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"... the body was found at 5pm this morning, crumpled on the kitchen floor, face contorted in horror..."

"... police are considering this an open homicide case..."

"The victim's husband has denied allegations of foul play, and toxicology reports are coming back negative..."


It was plastered all over the news for weeks. Deaths always are, in quiet, idyllic little coastal towns like this one: Pleasant Valley, California.
But it started on June 20th, 2000: that was the day the killings started.
Havana Reddy had been a perfectly healthy, twenty year old repatriated suburbanite, with a loving husband, a plethora of middle-class friends and a stress-free job as a yoga instructor at her local gym. She ate well, and took care of herself.
She turned up dead at 5pm on a warm Tuesday afternoon, sprawled out on her kitchen floor. Her husband had found her clutching a broken makeup mirror, surrounded by the shattered remains of a glass of store-bought "health juice". Her face had been contorted, in abject agony.

Police reported that there wasn't a mark on her, but suspected foul play. They thought her drink had looked suspicious, and took her husband in on suspicion of poisoning: but the toxicology came back negative, and a subsequent autopsy returned no signs of conventional poison.
In the end, they concluded that it was a rare, but not unheard of, case of sudden, unexplained death. It wasn't a common occurrence, but it happened: several times a year in the U.S. alone.
And with that verdict, most people were happy. It seemed feasible to most of the people of Pleasant Valley, and it put their minds at rest to know there wasn't a killer stalking their happy little town...
... but a small, fringe group of citizens knew better.

To most, Havana Reddy had been a spirited, spritely young woman, but otherwise unremarkable: but to a rare few with which she shared a special power, she was known instead to be the wielder of the remarkable, emotional-manipulating Stand, Midnight Oil.
Because Havana Reddy was part of a secret society of less than one hundred, a minority that had come- through the influence of some cursed antiquated arrow, introduced to Pleasant Valley at the turn of the millennium- to possess the awesome power of a Stand, a metaphysical manifestation of her own strength of will, a superhuman power.
And whilst to the rest of Pleasant Valley, her death might have seemed an unpleasant coincidence: to them, it was something much, much more.
No Stand user could be so easily felled, and in the world of Stands, there was no such thing as coincidence. There was no doubt about it: "this has to be the work of an enemy stand!"

But even knowing this, there was a great hesitation about intervening, throughout the whole Stand User community. There was a resounding fear that, should anyone stand forwards and get involved, they might be next.
Maybe Havana Reddy was a one-off? Maybe her death was enough...

22nd of October, 2000. Sunday. Damien Bourke has just been found dead, the sixth victim of this "Stand Killer" in the last four months alone. His stand, Celtic Spring, was one which controlled weather. Now that it's perished, nature struggles to adjust, and the rain makes the sand unto wet clay.
Something needs to be done. That's where you come in.

You are The Boomtown Rats, a group of students from the graduating class of Pleasant Valley High. You stepped up to the plate when the rest of the Stand community buried its head in the sand: because when injustice arises, one can always invest their faith in the recklessness of students.
You all know each other, somewhat. Faces seen passing in the hall, notes exchanged between desks during boring classes. But in many ways, you are perfect strangers. You know only the names of one another's stands, and that when nobody else was willing to bat, you all stepped forwards together.
Your mission: to find and stop The Stand Killer, before your own numbers come up.

But beware, because there are powerful forces working against you. Poking around murder investigations won't make you any friends in the Pleasant Valley Police Department, and making ripples in the Stand Community brings with it the risk of upsetting Pleasant Valley's resident gangsters - a troupe of Stand Users whose Stands suggest The Chinese Zodiac: The Zodiac Killers. They are the current known possessors of The Antique Arrow that gave the majority of Pleasant Valley's Stand Users their powers.

You've got a long way to go, Boomtown Rats. Hah. So much for Pleasant Valley Sundays.



So that's Pleasant Valley, now what about you?



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Stand User
Name: Bruno Garcia Hays
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Brief description of appearance: Bruno is a tall, slender figure, 5'11", with narrow shoulders and an overall thin build. His hair is a cobalt blue, and he wears it up in a pompadour (although, to allay concerns, he isn't too defensive about it). His eyes are green, and his skin is lightly tanned, betraying his origins in a hotter climate. He wears a black leather jacket, around the collar of which is a black-and-white checkered pattern, and a pair of black leather gloves, although the one on his left hand seems to be padded, whilst the one on the right is otherwise generic.

Personality summary: Bruno is an Aussie, through and through: hot tempered and fast-mouthed. A reformed teen gangster, Bruno's heart is in the right place, but his execution can sometimes be less so. His playful teasing can seem cruel at times, and his rushing to fix problems with his fists can sometimes make them much, much worse. Still, his loyalty, once earned, is nigh unshakable.

Short biography: Bruno Harrison is an Australian immigrant who was moved forcefully from his hometown of Trenchtown, New South Wales, by his parents, after he'd been involved in a botched museum robbery, orchestrated by The Trenchtown Thugs, a gang of teen anarchists. During this robbery, a collection of valuable antiques went missing: Bruno never saw the benefits of any of them.
Instead, in the commotion preceding his arrest, Bruno panicked and ran into the road, colliding head-on with a police car and losing his left arm due to a complication during the ensuing surgery.
It was un-salvageable, and replaced with an inflexible wooden substitute, all that his family could afford, and such reality motivated Bruno to leave his roguish lifestyle behind. It was well crafted, like the arm of a well made doll, but it was totally inanimate.

Bruno moved to Pleasant Valley with his estranged then-girlfriend Maria Shintaro, expecting to spend the rest of his life as "the one armed man". But upon arriving, Bruno suddenly found himself in the possession of a powerful spirit which allowed him to move his wooden arm as though it were made of flesh and bone again: and when he touched things with it, he could emulate the material. His arm could become stone, metal, any solid material.
He would later learn that this was the birth of his stand, Matter of Fact!

Over the years he's kept it to himself, and wears a glove over his "stand arm" when he isn't using it. Sometime in the last few years, Maria left Bruno, leaving only a note which declared she was running to L.A., after she'd ransacked his room and stolen some of his most valuable possessions.
He recently joined The Boomtown Rats, under the impression that his violent early teens might be put to better use via vigilantism.

Note: Namesakes are "Bruno Renzella" of Australian band Fat Lip, "Jerry Garcia", a finger amputee from the American rock band Grateful Dead, and "Colin Hays", a Scottish musician from the Australian band Men at Work.

Dark Secret: [Zilch]

Stand
Name: Matter of Fact (Duran Duran)
Description of Appearance: N/A: Bruno has never seen Matter of Fact "in person", as it were. He's only ever seen its arm, which remains even when he removes his wooden prosthetic. Said arm is a translucent sea green, and seems almost to let off a pale blue steam whenever it's outside of Bruno's arm. Although not particularly broad or powerful, the arm is fairly well toned and covered in what look to be small Widmanstätten patterns. In the absence of his prosthetic, Bruno wields this, but can no longer absorb other forms of matter.
Power: Matter adoption - When Bruno touches a solid surface with his wooden arm, he can assimilate the materials and change the material his arm consists of, for the duration of the fight. This alters his stats.
Stats:
[Default - Wood]
Destructive Power: B
Speed: A
Range: B
Durability: C
Precision: C

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The Boomtown Rats


I'm guessing none of us like mondays?

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Will submit an app when work is done.
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GIBSON VES HAWKIN


Name:

Gibson Ves Hawkin (Nicknamed hot leg hawkin)

Age:

19

Gender:

Male

Brief description of appearance:

Gibson ves Hawkin is a 6 foot tall male with almost white pale skin, dark hazel eyes, white lipstick and black braided dreadlocks reaching half way down his back, Gibson wear's two black lip piercings on each side of his bottom lip and three silver stubs on his nose on either side, he also has a tattoo on his right cheek of a black kissmark ontop of a silver coloured butterfly tattoo.

Wearing a set of thick black fishnets for a shirt, and a black bowtie for his upperbody, Gibson wears for his lower body a set of baggy japanese school pants, with a japanese school jacket tied around his waist, and a pair of heavy black high rock punk boots. Supports two tattoos on each hand, on his left reads kiss the other reads love.

Personality summary:

Affectionate, caring and loving, Gibson is a very protective individual , and is a romantic despite his odd Gothic looking appearance. Treating both man and women respectively and is simply someone who gets looked at the wrong way for his odd looks. He is smart and adaptable to his environment and despite some shyness, is very open to his own opinion and will express what he believes is the best course of action.

Gibson is the type of friend you would like to have, he's not a user, laughs at jokes and is always around for the bad times, a friend you can trust. Gibson is very protective of his friends and will not hesitate to assault those who injure or threaten his friends, and would rather get beat up instead of his friends can escape, believing the lives of his comrades and allies are more important than he is.

Short biography:

Gibson has been a resident of Pleasant Valley for a few years, a transfer student during the beginning of his junior year, Gibson came from the bustling huge city to the boonies because of family financial issues, losing his beautiful apartment along with his mother and father, forced into living in a single flat home at Pleasant Valley, from riches to rags.

As such, in order to pay for his home, since jobs were hard to come by, Gibson was one of the original creators of the Boomtown Rats, along with a few others, and, against his better nature, for the good of his loving mother and father, did many questionable acts, and resorted to vigilantism to pay for his families home.

Gibson on his move to Pleasant Valley came into contact with his stand the moment he set foot in the town, when he accidently sunk his fist into a tv out of repressed anger, only to immediately remove his hand, with no damage to the tv screen, and a black knife in his grip.

With these powers at his disposal, Gibson decided to use his power to acquire new goods to steal from the authorities and otherwise, to make up the cash needed to keep their family alive, though this vigilantism wasn't enough to save his mother, who died of a heart attack a year prior, leaving only an old dying man and the young boy left to live in their home.

Dark Secret:

Stand:


Name:

The Darkness

Description of Appearance:

Appearing like a pure black version of gibson, but with a helmet in the shape of this:

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The stand also wears a open chested skintight zebra striped suit, like this:

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and stands at 6 feet tall like gibson.

Power:

Black manipulation - Using his stand The Darkness, Gibson can pull his hand into anything that is black in colour such as turned off TV screens, black pavements, etc and manipulate the darkness to form a weapon such as a knife, sword or grenade or an object of his choosing, such as a key though the size of the object can only be measured by the size of the "blackness" he reaches into. His stand can also use these weapons and sink into the blackness and attack his opponents from within other black surfaces, appearing and reemerging from on any black surface, making him incredibly capable of damage at night, Gibson can look through the eyes of his stand like a second pair.

Stats:

Destructive Power: C
Speed: B
Range: A
Durability: C
Precision: B
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I'm guessing none of us like mondays?



Loving the concept of Tied Up in Nottz, but I'm worried your stats and your power are conflicting a little. If you want those chains to be "close to unbreakable", you definitely need a higher durability. How powerful are these chains, by the by?
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As such, in order to pay for his home, since jobs were hard to come by, Gibson was one of the original creators of the Boomtown Rats, along with a few others, and, against his better nature, for the good of his loving mother and father, did many questionable acts, and resorted to vigilantism to pay for his families home.


Cooouple things, here. The Boomtown Rats are a new group, they've only formed in the last month or so, so every member is technically one of the "original members." Secondly, vigilantism doesn't pay, they're high schoolers - which also means they're not criminals. Criminal antagonists, maybe.
Also, can't help but notice a pretty glaring lack in... well, character flaws in general.
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Hope the Stand isn't too weird for you. :B
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This is the character sheet I used in John's RP, with some minor modifications. I'll finish reformatting it and tailoring it to this RP soon (including this character's Dark Secret!). Just wanted to get out here as quickly as I could :)
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meaning they can easily pierce and continue through several targets and even solid objects
*Stand stats:
**Destructive power: C
**Speed: B
**Range: B
**Durability: C
**Precision: A


I like your stand dynamic, but if you want your stand's musket to "easily pierce" your destructive power will need to be an A, if you want it to pierce in general, it'll need t'be a B. A C in Destructive Power is the equivalent of having a mean punch.

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Hope the Stand isn't too weird for you. :B


Weird is good, I don't want a roleplay of Star Platinums. I like it! Solid stuff.
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Cooouple things, here. The Boomtown Rats are a new group, they've only formed in the last month or so, so every member is technically one of the "original members." Secondly, vigilantism doesn't pay, they're high schoolers - which also means they're not criminals. Criminal antagonists, maybe.
Also, can't help but notice a pretty glaring lack in... well, character flaws in general.


Ooooh im so sorry sir, you never stated the boomtown rats were new, so its not m fault you forgot that information! Also, im so sorry about the vigilantism thing, i was just going off your biography! Since thats the only lore we have on these "boomtown rats" sine your bio states the boomtown rats are about vigilantism!

Also im sorry for not including weaknesses or character flaws! But your application dosnt state weaknesses/flaws just stand ability and personality! Id happily change these, but its not my falt really, you forgot to add them in! ^^ a bit silly on your part, so it aint my fault! Il make sure to change them say.... In a day or so? Im not in a rush to edit ^^

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Ooooh im so sorry sir, you never stated the boomtown rats were new, so its not m fault you forgot that information! Also, im so sorry about the vigilantism thing, i was just going off your biography! Since thats the only lore we have on these "boomtown rats" sine your bio states the boomtown rats are about vigilantism!


You are The Boomtown Rats, a group of students from the graduating class of Pleasant Valley High.


Also, im so sorry about the vigilantism thing, i was just going off your biography! Since thats the only lore we have on these "boomtown rats" sine your bio states the boomtown rats are about vigilantism!

That part's not wrong - they are vigilantes, but vigilantes don't get paid, and they're the ones who hunt the criminals (in this case, one specific criminal), they aren't themselves crooks, at least not in the conventional sense.
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Your boomtown rats statement simply says the members are from the graduating clas, it bares no mention on when the boomtown rats were formulated.

Like i said, il re edit that stuff tomarrow i suppose ^ω^ You'll just have to wait a bit

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Your boomtown rats statement simply says the members are from the graduating clas, it bares no mention on when the boomtown rats were formulated.


I would think the fact it was formed by the graduating class to tackle a murderer who's only been killing

in the last four months alone.


Would've made guessing they were formed recently pretty easy.
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I would think the fact it was formed by the graduating class to tackle a murderer who's only been killing


Oh? Your thing never states they were formulated to combat the killer, it just says "we're the boomtown rats" as if it had already been established prior, not that the boomtown rats were made to combat the muders only that the boomtown rats were stepping up to the plate to fight the murderer....
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22nd of October, 2000. Sunday. Damien Bourke has just been found dead, the sixth victim of this "Stand Killer" in the last four months alone. His stand, Celtic Spring, was one which controlled weather. Now that it's perished, nature struggles to adjust, and the rain makes the sand unto wet clay.
Something needs to be done. That's where you come in.

You are The Boomtown Rats, a group of students from the graduating class of Pleasant Valley High. You stepped up to the plate when the rest of the Stand community buried its head in the sand: because when injustice arises, one can always invest their faith in the recklessness of students.


Please go back and read the whole thing. The mention of the Stand community "burying their head in the sand" is of course in reference to the fact stand users were actively staying un-involved with the killings, they "stepped up to the plate" and the plate is obviously dealing with the killer.

EDIT: Actually, I'm sorry John but I just don't think it's going to work out, not to be impolite but I'm looking for a certain level of reading comprehension. I hope to see you around the Guild, though.
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Please go back and read the whole thing.


Yeeah, from that statement, all im getting is that something needs to be done, and the boomtown rats are a group of graduating students, and that they stepped up to fight the murderer.

How about making it clear that the boomtown rats were created to STOP the MURDERER? Because all your saying is theboomtown rats are going to StoP the murderer, not that the group was MADE to stop themurderer!
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Awww, not allowing me to join because you cant be bothered to fix your own OP to be a bit more specific and for me pointing out things you've forgotten, thats a bit sad! lol, its okay though! I truely hope your Jojo 4.5 rp works out for you!
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I reiterate, John, I'm afraid it's not going to work out. See you around.

EDIT: Not going to reply to that last one in detail because this isn't a playground and I'm not twelve.
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I reiterate, John, I'm afraid it's not going to work out. See you around.


Trust me, i can read, and now i know what its about, you just werent specific enough <3
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