@Wade Wilson Ooooh! Looks like you chose Monster X! Nice one! He's accepted. Please put the profile in the CS and delete the one here in the OCC.
Thanks!
@Wade Wilson Ooooh! Looks like you chose Monster X! Nice one! He's accepted. Please put the profile in the CS and delete the one here in the OCC.
@Wade Wilson'Moments later, a beam of plasma energy hit Nemesis in her chest, followed up by a spinning kick as Monster X descended to Earth. He jumped off her, landing a few paces away.'
It appears you kinda broke Rule 3) No Autohitting. You attacked Nemesis in a way that she can't exactly have a say in. Perhaps if you did something like 'A beam of plasma energy aims at Nemesis' chest as it fires upon her.' and 'Soon after, Monster X descends as he runs towards the opposing kaiju and attempts a spinning kick upon her'. that will be better.
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Oh, yeah. I was trying not to do that XD. I'm used to writing stories on Wattpad, you see. I'll edit it.
@Wade Wilson Posting soon?