Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Keyblade87
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Just curious if this is still accepting characters or not I have a few Ideas for characters
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@Keyblade87 It's still up for more characters. :)
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Technically Finn's trident isn't a trident. It's a glaive, a general catch all category for polearms with blades on the end. Not saying you shouldn't have it or anything and you are free to call it what you like. I just don't want you getting the wrong idea about real life terms.

Also that last fantasy trident is a very poor design. Tridents are made to catch on limbs and snag on armour, that way you can pull and push your enemy when they are caught and keep them off balance.

Don't mess with a retiarius!


And this, boys and girls, is why she is such an awesome coGM.
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Should I get a post up? Or wait for people to finish their duels and knighting ceremonies?
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I'll have my character appear later so you guys go ahead.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Keyblade87
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Sorry yall still writing up my character
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Hmmmm I want to work on a post, but I feel like @knighthawk and I are the only ones posting for a bit so I'm not sure if I should wait...
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I'll be posting soon as I have something to respond to, so you're fine.
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@Zarkun

You can interact with my character if you would like. My last post was my character finishing his test and walking into the hall where everyone was waiting after.
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Fair enough. Will do so after I knock out some Sparrow racing.
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Appearance:
Name: Atreyu Tenur-Kai
Age: 19
Race: human
Gender: MAle
Force Order: Grey Paladins

Weapon: Twin Lightsabers One White the other Silver
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Force Powers: Force Visions, Force Empowerment- THe ability to influence Midi-chlorians within ones self to strenghthen muscle and force sensitivity for a period of up to 2 minutes at the cost of most of the users ability to complete rational thoughts. (Yeah not really heard of actually i think its origional but seems like a possible ability)

Personality: Atreyu has wanted nothing more since becoming a Padawan than to become a Jedi Knight and so he adheres to many of the Jedi Order's rules and protocols. Although he does had his rebelious moments and tends to believe more in feeling out his emotions including those leading to the darkside. Though he know how to keep himself from falling into the Darkside
Background: Atreyu was raised in starships most of his life his father was a Pilot for the Naboo and his mother died in childbirth. Atreyu showed signs early of being a skilled pilot when he was able to pilot his dads small shuttle at only the age of 4 It was then that a Jedi master had found him and offered to take him to be trained. His father agreed and the rest was history.
Destiny: Atreyu is destined to become a legendary Jedi Master by being one of the ones responsible for helping to restore the Jedi Order
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I've just been waiting for Wolf to post something. I also have another rp I need to post for so there's that.
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Appearance:
Name: Atreyu Tenur-Kai
Age: 19
Race: human
Gender: MAle
Force Order: Grey Jedi Order

Weapon: Twin Lightsaber
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Force Powers: I guess here its just basics

Personality: Atreyu has wanted nothing more since becoming a Padawan than to become a Jedi Knight and so he adheres to many of the Jedi Order's rules and protocols. Although he does had his rebelious moments and tends to believe more in feeling out his emotions including those leading to the darkside. Though he know how to keep himself from falling into the Darkside
Background: Atreyu was raised in starships most of his life his father was a Pilot for the Naboo and his mother died in childbirth. Atreyu showed signs early of being a skilled pilot when he was able to pilot his dads small shuttle at only the age of 4 It was then that a Jedi master had found him and offered to take him to be trained. His father agreed and the rest was history.
Destiny: Atreyu is destined to become a legendary Jedi Master by being one of the ones responsible for helping to restore the Jedi Order


OK, so the only Grey orders right now, that explicitly state they're grey, are the Order of the Grey and the Grey Paladins. Your Destiny is good on my end. You need to include lightsaber colors.
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okay cool got it ill make the changes

EDIT: Bang hope that works better
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Appearance:
Name: Atreyu Tenur-Kai
Age: 19
Race: human
Gender: MAle
Force Order: Grey Jedi Order

Weapon: Twin Lightsaber
Armor:
Force Powers: I guess here its just basics

Personality: Atreyu has wanted nothing more since becoming a Padawan than to become a Jedi Knight and so he adheres to many of the Jedi Order's rules and protocols. Although he does had his rebelious moments and tends to believe more in feeling out his emotions including those leading to the darkside. Though he know how to keep himself from falling into the Darkside
Background: Atreyu was raised in starships most of his life his father was a Pilot for the Naboo and his mother died in childbirth. Atreyu showed signs early of being a skilled pilot when he was able to pilot his dads small shuttle at only the age of 4 It was then that a Jedi master had found him and offered to take him to be trained. His father agreed and the rest was history.
Destiny: Atreyu is destined to become a legendary Jedi Master by being one of the ones responsible for helping to restore the Jedi Order


Like Z said, you need to either have The Order of the Grey or the Grey Paladins, other than that it seems good
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I've just been waiting for Wolf to post something. I also have another rp I need to post for so there's that.


I'll get a post up after Keyblade posts his duel
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Hopefully that works better for y'all ill get started on my post in the mean time
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Hopefully that works better for y'all ill get started on my post in the mean time


I missed this in my last critique, but Force Powers are the more specialized ones he might use, like, say, Tutaminis, the ability to basically catch a lightsaber with your hand for a short time.
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haha I could't really think of anything unless i start listing the Lightsaber forms he uses
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Look up a list then. Or ask for ideas. Pyrokinesis, though I'm fairly certain that's technically supposed to be rare, or semi-rare. Just, you know, guys, give him some power ideas.
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