【Fighting style】
Conservative. He's not particularly fond of fighting, however all males part of the Ooi bloodline must. Meaning he will play defensive, although when in a rage his true skill shows. Most blinded by rage tend to stray from their skills and fall back on more instinctive reactions. Douzen, however, hones all the skills and manages to remain sane and collective on the outside, while raising Hell inside.

Jutsu name: Hell's Wrath
Rank: B
Range: 1 yard circumference around user
Description: After placing one's hand on the ground, the User channels their energy through the Earth, Sapping the the life force around a small area. After doing such, the user pulls his/her hand from the earth with it's energy flowing around the palm. The user then combines that energy with the fire elemental affinity to create a small ball of fire. Once the ball comes in contact with a target, there is a small explosion that occurs that may inflict more internal damage. This may also knock the target back a few feet.

Jutsu name: Hell Hound
Rank: C
Range: 50 yards
Description: Douzen kneels to the ground and cuffs his mouth with both hands to perform this jutsu. He releases fire chakra from the mouth in the shape of a flaming wolf. The wolf charges forward to collide with the target causing a semi-small explosion that may leave 2-3rd degree burns.

A Rank:
Fire Release - Blaze Eruption

B Rank:
Fire Release - Fireball

C Rank:
Fire Release - Flame Flower
Fire Release - Pheonix Flower Jutsu

【History】

Museigan, however, would not let his son die with him. He filled a book with all his teachings and had asked Atemi to give it to Douzen. He had always seen great potential in his son and insisted that he become a ninja. Atemi also possessed the same feelings about the boy, so she obeyed her husband and handed the book over as promised. Douzen absorbed the information and translated it into action beautifully as a child, but lost a lot of that aggression and drive after getting over his father. Atemi never let him stray from the ninja way. after observing the boy's behavior, she knew the case and decided to put him through ninja school.

I think I do want to mention that it definetely is an improvement.

@Assassin

1. Pictures are preferred.
2. Even if you don't want to use a picture, we want a written descriptive of the characters appearance.

Reason for that is simple: I need to envision him, like what he looks like. And, to do that.. well, it might be useful to know what he looks like

3. I see you've just joined and thus, I reckon you have no idea how BB codes work, right? Well, actually you got the hider working but all the other BB code is gone.

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[hider=Character name]
[center][img]image url here[/img]
Your characters picture should go above. Delete this afterwards.
[i]“Character motto here”[/i]

[b]Character appearance description here[/b][/center]

[u][b]Personnel files.[/b][/u]
[i]Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.[/i]

[indent]【[U]Full Name[/U]】
[I]Character name[/I]

【[U]Alias[/U]】
[i]Nicknames and/or callsigns[/i]

【[U]Age[/U]】
[i]14+[/i]

【[U]Sex[/U]】
[i]Male/female/?[/i]

【[U]Sexuality[/U]】
[i]Self explanatory[/i]

【[U]Birthplace[/U]】
[i]Can be any village, canon preferably.[/i]

【[U]Bloodline[/U]】
[i]What bloodline is your character from?[/i]

【[U]Rank[/U]】
[i]Chūnin, unless permission was given for something else[/i][/indent]

[u][b]Psych. report.[/b][/u]
[i]Medical secrecy applies.[/i]

[indent]【[U]Personality[/U]】
[i]How would your character behave? Ticks, behaviour in positive situations, neutral situations or negative situations, behavior in emotional situations?[/i]

【[U]History[/U]】
[i]How does the characters history relate to personality? General history to be told here as well. Can be organised into childhood years (0 to 6), base school years (6 to 10-14, depending on graduation year) and highschool years (10-14 to 14-18).[/i]

【[U]Family ties[/U]】
[i]Describe shortly what type of family your character grew up in, how the ties were and how this influenced him. After that fill in form below, for all family members of importance, living or dead.[/i]

[b]Name | Relationship to character | Age, living place, profession and additional info [/b]

【[U]Dreams and fears[/U]】
[i]What does your character dream of achieving, and what does he fear in life? What are his hopes? Imagine this being extracted by a shinobi, what would he see?[/i][/indent]

[u][b]Combat reports.[/b][/u]
[i]Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.[/i]

[indent]【[U]Fighting style[/U]】
[i]Describe shortly what your characters fighting style is.[/i]

【[U]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/U]】
[b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b]
[i]'Sharingan' or 'Byakugan' or something fictional you made yourself.[/i]
[b][u]Description:[/u][/b]
[i]Explain what the technique does, how it works and what the manifested kekkei genkai looks like both in use, and outside of use. For example, the sharingan in battle shows through tomoe in the eye. The byakugan manifests itself through white eyes. Not neccesarily limited to vision/eye based, such as the bone bloodline limit Kimimaro uses. Pretty obvious manifestations.[/i]
[b][u]Strengths:[/u][/b]
[i]Describe your kekkei genkai's strengths here, what is it effective against? What is it power at currently?[/i]
[b][u]Weaknesses:[/u][/b]
[i]Describe how your kekkei genkai can be overcome, advertently or inadvertently. Be reasonable.[/i]

【[U]Ninja techniques[/U]】

[u]A rank techniques:[/u]
[i][url=narutopedialink]Name no jutsu here.[/url][/i]

[u]B rank techniques:[/u]
[i][url=narutopedialink]Name no jutsu here.[/url][/i]

[u]C rank techniques:[/u]
[i][url=narutopedialink]Name no jutsu here.[/url][/i]

[u]D-E rank techniques:[/u]
[i][url=narutopedialink]Name no jutsu here.[/url][/i]

【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】
[b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b]
[i]Be creative.[/i]
[b][u]Rank:[/u][/b]
[i]If you'd have to rank this technique, what rank would it be? A, B, C, D or E?[/i]
[b][u]Range:[/u][/b]
[i]At what range is this technique useful? You can measure this in 'long' 'medium' or 'short' but those are rather vague. If you want more depth, use a distance such as meters.[/i]
[b][u]Description:[/u][/b]
[i]Describe the jutsu, how it works and what it looks like. Explain potential damage that can be done with it, and describe the weaknesses and strength of the jutsu. Be as clear as you can.[/i]

Repeat form for as many jutsu as you can create, within the rules.

【[U]Weaponry, tools and objects.[/U]】
[b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b]
[i]Can be a term, i.e 'kunai' or it can be a self given name, i.e 'Revered Razor'.[/i]
[b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b]
[i]What type of weapon, tool or object is this? Sword, axe, kunai, knife, blade, tanto. Omit if the weapon, tool or object name already designates this.[/i]
[b][u]Description:[/u][/b]
[i]Describe the weapon, tool or objects appearance, and describe it's potentials and weaknesses. tl;dr how powerful is it and what does it look like. Be reasonable.[/i][/indent]

[b]Omit any parts that are unnecesary for your character, or that you deem unimportant. Remove this when posting.[/b]
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Please copy paste this instead, and copy paste the info into this. It'll look much better than currently, and much more pleasant for both of us to look at (trust me when I say you'll feel better about yourself when you can make it look good mayne.. speaking from experience)

If you can do all this I'll take another look but you're missing some vital aspects here.