Chill out people. It's not done in the least. I rushed out what I wrote in like an hour or so and I probably won't have time to write more until, like, monday. I just cannot write well on my mobile.
Edit: See what I mean? I try to write something... well... different and I get torn to pieces.
I have to object to this.
Torn to pieces? Prince, and only Prince, offered constructive criticism. You can be angry at what I said, I suppose, but it's an accurate appraisal of what you have so far. What do you even mean by 'see what I mean?' You entered an unfinished submission, which isn't supposed to be done, and in what you have so far you've put more effort into making a point about gender relations than a coherent character or plausible story. I'm certain getting melodramatic won't make anyone appreciate your perspective more, or be more likely to get you points. Your entry could be good when you finish it on Monday, so why do you feel the need to play the victim now? Just wait, consider feedback if you're interested in others' perspectives, and show the viability of your content with a finished product when the time comes.
Involving a 'different' subject isn't the problem; relying on it to make your content good or sensible is. Many things are possible in the world of RWBY, particularly a noncanon one, but the more impossible the subject, the more attention and complexity needs to be given to it. Otherwise it's like throwing a few buzzwords into an essay with a weak context and expecting it to get an 'A'.
