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Awesome! Alright, be sure to keep the team balanced with genders.

No one is getting a harem! XD
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Until I make up my mind on joining can I reserve N? I guess the one in RAVN since that would make a full team?

That is unless the genders don't stay even or right and then I will change to the free N?
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@OneWayOut Well my char's name is Shadow so S I guess.


There is an S available in team SLVR, though there is one more spot in RAVN while SLVR has no one there yet. The N in RAVN is available and that would make a full team. I recommend it so you are ensured some teammates. If you'd still rather go with S, then I will surely reserve that spot for you though. :)
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Until I make up my mind on joining can I reserve N? I guess the one in RAVN since that would make a full team?

That is unless the genders don't stay even or right and then I will change to the free N?


Oh, I didn't notice you there. o.o Hello! Since you are still unsure about joining, would you mind taking the N in MDNT?
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No problem, whatever is best for you.
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well just to let Ariel and Pyro know my char is a male.
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Mines a female.
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I might take that N in RAVN, mostly because of how I am writing my char, so that mean a slight name change is in order, and possibly gender, but as of this time my char is male. And will be named Nikolas.
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Alright, then I assume Ariel will make a female character. Nice work guys :)
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I'm one little problem, I have no idea what to put for my char's Semblance. I mostly know what a Semblance is but I can't put it to words.
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basically it is a power your character taps into when in sticky situations
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Thank you.
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@Snarfulblast
It doesn't necessarily have to only be in sticky situations. Although most people don't use their semblances that often, people like Weiss use it all the time. She uses her Glyphs every time she enters a battle.
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Okay I got most of it done now, I just finish it off tomorrow!

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@JustArielRight. Thanks. I think I got my Semblance down and it'll work, I hope.
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@OneWayOut Character Application.

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alrighty then im off to bed will work on finishing mine tomarrow as well. gnight all. sweet dreams! :3
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@Snarfulblast uhh, alright just a few things about you sheet that I'd like to address in order to accept it.

-Kind of missing the color aspect of his image/appearance. I don't know what twilight purple is but I expected to see some of it. (If you can't find a suitable image, please describe his outfit in the appearance section.) Aside from that, is there any particular reason he is 100 lbs heavier and doesn't look like it? I mean... just, why? XD

-In regards to his weapon, I feel like you could do some more with it, you know? Be creative? But... I suppose if you want it to just be an axe, that's fine. Just remember that you won't be able to do much else than hack and slash seeing as you didn't put any details of what it could do. I'm going to have to call you out IC if suddenly it becomes a cannon.

-I need a bit more of an in depth personality.

-The history is also pretty lacking. How did the events in his life shape him into the person he is? How does he view the world now? Why does he fight Grimm? etc.

-Need to explain his combat style a little more, and as well as what his weaknesses are.

-Lastly, his semblance doesn't seem to make sense to me. How can he really gauge when his teammates are hurt? How does he/what causes him get stronger? Does this only work when teammates are nearby or can he tell if his teammate got hurt from some distance away? If he takes more damage, how does this even help the situation at all? Where does being enraged mix in with all of this?

Unfortunately with all these questions, I can't accept your character until more detail is put into the sheet. If you have any questions or feel my critique was unfair, please let me know.
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@OneWayOut Is there anything wrong with my app so far? I'm not done it yet but I would like to know if there any issues I can fix tomorrow :)
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@Katakon looks good so far.

All of the pink! Its too much!

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