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Important notice! As I have now received 5 different character applications for the element of fire, I am notifying everyone in advance that I will only accept ONE more application for that position before closing it. This is on a first come first serve basis and I will not accept anyone staking a claim on the last slot without submitting a COMPLETED character sheet.
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Since all the elements have been filled, does that mean there isn't any space in the roleplay left?
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Since all the elements have been filled, does that mean there isn't any space in the roleplay left?


From what I understand, the plan is to have everyone "audition" for the privilege of being the one to fill that space, and the GM decides who he wants to keep and who he wants to boot. It'll be like a presidential debate!
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Just gonna leave this here. (Reposting from the other thread) I did flesh out her backstory a little more to better tie in her element, so hopefully that will be helpful.

Name: Audra Hesten

Element: Wind/Weather

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Appearance: *Picture to come* Two things immediately draw your eye when you see Audra: (1) her deep red hair and (2) her small, boyish build (5'1"). Her skin is very pale, despite working outside daily (a mystery to the Hesten family, and oftentimes yet another point of ridicule), but her grey/green eyes only stand out even more strikingly because of this. Her mood can be measured by the color of her eyes, as when she is content and happy they favor a greener shade, but when she is angry they turn grey to match her inner emotional storm. Because she is usually out in the orchards with her brothers, Audra usually ends up wearing their hand-me-down work shirts and pants, which only end up hanging pitifully on her thin frame, despite her mother's efforts to tailor them smaller. She wears her hair down and free as much as she can (which reaches the bottom of her shoulder blades), but will wear it in a braid to keep it out of the way as she goes about her work.

Theme Song: Still being determined, but it'll be great. Fear not!

Nature: Audra has a spunky, fiery nature to match her red hair. She speaks her mind and is a passionate, adventurous soul. She feels semi-obsessively driven to prove herself, to prove that she can do things just as well or better than everyone else. She is also mischievous and will likely not pass up an opportunity for a good prank. She has a short temper and holds grudges. While she likes to be the center of attention, she really does make an incredibly loyal friend.

Backstory: Audra hails from the farmlands of Diedremere, where she and her family make their living off of the fruit orchards that had passed through the seemingly innumerable family generations. Every Hesten was expected to work that very land until they no longer lived, according to ancient tradition. Audra, however, was never satisfied to be tied down by this tradition. Her family have often felt exasperated with her dreams of leaving to live a life of adventure, a notion which seems pointless and frankly unimaginable to them. Her 5 older brothers (Audra had arrived as a surprise to her family 10 years after the youngest boy) would tease her as they all worked together tending the orchards, enjoying the fiery, indignant responses from their only sister. Audra was oftentimes overlooked outside of these moments of ridicule, however, for many reasons. Her small body was much weaker and slower than her brothers, causing them to generally just do things themselves rather than wait for her. This, however, would spark her competitive and stubborn spirit, and she would try to keep up and do things herself, no matter the cost to her.

Despite these things, Audra loved her family deeply, but just wanted to be able to have them see her as their equal. They basically only saw her as helpful when they needed someone to climb to the top of the trees to grab the high and hidden fruit there. This Audra loved to do, as she loved the feeling of being high up and feeling the wind blow through her hair and through the treetops. To her, it felt as if every breeze whispered to her of better things, and it became her inner symbol of the freedom she so desperately sought. Oftentimes when Audra felt like being alone, that is where she would go: to the treetops to imagine the wind telling her of the adventure and freedom that lay far beyond the orchards.

And oh the stories the wind told.

They told her of leaving the farm, of really making herself into something amazing. She didn't even have what she wanted to do or where she wanted to go clearly defined in her mind - those details weren't as important as seeing the amazement and pride in her family member's faces as they saw what she had accomplished all on her own. This is what fueled Audra in her passion to be different and show them all what she could do, always feeling a sense of encouragement with every passing breeze. Her family, however, did not see her ambitions in this light. They thought her a foolish young girl and figured this "phase" would pass as maturity settled. Little did they know of Audra's plans now that she was just about to have her 17th birthday: to gather a few of her belongings and leave with the wind to her back to live her dreams....whatever that meant. She supposed she'd figure out the specifics on the way.

Goal(s): Audra dreams of becoming wealthy and powerful, leaving her family's farm far behind her. She longs to be able to prove herself to her family, blowing them away with her grand achievements.

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@Jay Kalton As Scrapula has said-- certainly not. You may absolutely apply for whatever element you wish. Please refer to Rule 1 in the rules section for applications.
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Name: Kayla Halogi

Element: Fire

Age: 16 (just about to turn 17)

Race: Human.

Gender: Female

Appearance: Kayla is a skinny and lithe. Her skin is pale and grey due to her lack of exposure to the sun. Her eyes are a pale blue, almost whit and her hair is stark white. Her face is small and round and her lip are pale pink. On her cheeks are two scars that run parallel to each other. She is 5’5” and is extremely skinny. Her ribs are just visible through her chest and her breasts are almost none existent. Her frame is small with thin limbs can squeeze through the smallest of windows. Her back is pockmarked with small burns and bruises. On her chest is a black raven tattoo with the eye done in red. She wears brown leather trousers that are well worn, patched and stitched up. A dull grey cotton shirt that is also patched, with stiches fixing any rips covers her torso. Her belt is made of good quality leather and has numerous small leather pouches attached by cords. Her feet are bare. Her hands are thin with her fingers very thin. Her hands are covered in a pair of thin gloves made of black wool.

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gC0WlU0NtM

Nature: Kayla has a loud mouth and will always speak her mind. Even if it means she gets beaten up. Quick to anger, her punches are vicious and she always fights dirty. Growing up on the streets means she is always ready to fight and is always angry. While she might appear angry on the outside she can warm up to people over time and will become extremely loyal. She is full of passionate intensity to make her goal come true, to become wealthy and never have to steal again. Her spirit is like a fire, sometimes dim, sometimes like a inferno but always lit. She has a glint in her eyes that makes people slightly wary that she might trick them.

Backstory: Being an orphan on the streets of Jeorvo is a tough life. You have to learn how to steal, fight and be able to run from a young age. Kayla was just that, an orphan. Her father was a trader, her mother a prostitute. When she fell pregnant with Kayla she decided not to drink the poison most prostitutes did to kill unwanted babies. Instead she raised Kayla by herself from a small cellar in the side of an alley. Their home was just one room, barely big enough to stand in. From the age of five Kayla was going out and begging for food. By the age of eight she was stealing food off carts and running away from angry owners. When she was nine a new gang of thieves came into power and killed her mother for not agreeing to their terms. Kayla quickly agreed to their terms of being a thief for them in return for her life. She was made to sneak into warehouses and steal items, or take coins straight from the purses of the rich as they watched spectacles. Over the years she got better at thieving.

Due to her nature of rarely venturing out during day she slowly became pale and gaunt from lack of sun. Most of the stuff she would steal would go straight to the crime bosses. What stuff she earned was spent on food. She could only afford just enough to survive but nothing more. As the years progressed she was forced to do harder and harder tasks but her rewards weren’t any better. She would be beaten and burnt if she didn’t meet her quota and barely rewarded if she did. When she turned sixteen, even though she didn’t know her true age, she felt an urge to get out of Jeorvo. Over the year she slowly started stockpiling food and supplies to leave.

Goal(s): Survive another day. Make money. Eat. Learn how to read, write and fight with a sword. Kill the crime bosses who killed her mum.

Inventory:
-clothes
-belt
-pouches (inside are flint and steel, a few coppers, a lock of her mums hair, a wooden comb, a pebble with a rune, a picture of a dragon on a scrap of paper, a few lockpicks)
-a small iron dagger
-a hunk of hard bread
-a small chunk of hard cheese
-skin of water
-thin bedroll
-thin coil of rope
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Thank God I've finally got this CS done xD (the back story was a bit long, so I put it in a hider.)

Edit: Got Aleta's theme song going.

Name: Aleta Stormcrest

Element: Wind

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Appearance: Aleta is a tall and fit woman, with a slightly toned body and strong arms. She has a honey-coloured skin tone and a pointed face. She has dark brown eyes and hair, which is slightly feathered and cut to her shoulders. People often mistake Aleta to be in her early to mid-twenties, with her sharp facial features and tall stature. She weighs in at around 156 lbs and has a height of 5'11. Aleta has also been noted to have extremely messy bed hair.

Aleta doesn't were anything too extravagant. She often wears a loose, mahogany coloured top with a simple belt around her waist. Accompanies with her dark brown pants are a pair of leather boots. She wears a leather rucksack and an arming sword strapped across her back.

Nature: Most if the time, Aleta is a calm and relaxed person, always managing to keep her composure in tight situations. She's often quiet, but doesn't mind having a little chat if she's comfortable with the person talking to her. Although Aleta dislikes getting into arguments, she will retort back when pushed to her absolute limit. Fits of rage don't come often to this woman, but when a close friend has died or been severely injured in front of her, Aleta's calm personality does a complete 180.

Even though Aleta seems quite introverted and shy, she is a capable leader. She is quick to strategise and when things go wrong, Aleta is able to calm things down a little. She has a high tolerance for others and she cares for other people's lives as well as her own. No matter what, Aleta will always try to protect her close friends and comrades, even willing to sacrifice her own life for her friends' well being.

Cautious and observant, Aleta always tries to learn from past mistakes to improve her combat style and strategies. She's not one to rush into a situation without planning anything out first, always thinking about what the enemies' next move could be. Although she is a strong-minded and determined person, she knows when to back out of a situation. She tries not to make any rushed and hasty conclusions and, as learnt from the past, to never underestimate her opponent.

Theme Song:


Backstory:

Goal(s): As of now, Aleta is set on finding the person who killed her mentor. She strongly believes that she can fulfil this, and, when she does, she'll continue on with life. Until then, Aleta won't (and hasn't) stop(ped) until she finds the culprit. She also dreams of having a small cottage somewhere where she can live peacefully on her own in the future.

Inventory:
- Arming Sword

- Dagger (hidden inside her boot)

- Rucksack (used to carry essentials like spare clothes, money and food)

- A journal in which she writes stories about her travels

- Large grey shawl
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Some feedback for you folks...

@Zombehs Concerning Jorak Tenumbra... We already spoke via the interest check and I can see that you added the location for Jorak's hometown on the map, so thanks for that. Nothing new to report about Jorak's CS-- looks good!

@Scrapula Concerning Leon Alabaster... He'll be able to indulge in his love for loincloths much more outside the desert (although I can't guarantee he might get strange looks if he walks around the marketplace in such attire). We already discussed this in the interest check. Thanks for making that edit.

@Undine Concerning Raine Laiken... We already spoke via the interest check. Everything looks good.

@Captain Jenno Concerning Brande Ashbell... Everything looks good except it seems that he's just recently discovered his ability and he's 24. He should have discovered it about 7 years ago. Other than that, you're golden.

@Dynamo Frokane Concerning Vessa Fairwraith... There seems to be a bit of an inconsistency in Vessa's backstory. If Vessas father raped her mother on one of the escape ships from Xavier, that would make Vessa over 50 years old (as nobody has been know to live in Xavier since the war 60 years ago). Perhaps he could have been on a ship escaping from a southern town on the south-eastern side of the mountains that was being pillaged by orcs from the Realm of Spiritus Raptor? Escaping to Inisad? Also, her powers would have awakened shortly after/the day of her 17th birthday as opposed to just before her 18th. Other than that, everything looks fine.

@McHaggis Concerning Elspeth Scout... Everything looks great. The only note I might add-- and this doesn't necessarily merit a change at all-- is that Xaviar is a largely uninhabited town and quite dangerous. If her father was a pirate and wished to venture there via boat, he would need to cross the Crimson Sea to the east. It's possible he could make it through by hugging the coast, but it would still be very dangerous.

@NightFlight Concerning Audra Hesten... We already spoke via the interest check. There's just one more edit I would recommend-- could you add a break somewhere in the first paragraph of her biography so it's a little less of a wall? It just makes it easier to read without getting lost (for me at least).

@Crazy Doctor Concerning Kayla Halogi... We already spoke via PM-- thanks for making the requested changes. You put her town name down as "Jeorvan" when I think you meant to put "Jeorvo". There's also just one more edit I would recommend-- could you add a break somewhere in her biography so it's a little less of a wall? It just makes it easier to read without getting lost (for me at least). Other than that, everything looks good.

@Jay Kalton Concerning Aleta Stormcrest... Character sheet looks good. The only thing that's missing is her discovering her powers when she turned 17, since she's 19 she would have had them for about 2 or 3 years now.

@BubbleGumKing Concerning Adrian Murray... I won't ask you to change the character's gender. I realize it's still a work in progress-- but just to make sure-- I see that you ended on discussing his 17th birthday but there's no mention of his awakening powers. I'm sure you probably have plans to get to it, but I just wanted to make sure it's clear that including that information is a requirement. Also-- just for consistency's sake, can you please use the character sheet skeleton I created? Namely in reference to the Personality/Nature section.
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Amended, apologies!
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Good to hear, now the wait begins. :l
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Wew, finished adding parts to Aleta's backstory!

Also, I've been obsessed with this anime styled game opening. After watching it again, I just realised how well the music would fit this RP :)

And the animation.

Oh my God the animation. Ufotable, you have served us well.

m.youtube.com/watch?v=DSQV-NkWGOk
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@Baklava

Okay, I finished my Character Sheet, its on the first page.
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@Crimson Raven Alright, thanks. I'll look over it soon.
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@Baklava, is Leon in acceptable form, or should I add something?
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@Scrapula I don't have any changes I would recommend-- it looks fine to me. You're more than welcome to make any changes to it that come to mind before the deadline, though.
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@Baklava cool I'll ammend it now, I'll change Xavia to somewhere else and I'll adjust the age too.
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@Jay Kalton That video is seriously awesome. Like damn.
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I'll be playing that on repeat when I write all my posts x3
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@Baklava@Jay Kalton
Forgive me for advertising, but the game comes out on Steam in about three days (on the 20th). If you preorder, you get Tales of Symphonia free when it's released on Steam, too. It's a pretty sweet deal in my opinion, but then again I love Symphonia so there may be some bias.
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