Woohoo, two CSs pop up between me leaving to see a movie and get dinner and getting home.
@Weird Tales
Alright, so WCJ is a solid character. I have some concerns though. With his power of summoning toon constructs, what's the limit of strength in these toon characters. Do they wield toonforce? Thus far the only experiences I've had with players using any toon related powers have really soured my taste for the power. I'm also just struggling to see the place that toon powers would have in the established universe.
The personality section doesn't really tell me much about him. It just tells me that he is a goofball and everything beyond that is something that a healthy minded person would share.
I'd also appreciate seeing WCJ be a bit more fleshed out. I'd like to get a good idea of who he is as a person and what he stands for. As for the awakening portion of the CS, think of it more as a writing sample than simple an event to mention.
Also, these powers are in no way genetic. All powers are bestowed upon metas by either the Alpha or the Omega.
@Apollo
Digging Sayuri.
So, first thing- If she's often distracted, wouldn't that be more along the lines of ADD/ADHD if she had a disorder? OCD is less about distractions and more about a compulsive need to maintain certain rituals, like having to wash your hands in scalding water every 20 minutes or having to remove her shoe laces whenever she takes off her shoes.*
Beyond that, I really like the character. Great job. Accepted. I'll be in touch via PM shortly.
*it should be noted that while I have some first hand experience with the mentioned mental illnesses, I only have a very basic understanding of them
@Weird Tales
Alright, so WCJ is a solid character. I have some concerns though. With his power of summoning toon constructs, what's the limit of strength in these toon characters. Do they wield toonforce? Thus far the only experiences I've had with players using any toon related powers have really soured my taste for the power. I'm also just struggling to see the place that toon powers would have in the established universe.
The personality section doesn't really tell me much about him. It just tells me that he is a goofball and everything beyond that is something that a healthy minded person would share.
I'd also appreciate seeing WCJ be a bit more fleshed out. I'd like to get a good idea of who he is as a person and what he stands for. As for the awakening portion of the CS, think of it more as a writing sample than simple an event to mention.
Also, these powers are in no way genetic. All powers are bestowed upon metas by either the Alpha or the Omega.
@Apollo
Digging Sayuri.
So, first thing- If she's often distracted, wouldn't that be more along the lines of ADD/ADHD if she had a disorder? OCD is less about distractions and more about a compulsive need to maintain certain rituals, like having to wash your hands in scalding water every 20 minutes or having to remove her shoe laces whenever she takes off her shoes.*
Beyond that, I really like the character. Great job. Accepted. I'll be in touch via PM shortly.
I was wondering, that storm that she caused, could that be a sort of historical event for the town? Like maybe it's known as the Great Freak Storm of 2013? Just a thought I had haha.
*it should be noted that while I have some first hand experience with the mentioned mental illnesses, I only have a very basic understanding of them