@Polyphemus, @Beekeeper, @ramblingbard
Subhas's old heart ached, putting great pain on his chest, but he managed to pull through without having a heart attack. As he looked for students that ran out, he would see two outside: Loralei, a popular teenage girl that could be described as a Mary Sue, and Teddy, a sixth grader who looked around in panic... What was he looking for? Then, Subhas heard moaning from around the corner, growing louder and louder every second.
Teddy couldn't find anywhere to hide in the whole schoolyard; it was nothing but an open area, albeit closed off by the gate, the only notable things being a tree near the southwest corner and all the buildings, such as the extra storage room, the cafeteria, the gym, the middle school classrooms, the band room and the main building with all the high school classrooms. Maybe he could run into one of those buildings? As the thought raced through his mind, he noticed Loralei, the girl who sat next to him and his friends, and the janitor, Subhas, behind him, having exited from the cafeteria.
Amidst all the panic, Loralei's asthma flared up, and she could hardly breathe. Her chest hurt immensely, and he inhaler was in the nurse's office... Soon, she collapsed from the pain, which was so strong she could've screamed. She began coughing loudly and wheezing, which alerted... Whatever it was around the corner. It was silent for a moment, before she heard footsteps. The footsteps began to speed up, and the moaning turned into growling.
Subhas's old heart ached, putting great pain on his chest, but he managed to pull through without having a heart attack. As he looked for students that ran out, he would see two outside: Loralei, a popular teenage girl that could be described as a Mary Sue, and Teddy, a sixth grader who looked around in panic... What was he looking for? Then, Subhas heard moaning from around the corner, growing louder and louder every second.
Teddy couldn't find anywhere to hide in the whole schoolyard; it was nothing but an open area, albeit closed off by the gate, the only notable things being a tree near the southwest corner and all the buildings, such as the extra storage room, the cafeteria, the gym, the middle school classrooms, the band room and the main building with all the high school classrooms. Maybe he could run into one of those buildings? As the thought raced through his mind, he noticed Loralei, the girl who sat next to him and his friends, and the janitor, Subhas, behind him, having exited from the cafeteria.
Amidst all the panic, Loralei's asthma flared up, and she could hardly breathe. Her chest hurt immensely, and he inhaler was in the nurse's office... Soon, she collapsed from the pain, which was so strong she could've screamed. She began coughing loudly and wheezing, which alerted... Whatever it was around the corner. It was silent for a moment, before she heard footsteps. The footsteps began to speed up, and the moaning turned into growling.