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Looking at Helltank's character John seems to be a bit inferior, except for the part where she's a little girl and John is a genius scientist. Then again, pretty much every mutation John possesses has a nasty surprise.
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Looking at Helltank's character John seems to be a bit inferior, except for the part where she's a little girl and John is a genius scientist. Then again, pretty much every mutation John possesses has a nasty surprise.


John has flexibility of attack and has a wide range of attack angles and types. Alison basically goes "hit hin, then shoot him, then hit him". Also, I believe John is more durable and the intelligence gap(homeschooled 11 year old vs genius) is a huge advantage.

I would say they are roughly equal, Alison's raw power and unpredictable nature may offer her an edge against monsters.
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I could be very wrong. But would this suit Darius?

I think that would work. I might toss in Meltdown by Stromae and Kingdom by Charli XCX and Simon Lebon.
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Took me some time to get inspiration, but here it is.


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@helltank: Five times the strength of an Olympic weightlifter is a bit much for starting characters. The strength of the tentacle should be reduced to three times the strength of an average adult male, same as what the armor gives your character. The tentacle's reach and flexibility is enough of an advantage to count as a separate ability.

@akje: First, you should start with two elemental cores. If you only want Earth, you could start with two Earth cores.

Second, Stone Sense has to have a range limit, because there's a limit on how far you can extend your magic. For now, a kilometer should be about as far as you can stretch it, and the image should get weaker the further away it is from you. Also, you may not be able to see through earthen materials that are already infused with magic more powerful than your own.

Third, Earth Glide is kind of awkward and vague. You make it sound like some limited form of intangibility that only works inside earthen materials, which isn't really possible. Due to how intangibility works, you either clip through all physical matter or none. True intangibility also usually needs the Aether element, or at least Light or Dark; you can't really pull it off with Earth. I'd say you should change it so that the ability uses magic to cause the earth in your character's immediate vicinity to flow like water, so that he can "swim" through it. With this change, the ability would create some detectable ripples, but it would no longer affect the user if the rock he is in gets split apart. Also, you should know that the ability might not work well on earth that's already infused with magic more powerful than your own, just like the previous ability, though you don't have to add this to the description.

@Grimoire: The only thing I don't like about your character sheet is the vagueness of the backstory. Where was your character from, and what ethnicity? Remember that he must've been from modern Earth. Also, he has no last name. Does he come from a culture where most people don't have family names?

Looking at Helltank's character John seems to be a bit inferior, except for the part where she's a little girl and John is a genius scientist. Then again, pretty much every mutation John possesses has a nasty surprise.


Aside from what Helltank already addressed, John can regenerate from wounds, and inflict a number of debilitating debuffs. On the other hand, Alison has no real ways of healing her wounds or recovering from debuffs; a few good hits from John's paralytic claws might be enough to do her in. So it should come down to a matter of tactics, with neither of them being strictly superior.

Also, I'm nerfing Alison's tentacle strength, so there's that too.
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I'm ready to post Grant's next action in the fight against the plantbear but don't wan't to cut out @Magnato.
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I'm ready to post Grant's next action in the fight against the plantbear but don't wan't to cut out @Magnato.


I will give @Magnato the remainder of today to post. After that, I'm going to proceed with the fight. If he doesn't post, I'll assume that Meredith was paralyzed by fear and uncertainty or something during the fight.
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-curious face- Is cloning things possible?
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Predator's strength has been edited to be in line with Alison's armored strength.

Alison has no real ways of healing her wounds
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She has her life-stealing orbs.

Also: can I ask which group I am placed in? If time delay is an issue I will just assume Alison slept in her pod during thr delay.
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-curious face- Is cloning things possible?


Generally, no. To "clone" something, you basically need to scan its inner workings, then build a replica yourself. You can't skip all the steps and just automatically get a replica of your target.

She has her life-stealing orbs.


I know. The orbs, however, cannot heal any injuries that the body itself is not capable of healing, e.g. lost limbs or organs. To be able to restore lost limbs and organs, you need some kind of explicit regeneration or healing ability.

Also: can I ask which group I am placed in? If time delay is an issue I will just assume Alison slept in her pod during thr delay.


You'll probably be placed in the same group as the two other people that signed up. A new group.
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Will the groups ever meet?
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Will the groups ever meet?


Yes, they will meet sooner or later. Exactly when, I don't know; that'll be up to the plot that hasn't been fully decided.
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Any in-universe reason for a group of only 3 people?
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Any in-universe reason for a group of only 3 people?


No. In-universe, people are paired up more or less randomly, in groups of 3 to 6.
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First, you should start with two elemental cores. If you only want Earth, you could start with two Earth cores.

Second, Stone Sense has to have a range limit, because there's a limit on how far you can extend your magic. For now, a kilometer should be about as far as you can stretch it, and the image should get weaker the further away it is from you. Also, you may not be able to see through earthen materials that are already infused with magic more powerful than your own.

Third, Earth Glide is kind of awkward and vague. You make it sound like some limited form of intangibility that only works inside earthen materials, which isn't really possible. Due to how intangibility works, you either clip through all physical matter or none. True intangibility also usually needs the Aether element, or at least Light or Dark; you can't really pull it off with Earth. I'd say you should change it so that the ability uses magic to cause the earth in your character's immediate vicinity to flow like water, so that he can "swim" through it. With this change, the ability would create some detectable ripples, but it would no longer affect the user if the rock he is in gets split apart. Also, you should know that the ability might not work well on earth that's already infused with magic more powerful than your own, just like the previous ability, though you don't have to add this to the description.


I agree with your judgement. I'll add the character to the character list with the proposed changes.
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So.. Am I in a pod in the second shrine as well? Or am I alone in house 3?
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You're in Shrine 3 with me. Your tankiness should synergize well with Alison's lightning bruiser-ness.
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You're in Shrine 3 with me. Your tankiness should synergize well with Alison's lightning bruiser-ness.


Tanky? I don't like the sound of that. Makes me sound like a target.

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Tanky? I don't like the sound of that. Makes me sound like a target.



They'd have about 5 seconds to do their worst to you, because the moment they target you Alison's going to be right on top of them with her tentacle monster.
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They'd have about 5 seconds to do their worst to you, because the moment they target you Alison's going to be right on top of them with her tentacle monster.


First time the promise of tentacles has sounded like a relief.
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