The Basics



Name: Adelaide "Addie" Hart
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Species: Human

On-Hand
Daily clothing: Casual (i.e. skinny jeans, t-shirt or sweater depending on weather, denim jacket)
Weapon: None, but trained in self defense (kickboxing)
Equipment: Backpack
Extra clothing: A warmer coat, gloves, and hat for when that midwest bipolar weather acts up.

Elementals and Abilities
Elementals (2 max, may not contradict; example: no fire and water): Psychic and lightning
Abilities (3 max, may not contradict): Read Minds, And Manipulate thoughts, power over electronics.

Companions

Biography [Please Be Detailed.] Adelaide, was born in Chicago, IL. Her mom moved her out of state to California when things started getting crazy years ago. She has few memories of her early life with her mom, as her mom died when she was three (in a freak accident cause by an electrical fire), just over a year after moving to San Francisco. Addie, was placed in the foster system. In her teen years things were relatively easy, she just seemed to know how to please people, and get people to help her out. Though sometimes, she learned all too fast, what you think you want isn't the greatest. In late high school she fell in love with analog photography, (tried digital, but technology doesn't really agree with her most of the time) and decided to attend Art Institute in Chicago, she tried to convince herself, not to find out the truth about her father. Or why her mother was so desperate to leave, sometimes the truth just has a way of catching up with you.

@gravity22@lavulman@bobert778 you three are approved and can move your CS's to the characters tab. Then feel free to jump into the IC.

Lemme know what y'all think of Addie, I'm pretty new to play-by-post. So feel free to call me out on my crap.

Lemme know what y'all think of Addie, I'm pretty new to play-by-post. So feel free to call me out on my crap.

You're slipping between first and third person sometimes, I've noticed. Different communities have different preferences, but they generally don't care as long as you stick to one or the other.

But yeah, everyone's been there at one point or another. Generally just be willing to offer/accept feedback and you'll probably do fine. Like writing anything else, it's a learning experience that never really ends, but you'll probably end up great at it in no time. If you're ever unsure if you're doing something right, skimming through guides like this one can help out a lot, and if that doesn't help, always feel free to ask your fellow RPers.

@gravity22@lavulman@bobert778 you three are approved and can move your CS's to the characters tab. Then feel free to jump into the IC.

Sure thing. I'll probably wait for Bobert, though. Hopefully he can post later tonight. In the meantime, I'm tired as hell.

Oh, and @mewgirl99? I can't really say I've known you for long or at all, but it looks like you're going through a rough patch. I don't know how rough it is, or how long it'll last, and I'm kind of shitty at offering advice, but in those kinds of situations I've always tried to remember to stay smart, stay strong, and stay beautiful, especially on the inside. Things always get better eventually, and once you start thinking that they won't, it can be hard to pick yourself back up, especially if you've convinced yourself that there's no one out there who will stop and offer you a shoulder to lean on.

@lavulman Oh I see what you meant, just went back and fixed it :) I have a problem with slipping up with tenses when writing dialogue. Thanks for pointing it out though.

I'll post for Anya in the morning.

I'll post for Anya in the morning.

I feel like I've heard this before... :P

Sorry for not having posted anything and for the radio silence. I've been kept kinda busy the last few days trying to get out and see a few people. Anyways, if I don't post IC tonight expect something tomorrow :)

@lavulman Thank you! That means more than you probably think.

@Tracyarmav This time I meant it >_>

@Tracyarmav Somehow the tag broke ._.

I got close to finishing, but I need to leave for work now. I'll post tonight; I promise :)

If anyone can answer this by the time I get back, just so I can be sure; about what time is it in RP? Like, characters are eating dinner so it's some time in the evening but how late exactly just for consistency's sake?

@bobert778

I'd say..six or seven, sun is setting.

@bobert778

I'd say..six or seven, sun is setting.

^ we'll say 1830 local time. (6:30 pm if you need a translation)

@gravity22 Might wanna include the fact he just drove like a madman and evaded police capture in your post :p

@Shikaru yeah we posted at the same time i kept editing to make it fit

I shal wait for @gravity22 before posting to avoid a mess up with posting at the same time :p

@Shikaru@Tracyarmav I am going off to sleep. I will post my response when i need to in the morn.

@gravity22 Good night.

Yeah so guys, I am happy this is back in the works, but do you think you could wait for me and Apollo to start getting into the frey before posting so much? I mean one or two posts in conversation is fine, but seriously. I can't post daily, idk about Apollo, but I got other RPs, plus work and RL stuff. I'm not asking you to stop posting, but maybe put a break pedal to it after your 2nd post to allow people to catch up.