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@Ploxerdon So... Will you be posting an actual CS for me to review or...


Dude, Arkane is the real deal! *gets a stone thrown towards his head*
(btw, send you a friend request to join the skype group)
Anyways, this time for real:


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Here's Reiji, only notable change is his history. Also I was thinking of making a newly appointed jounin char to help carry the load of leading the squad~
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I'm probably not suited for a long-term RP right now, as a matter of a fact. ^^ Sorry 'bout the time-wastin'.
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@Vongola_Hasayo Post la CS into the Character section ;)
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@Jay Kalton

You think there can be two Uchihas or you want more diversity?

Wait! Before all of that, is this still joinable? Just wanna ask before digging a hole for myself :P
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@ArtifactCreator Since there are two people (including you) wanting to join the RP, I will have to review your CS and see which one I can allow in. This means that yes, there is still space in the RP, but of course, it is most definitely not first come first served. I'm looking for interesting characters to join in this RP, so I'm going to wait out for anyone else who wants to join.

Edit: If you want to make an Uchiha... That's fine. Just make sure you don't overpower them to the point where they can defeat our sensei with one hit.
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@Dirty Dan Aw, sorry to see you go! Good luck with your other RPs, Dan :)
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Okay so I made a new character that is alike Seiji in name and history but I changed his personality, appearance, KG and jutsu.

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@TheFourthIV Your new CS seems all fine and dandy! Go ahead and post it in the Character section.
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@geminironin
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I respect that you guys must be busy at the moment, but I just want to know when you'll have the chance to post your previous CSs up. I'm hoping that we can start this RP as soon as we can and not fall into the trap of waiting too long to start to the point where people begin to lose interest :)
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@Jay Kalton
Just a reminder that you didn't say anything about my character yet.
(Unless you are busy with that atm, consider this message invalid in that case. And im not talking about ark kane :P)
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@Ploxerdon Someone else has asked if they could fill the space too, so once they're finished with their CS, I'll have to review both of them and see which one I can let in. Feel free to edit your character until I start reviewing.
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Alright, I will wait then :)
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Shingetsu Hozuki


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True mastery of oneself can only be reached by controlling both one's strength and weakness. That is my way.


Basic Info:

Name: Shingetsu Hozuki
Nickname/Alias: Tsuki
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15, April 10
Age Appearance: ~16
Sexuality: Lesbian

Parents: Shiro Hozuki (mother, alive) and unknown Cloud Village ninja (presumed alive)
Adoptive parent: Momoe Shiemi, Konoha civilian
Length and build: 5'10", slim to the point of appearing frail.
Weight: 112 lb.
Favorite weather and season: The wild thunderstorms of late summer

Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Shinobi Forces

Clan/Bloodline: Hozuki Clan, disowned

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water, potential for Lightning

Character Appearances:

Appearance: Tall and very thin, with the violet eyes and mouthful of pointed teeth that mark a member of the Hozuki clan. Unlike others in the clan, however, her skin is tanned and her waist-length hair is a dark blonde. Usually wears the standard Konoha uniform with a grey, striped jacket (once worn by the Second Mizukage) over it, wrapped tightly around her and closed in front of her face.

Personal Information:

Personality: Shingetsu is a highly disciplined ninja, determined to prove her worth and claim her place among the ninja elite despite being an illegitimate child disowned by her clan. She keeps up a fierce attitude toward strangers, seeing everyone around her as a challenger, but quickly warms to those who show her respect. She remains a woman of few words, however, preferring to let her actions speak for her.

History: Shingetsu was born a pariah in Kirigakure, abandoned by her family as the child of an illicit union. She was able to scrape by on the streets and learn the basics of ninjutsu by imitating the young ninja of her village and undertaking "missions" to find food and shelter. When she turned 12, she decided she'd had enough of the city. She broke into the Hozuki clan home, stole two relics from past members of the clan, and left for whatever village she came to first. Thus, she arrived in Konohagakure and was able to secure a place among their ranks based on the strength of her kekkei genkai and lack of ties to her birthplace.

Theme Song: Eastern Mystical Dream ~ Ancient Temple
Battle Theme: Bloody New Moon
Crowning Moment of Awesome:Thundercrack

Battle Arsenal

Weapons/Items: (Specific weapon that they often use. Everybody carries a set of kunai and shurkien with them.)

Name of Weapon: Kiba
Description: It is a pair of swords, each with slim and straight double-edged blades. Both blades also have an upward-curved bladed prong near the tip of one side of the blade and another one near the base of the blade's other side. They each have been imbued with lightning, displaying enhanced cutting power in a manner similar to the high-frequency vibrations of lightning-based chakra flow. These blades can channel the user's own respective lightning techniques or conduct natural lightning. As long as there is natural lighting to access, the user can battle continuously without tiring and launch lightning from the sky to strike anywhere within a large area.

Note: Shingetsu is largely unaware of the blades' abilities, and currently can only use them as normal swords.

Name of Item: Razor Webs
Description: Long, razor-thin wires that can be woven between obstacles to catch unwary targets with a deadly surprise. Easily spotted in the open, but shadows or mist can make them nearly invisible.

Skills and Techniques:

Strengths:
- Excellent control of Hydrification ability
- Can use Hydrification instead of hand signs for Water Release techniques
- Good at setting traps and ambushes

Weaknesses:
- Highly susceptible to Lightning-based attacks
- Predictable in open combat
- Weak taijutsu skills
- Must remain hydrated to use Hydrification

Special Traits: Affinity for the Swords of the Mist

Kekkei Genkai: Hydrification Technique

Traits/Abilities of Kekkei Genkai: The user can transform all or part of their body into water, and move about with ease.

Jutsu:

Canon Jutsu: Academy Basics, Water Gun Technique, Water Bullet Technique, Water Clone Technique, Hiding in Water Technique

Custom Jutsu:

Name of Technique: Hydrification: Water Absorption Technique
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Close
Nature Type: Water
Handseals: N/A
Description: The user absorbs nearby water into their body, storing it for use with Hydrification techniques. This technique is used mainly to replenish water used for ranged attacks, but can also be used to absorb an opponent's water attack.
Weakness: If the water absorbed with this technique is contaminated, the contaminants will be absorbed into the user's body.

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Added a list of shit that Toko is trying to invent because...fun times.

Also, Artifact, Jay and I are going to discuss your character along with Ploxerdon's and see what we can agree on.
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Added a list of shit that Toko is trying to invent because...fun times.

Also, Artifact, Jay and I are going to discuss your character along with Ploxerdon's and see what we can agree on.


Another option is to keep the one not chosen as back-up in case somebody has to drop out?
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Another option is to keep the one not chosen as back-up in case somebody has to drop out?


We prefer to review sheets when open spots come up.
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Okay, we've reviewed your sheets. There was a lot of back and forth on several notes but in the end, we could only come to one consensus. What I am about to say will probably piss you both off, but it's the only logical solution that we could come to terms with.

No one can play an Uchiha.

There are two major reasons for this, one is the fact that it breaks lore and the other is purely mechanical. Let's start with the first. Itachi was tasked to kill every Uchiha, which he did. Sparing Sasuke was a -huge- deal, and the fact that he was the last Uchiha was a major plot point. I realise that this is an alternate universe RP -to an extent-, however surviving the Uchiha massacre is no small feat. Also, this might just be me but I am honestly a bit tired of the typical Anime backgrounds of "My family got killed, now I'm an avenger." It's highly overused and rather redundant by this point. Death in the family is fine, but the whole massacre thing is a bit old now.

With that said, Itachi slaughtered the Uchiha with help from Obito, the dude who nearly destroyed the world with Madara. I don't think hiding under your bed would help you escape that. Sasuke survived because he was allowed to survive. No one else survived.

When it comes to the Sharingan, the thing is vastly overpowered. I think Kishimoto just went waaaay overboard with what that eye could do. It essentially removes every other character's individuality with its "Copy Ninja" techniques. We have more than enough Taijutsu characters in this RP and with the Sharingan, you can essentially become all of them. Not to the mention the Sharingan's later level abilities. Amaterasu is actually -stronger- than it is portrayed in the anime since it sets ANYTHING YOU LOOK AT ablaze.

Bottom line. The sharingan is OP and Uchiha characters are dead. Also, just a pet peeve of mine...writing in your character sheets that your character is "Better than others" at something, isn't very good. Describe them as excellent if you so wish, I know I like to showcase what my characters are good at but it's very easy to step on other people's toes when you feel the need to write down that your character is better than his/her teachers and fellow Genin, I'm just saying.

Conclusion:
We cannot accept Uchiha characters. You're welcome to make other ones to be reviewed if you desire.
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Well, tbh... I'm gonna drop out in that case.
I'm not planning on creating another character to end up being rejected since there is only one spot left, thus only having about 50% chance to be accepted... waste of time.
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