Your writing is fine, you just need to give Leonard some more oomph.

Irish, calm yo titties and stick around. The standards aren't that high. It's just that we're at the intro post and everyone wants to show off. I mean, it's not like you judge the RWBY writing standards by the landing posts, right? XD

But hey, if you dunno hao2Leonard, you can PM me and we'll figure something out.

@Sky

lolYasuo. Not even that impressive. Does he kill his brother as well? In terms of his sword, there's nothing special about it, right? Basically, just a regular sword that's better than average? If he's been using it for a long time, it shouldn't be as durable as it once was. Unless you want to add some chuunibyou history to it's origins and such. Expand on the limits of his Undying Will. Because people die if they are killed. Is he able to just 'will' himself through things such as neurotoxins and severe bloodloss? And how exactly is Bamboo Grove a 'fighting style', if it's really just a buff?

lol 'catched'

Are you saying that he's able to make his skin as hard as steel then? If so, how exactly does he break melee weapons that are (e.g EVERY CHARACTER'S WEAPONS) able to crush/break/cut steel and such? I'll assume that bullets will still hurt him, even if he catches them. How far does his Alpha punch's shockwave go? And how powerful is said shockwave? And all things considered, does it just punch a fist-sized hole through something?

The Irish Tree said
I think I'm going to have to drop outta this, I can't really find ways to do anything with Leonard and I still feel like I'm below your guys' writing standards. Sorry.

Sap will be spilled...

The Irish Tree said
I think I'm going to have to drop outta this, I can't really find ways to do anything with Leonard and I still feel like I'm below your guys' writing standards. Sorry.

What kinda tree?
You already planted your roots.
And then I used you as map paper.

Irish Tree pls no stay everyone wants your irish wood!

Also I gonna change stuff Rodey, HOW ABOUT YOU POST HERE

IN THE MEANTIME[/caps]?

Also Click I is dissapoint, play less FF14 >:[

Sky, if you'd like me to not over your CS and go through all the processes to actually get your NPC accepted then sure, next time, I'll just pretend it doesn't exist, k?

And I'll post Index tomorrow. I have a schedule fo dis

CLICKY.

POST.

Classic Click.

You expect me to post when I am sleeping? Fools.

It's half-done. I'm making up for Sky's casualfag post.

Click This said
You expect me to post when I am sleeping? Fools. It's half-done. I'm making up for Sky's casualfag post.

Good, once you are done EH awaits you!

Wasn't really expecting any of you to care that much...
Fuck it, I'll stick around. Imma try to think of ways to make Leonard useful but not broken later, so until then:

Give yourself a gun like this.

Anderiel said
Give yourself a gun like this.

That's uh...a bit too big and...impossible for my tastes...
Maybe.

Get a giant Nazi Machine of Death.

Anderiel said
Give yourself a gun like this.

oh, thanks for reminding me that I haven't watch Nobunagun this week.

The Irish Tree said
Wasn't really expecting any of you to care that much...Fuck it, I'll stick around. Imma try to think of ways to make Leonard useful but not broken later, so until then:

Rubick living a life of denial.

Fake, your scary old man is now in the bucket.

Now post. Preferably before Click does, so we can now calculate time in Click-seconds.

Anderiel said
Fake, your scary old man is now in the bucket.

My scary old man shall endeavour to be the scary old man that gives cans of soda out for Halloween.