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@kapuchu

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Hello Hello. I had this crazy idea that on vacation I would have all this free time in the evening after dark to write and what not. So what did I do instead? I slept. Days in the ocean and then tumble exhausted into bed. Lather rinse repeat. Got home Christmas eve to "make this and this and this for Christmas dinner" ...its finally all over though.

Lets get this moveable feast on the road. I mean the story. Yes. We are in no danger of being eaten. *looks suspiciously about* none. I swear.
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Lucie will haunt you if you get her killed. I she swears it :P
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she will have to join the club. I have a lot of ghosts rattling around in my life.
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Stuff has been written!
Sorry it took so long. Stuff happened, and Mono has other stuff to do!

So... yeah.

Stuff.
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Stuff has been written!
Sorry it took so long. Stuff happened, and Mono has other stuff to do!

So... yeah.

Stuff.


Finally!!! It was very enlightening to read (: I'll work on another post, but it won't be up anytime soon, depending if Astarael gets to it before me.
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Is it still possible to join in this game? It sounds really interesting.

I already made a character if there is indeed room for 1 more.

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Is it still possible to join in this game? It sounds really interesting.

I already made a character if there is indeed room for 1 more.



I would like to think we still are (: I see no immediate qualms with your CS, however, it will need approval first from @Astarael42
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That's an interesting one. As Macabre said, I think there's still place for you, if our lovely Overmistress (Astarael) wills it :p

That being said, there are a few things I'd like to point out, just for your own benefit :)
One is that the Psychic people aren't very well known, at least not those with real abilities. The Society and such, are hidden from the light of day. For that reason she can't really "Theorize" that her talent manifested when she moved to "a city with a lot of psychics." That is, of course, unless that Theory came to be once she had become a member of the Society?

Second is how she is more susceptible to other psychics meddling with her mind because she doesn't have a physical barrier. This is mainly just my idea of things, but I don't think she should be more or less vulnerable when she uses her Astral Projection. Psychic abilities are really just mind-stuff, and so being in a body shouldn't affect it. I'd say it shouldn't have any importance for her vulnerability.

And a final, minor, comment. Your background doesn't mention how she caught wind of the Society, got into it, and so on. Did she get recruited? Did she find it on her own (like Lucie, my character), or anything inbetween. I don't think it's a requirement that it's in there, but I would personally like to know... If only because I'm curious :P
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Thanks for the advice!

In regards to her theorizing about the city having lots of psychics that was actually an assumption on her part. She reasoned out that if she had powers that others would as well and in a city there would be a higher chance that there were more like her. It wasn't something she knew for a fact. I'll change CS to make that clearer.

For her vulnerability, I mostly added that in as a way to balance it out. If you don't think it's needed I'll take it out.

I totally forgot about adding in how she's part of the society. If you're still interested in that.

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As to her reason for joining the Society, I'll withhold judgement until Astarael has her say :) That's the Game Master, btw :D

Also, by definition, the abilities our characters possess are overpowered. Lucie can gain any piece of information about anything if she touches it, and no one can stop her. For example, she could get the exact number of times you have opened a door throughout your entire life if she so desired :P All it requires is that there's physical contact between you and her ^^

So yeah, I don't think the vulnerability is necessary.
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Post will be up tonight and PM will be sent re new character.
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Hi, can I play?
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If you are interested please make up a character following the guidelines in the "characters" section and I'll look it over and we can go from there.
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Thanks. I'll get to it.
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Ok, I'm done. It's a little short, but I'll edit it as I go along playing the game. Until then, can someone please paraphrase what has happened so far?
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I know I'm not GM in this RP, but I'm gonna be blunt with you. That character sheet is just too short, too thin. Look at the rest of ours, compare the length, the detail, and so on.

That character sheet of yours has a place in casual at best, if not "Free". I'm not the one who gives the final say, but to me that's just not good enough :/ Not for "Advanced".
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@bloonewb Yes your character is a bit underdeveloped to start this RP. Take a look at the detail the others put into theirs and use it as a guideline. We want to get to know your character through the character sheet. If you want to flesh it out a bit more then I'll PM you with any things that need to be edited/changed before it's ready for play. Also there are only 23 posts in the in-character; I would prefer that you read them as having other's paraphrase does not do any Advanced RP justice; we write in detail to create a indepth story.

to the rest of you I'm sorry I didn't get it up last night; I had every intention of waking up to write and slept the night through instead. working now. only got the forest portion done...
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Yeah, I get it. I'm more used to playing Casual or Free. I'll see if I can add more content. Actually, it's my first time trying Advanced. Thanks for not just kicking me out. Send me the PM.
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