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Ideally, who is all apart of the boarding party? Epunamun, Artemisia, Omero for certain, Leonard too, but what of Stefano, Alastair, and Luke?


Epu, Omero, and Artemisia are the only named characters on the aweigh mission.
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Epu, Omero, and Artemisia are the only named characters on the aweigh mission.


Ok, just trying to decide if a separate post or a collab would be more efficient.
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I thought I'd give you a chance to tell me what happens in the story this time.



Just wondering: How powerful is a Dark Naga? How well do you think Omero (someone with extensive training with fighting creatures such as these) would hold up against it?
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Just wondering: How powerful is a Dark Naga? How well do you think Omero (someone with extensive training with fighting creatures such as these) would hold up against it?


I was planning on putting up the Beastiary soon, but you can just assume she is relatively weak from being captured and imprisoned for some length of time.
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DM and I have started another collab, deemed that it would be easiest to write one post than two separate posts reiterating the same thing (me personally, I'm excited to see how Artemisia will react to the naga, as she's never seen one before, and this will be her first technical fight). Also, looking forward to the Beastiary!
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Not exactly sure what I should really be having Alastair do atm. I'll probably wait for someone else to post to get some ideas; although if no one posts for ages I'll obviously jump in haha

p.s. Good post btw :)
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Not exactly sure what I should really be having Alastair do atm. I'll probably wait for someone else to post to get some ideas; although if no one posts for ages I'll obviously jump in haha

p.s. Good post btw :)


That's fine. We could also do a collab if you wanted.
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I think I might take this opportunity to introduce Stefano to Emilio.

Expect a TitanPad thrown your way soon enough, NY.
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I've got bits and drabs of a post written up, but it still needs a lot of work. How's everyone else coming along?
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I've got bits and drabs of a post written up, but it still needs a lot of work. How's everyone else coming along?


Do you need any help with that post? You can send it over so I can look it over, maybe give you some information.

Overall, I think everyone's post is coming along. No rush, really.
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Do you need any help with that post? You can send it over so I can look it over, maybe give you some information.

Overall, I think everyone's post is coming along. No rush, really.


Yes, DM and I are still working on our collab, it has been slow going because I had to leave for a few days which slowed my response.
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Do you need any help with that post? You can send it over so I can look it over, maybe give you some information.

Overall, I think everyone's post is coming along. No rush, really.


I scrapped it. Because it started weak my whole post was just shit. Couldn't fix it. Best to start a fresh; should make it easier for me to write as well. Don't you hate it when that happens xP
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I scrapped it. Because it started weak my whole post was just shit. Couldn't fix it. Best to start a fresh; should make it easier for me to write as well. Don't you hate it when that happens xP


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That's deep man.
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You've not forgotten about that TP, have you, NY?

Because I did.
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You've not forgotten about that TP, have you, NY?

Because I did.


I'll get to it tomorrow morning. Assuming waking isn't too hard. We Might be able to post it before the weekend is out.
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@The New Yorker My collab with Macabrefox may be slightly delayed due to my fault; I have been ill the past few days and haven't responded for a while. Though now that I am better I am back on track :) .
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It is finished! I sincerely apologize for the delay,but Bon appetit!
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So, don't worry about the delay, I think we're all suffering from scheduling problems.

For example, I think I might be able to respond to Eru this evening, but god only knows.

Secondly, amazing post! That was a spectacularly good job on almost every level. I can't wait to see some of the other perspectives of the story.

I did have one thing I wanted to clear up, though. What I sort of obfuscated is that in my telling of the story the Burnt Bitch rides up along side the pirate ship and they transfer Epu that way. It may be slightly unrealistic, but it cuts out all of the really tricky stuff about getting Epu into and out of the dingy's while he's unconscious. So I'd really like to see that small change made to the post to make it even better. And, as I said, I don't really blame you for not spotting that really unclear aspect of the story.
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Lol that would make much more sense, I'll go in and fix the errors (:

And thank you! This was a really fun part to write!

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Fixed, let me know if this a more agreeable version.

@TheDuncanMorgan I removed some parts for the story to comply, if there is anything you would like to change on Omero's end let me know.
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