume that most of your Royalty history would be up in the air at the moment since you are not of Argentian decent and I doubt that an immigrant would be able to become a member of the royal family so quickly.

Other than that, I don't see any other issues with the character. Just need to work on a new back story as such. Refer back to the OP and have a re-read so you know you're not missing any other important details.
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On the weekends, I will finally make a post depicting how we are heading out, with specified timeskips around. Make your post before then!
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So I've been meaning to ask: has anybody invented potions yet? Maybe in olde tyme perfume bottles instead of aerosol cans?
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In the past, it would have been mostly berries, spices, drinks and items like that. That's actually info from the Pokemon Lore.
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So I've been meaning to ask: has anybody invented potions yet? Maybe in olde tyme perfume bottles instead of aerosol cans?


No. We pick berries from the wild.
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So can I still be nobility?
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So can I still be nobility?


Nobility are NPCs, that was what was stated. Well, you could be a bastard Prince or Princess...

... or if you have any other ideas, do share. I'll see what plans you have, so execute your ideas.
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<Snipped quote by Naton156>

Nobility are NPCs, that was what was stated. Well, you could be a bastard Prince or Princess...

... or if you have any other ideas, do share. I'll see what plans you have, so execute your ideas.


Is it possible to be a bastard child but you don't know about it? That could get around the problem of pulling rank on the other players.
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So I was thinking that I could be the child of a king but then a coup d'etat happened and the royalty switch to the kings brother. Son was nobility but then it switched and my father's direct decendents fell from nobility. If this is ok then could you help me come up with a home town that it happened?
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So I was thinking that I could be the child of a king but then a coup d'etat happened and the royalty switch to the kings brother. Son was nobility but then it switched and my father's direct decendents fell from nobility. If this is ok then could you help me come up with a home town that it happened?


Plausible.
Well, I'll analyse motifs before coming up with a name.
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Plausible.
Well, I'll analyse motifs before coming up with a name.


I google translate into different languages. It helps me pick names that are meaningful but still sound exotic and not cliche.
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Tengu-shi? Hakuginron?
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Ok but what region would that be in?
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Ok but what region would that be in?


Either Argent or Phoenicis. Your choice.
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Ok, so my home row will be hakuginron located in argent. Does that sound good?
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So will he be joining the Leonias group then?
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Ok, lets try this again. This is my new character sheet and i am putting it up for approval.

"I will Fight for you if you fight for me!"

Username:

Naton

Name

Neito

Age:

22

Gender:

Male

Place of Origin

Hakuginron located in Argent

Weapons

Kesshite Nibuidesu
An ancient Demascus Steel Blade passed down through the family from father to son. The blade is sharp enough to slice a piece of falling silk in half and strong enough to split stones without dulling.


Pokemon:


Burūfokkusu
Shiny Ninetales
Female
Fire Blast, Inferno, Extrasensory, Faint Attack
Because Burūfokkusu was given to Neito as a child, she shares a very strong bond with him. She is protective, loyal, and Brave


Kageneko
Umbreon
Male
Pursuit, Shadow Ball, Assurance, Natural Gift
Neito found Kageneko when he was looking for food. Kageneko was badly injured and Neito brought him back to health. Now Kageneko is loyal to Neito but is suspicious of other humans and will often eye them until he is sure that they are not a threat.

Appearance:

Hight: 5'6"
Hair: Long Sleek Dark Red
Eyes: Piercing Green
Weight: 150 lbs
Tattoo: Royal Family Crest of Hakuginron on Right upper bicep.

Personality

Neito Is a strong willed individual. He is thought out, meticulous, and patient ,but because of his past, if anyone mocks him or his father then he becomes impulsive and irrational.

Short Biography

Neito was born into the Royal Nobility of Hakuginron located in Argent. Once he reached four years of age he was given a shiny Vulpix named Burūfokkusu as a protector. At the age of seven he began to learn royal combat and mastered it at the age of Twelve. One year later he received the royal crest to signify his claim to the thrown and his ascent into his teen years. When he reached sixteen his Vulpix was evolved to a Nintails. Two months after his sixteenth birthday the Kings younger brother forced a Coup D'Etat onto the king and was successful. Once the brother became king, he issued a decree stating that the previous king and all of his family were to be executed. After hearing this the former king gave his sward, Nibuidesu, to Neito along with a healthy sum of money and told him to run. As Neito ran he looked back in time to see his father sliced down by the royal guard. Now that he was no longer noble and did not have a place to go he began to wander. Since then Neito has been wandering from country to country fighting anyone he views as corrupt.

Other:

Theme song:Crossing Field

Neito can survive on small amounts of food for long periods of time. He also has an extraordinary sense for battle.
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sorry ive been gone so long been helping my sister move. im sure yall have moved on without me probably so ill just resign. good luck yall. have fun. :3
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'Place of Origin' is supposed to be just Argent. 'Hakuginron' can be stated in your bio.

'Burufokkusu is literally just 'Blue Fox'. Did you want to name it 'Aokitsune'? It doesn't really matter much but...

Well, I think it'll be good to accept. Post them in the Character thread.

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With the GM looking at starting up another roleplay and hasn't returned to this one, I believe that now may be the time where I might start looking for a new RP. :\

Sorry guys
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