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i dont mind at all, and i'd love to get a copy.. i did not know you spoke Dutch that is awesome. you go right ahead and make it into a story, you've got my full permission to use Xaven as you see fit :)


Yep, I am from The Netherlands, Dutch is my first language. Thank you for the permission! And when I got a piece ready and translated, I'll send it to you in a PM! :D
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I was btw wondering, is the first night direct the night of the full moon ? Or is it like, the second or third night? I was personally thinking about making it the first night ?

And, now that is close to happening, also the new meeting between the friends will be happening soon... How are we gonna do that? I had thought of several senario's...

First of all to make clear: Vanessa and Lesly will be living together in a nice regular apartment in New york... The next senario's I had thought of:

1: Xaven has a job a pizza deliverer, Lesly opens the door and sees his name, she pays him and tells Vanessa that the pizza deliverer had the same name as her diary and Vanessa rushes outside but is too late by like, five second and Xaven just turned around a corner.

2: They meet when Vanessa and Lesley are passing out flyers for a 50% off coupon on a photo shoot for pet and owner.

3: Vanessa is doing a 'skaters' shoot with Lesley and Xaven is with Drake and Ralphie at that skating park and Lesley falls for Drake and go's try to grab his attention by acting like she falls. She does actually fall and Vanessa runs to her friend and Xaven and she kinda bump their heads to each other when they both wanna help Lesley up.
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yea, its going to be the first night.. im with you on that and im not sure on the meeting afterward. i like the pizza one, that would be funny. i thought we said something about the uncle making her forget Xaven? though i've been thinking about how he could do that.. anyway.

hm, what if his uncle told Xaven she died from his wild attack, being the first turn and all, its emotional and what not. Xaven, beliving his uncle wanderers a bit, settles in New York. the others and his uncle are a pack, but Xaven wants nothing to do with it.. he becomes an Omega pretty much.
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Maybe we should quit that 'uncle makes Vanessa forget' thingy yes... I mean, that would make it all a little too much magical

As for the pack, I had thought that they would like really form a pack and that Marcus was gonna teach them on control and such. Or at least that Xaven, Drake and Ralphie would stick together.

As for the meeting, I thought that Xaven had like, with him being a werewolf, he just didn't want to bring Vanessa in danger and that he like: Doesn't know it was her that he had attacked. And that Vanessa had tried to contact him but had never found anything on him or that his parents also didn't know where he was.. I don't know..

We could also do that Xaven and the pack kinda moved to the house / ground of Vanessa's parents and when Vanessa goes there with Lesly that they find each other and Vanessa is like: What are you doing here?!

I do know that there is going to be a fight, like with words and walking away from each other and real hot heads
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okay, so we can cut out that making forget stuff..lol. and we can do that, Marcus teaching them. maybe the boys do form a pack, but they dont really need an Alpha. Marcus is more Omega, he prefers to be alone, and wandering the world. oh, i like that idea, them living in her family home and on the property, that will be perfect, and she comes there and is like ."wtf!!!"
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okay, so we can cut out that making forget stuff..lol. and we can do that, Marcus teaching them. maybe the boys do form a pack, but they dont really need an Alpha. Marcus is more Omega, he prefers to be alone, and wandering the world. oh, i like that idea, them living in her family home and on the property, that will be perfect, and she comes there and is like ."wtf!!!"


Totally, be like ''wtf!!!'' yes! :D

I totally like RPing with you since you really put your idea down! :D
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Totally, be like ''wtf!!!'' yes! :D

I totally like RPing with you since you really put your idea down! :D


i love RPing with you cause your just simply awesome
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i love RPing with you cause your just simply awesome


D'aaaaww, your cute too !! Thank you :) I am like, almost done with the prologue.. But I need to wait for my new Office to arrive before I can really continue with the writing ;)
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wanted to run by you some ideas on the change and how we are doing this.. for the Wolves i mean.

1. so we got like a magical like feel, where they are themselves one moment, then the next they are simply their wolf

2. full on Twilight style and they explode into their wolf form

3. painful slower going change that takes minutes to fully complete itself

or if you got ideas and such.. and how are we talking on the size of them in their wolf form
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wanted to run by you some ideas on the change and how we are doing this.. for the Wolves i mean.

1. so we got like a magical like feel, where they are themselves one moment, then the next they are simply their wolf

2. full on Twilight style and they explode into their wolf form

3. painful slower going change that takes minutes to fully complete itself

or if you got ideas and such.. and how are we talking on the size of them in their wolf form


I liked the Twilight style.. Because, they also kinda looked like huge dogs and stuff.. and it looked not so very painful. But then again, in Twilight they could change when ever they wanted.. a painful changing could also be a idea, as my idea for Vanessa's scar is that Xaven during his change hurts his paw / wrist and because of the confusion and pain he attacks Vanessa, scratches her shoulder and some of his blood end up in her wound and then his uncle tackles him and takes him along so he won't kill her or something. But then again, I don't want to hurt Xaven, Drake and Ralphie too much :P Ehm... Idk.. Which one do you think is the best?
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hm. Maybe we can tweak them all a bit. we'll say something like this. the first Turn is the most painful cause their bodies are awakening to their birthright. that is where we'll have all the bone snapping and breaking, the true painful first turn as the "wolf" awakens. after that, their turns go more like twilight, when their emotions get the better of them and they simply "erupt" into their wolf form. we'll say they can change whenever they want, but on the full moon, it forces a change no matter what, they have no control over it..

what do you think?
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hm. Maybe we can tweak them all a bit. we'll say something like this. the first Turn is the most painful cause their bodies are awakening to their birthright. that is where we'll have all the bone snapping and breaking, the true painful first turn as the "wolf" awakens. after that, their turns go more like twilight, when their emotions get the better of them and they simply "erupt" into their wolf form. we'll say they can change whenever they want, but on the full moon, it forces a change no matter what, they have no control over it..

what do you think?


I love that idea ! :D Plus just like in Twilight, wolves can only be born and not changed right?

Oh btw, I got the first piece of the story done and am now at the birthday morning from Vanessa :)
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right, they cant bite people and turn them, its not a curse its genetic, some got it some dont and it doesnt always "awaken" in those that do have it.. which is why some call it a gift or we can say the "moon's gift" to be chosen to become something more

and that is awesome, cant wait to read it.. even if we've RP'd it still..lol
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right, they cant bite people and turn them, its not a curse its genetic, some got it some dont and it doesnt always "awaken" in those that do have it.. which is why some call it a gift or we can say the "moon's gift" to be chosen to become something more

and that is awesome, cant wait to read it.. even if we've RP'd it still..lol


We could maybe, also for Vanessa, say that those who didn't awake their wolf, have the perks.. or one of them.. like: Seeing better, smelling better, hearing better.. For Vanessa her 'Perk'is that dogs listen to her even if they are the most hyperactive dog in the world.

And I totally understand how you feel.. I did mention that I changed the country? Plus Vanessa's study will be in England or Scotland or something I think. Makes more sense for the no contact period I think :)
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oh. i like that, maybe they dont fully awaken but they hold something. and with his blood in her, she kinda gets the same thing and can make dogs behave. i like that a lot..

and yep, you mentioned you changed it to the Netherlands which is all cool, and that works, cause it does make better sense with the no contact.
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oh. i like that, maybe they dont fully awaken but they hold something. and with his blood in her, she kinda gets the same thing and can make dogs behave. i like that a lot..

and yep, you mentioned you changed it to the Netherlands which is all cool, and that works, cause it does make better sense with the no contact.


How many times did I mention that you are awesome? Because... YOU ARE THE BEST!!
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lol.. hm *thinks* about once every two or three posts you mention how awesome i am and why thank you but im second only to your awesome self ;)
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You sure know how to make me blush! You are a great person and I dare to say that I consider you as a friend! Really, good RP partners are hard to find these days. And I am not talking about replying 30 seconds after my new post or something, no, I am talking about putting effort and depth in your posts and that always manage to give me a paragraph or two to read and imagine about :). I really get a 'Happy by Pharell William' feeling from it :P
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im just calling it like i see it.. and thanks for the compliment :) and i consider you are friend as well, and its no question about rp partner, your one of the awesome ones, and you are not kidding it is very hard to find a good one. glad you like my posts and they are working for you, thats what i shoot for.. and awesome feeling to get :D
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Hey,

Maybe this is the moment where Xaven runs away in stead of sitting in the water and Vanessa follows him and that he cuts his hand open and during the change that still is a wound in his paw and that when Vanessa sees him, in his wolf form, he thinks by all the new stuff that just happened, that she hunted him and he attacks her ???
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