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Quick question: Do the rebels live in the villages as spies, or do they have their own base?
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Boom. I hate how long this took.



There's probably a few things I missed, but I'm mostly concerned with his abilities atm.
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Quick question: Do the rebels live in the villages as spies, or do they have their own base?


Yes and yes. Rebels have several makeshift bases of operation, but for the most part individuals have their identities preserved and merely pretend to be allied with the Confederation. The smart rebels that don't get caught are the ones that don't seem like they are rebels. There are some, however, who can be considered "career" rebels whose identities have been found out so they don't hang around the cities unless they are on a mission or soon will be.

@tex I'll review your sheet in a few minutes.
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As per my new norm, my review is in blue.



There's probably a few things I missed, but I'm mostly concerned with his abilities atm.


Overall he's looking good. I don't have any big issues, but a few small ones I'd like to see addressed before I give it my seal of approval.
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@j8cob What are the smaller issues you're concerned with?

EDIT: OH, THEY'RE IN THE SPOILER.
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They in blue in the sheet itself. I ain't repeating.
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I'll be done work around eight. Will hopefully finish my character by then
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Ah, I've gone through the details and I can definitely change it up. Not right now of course, cuz I'm tired as hell.

To address a few of your inquiries that don't require huge edits:

Asexual / Hetero-romantic

Incapable of Sexual attraction, capable of romantic attraction to those of the opposite sex.
Okay, so he can create liquid silver and manipulate existing silver. Can he absorb silver that he didn't create himself?

He cannot absorb natural silver, or any other source of silver. Potentially, he would be able to absorb Silver from Mirror pools that his family members have created. Considering the fact that nearly everyone he knows is dead, I don't see that ever occurring.
You said Ray a few times when you meant Zay. fix plz

SHIT. I'll fix that now actually.
25ft is less than 15m.

Dammit, Meant to type 25 yards. Curse my hands.
Would contact also hurt Zay?

Yes, assuming the heated silver touched him, it would burn him as well as anyone else.
How does silver become steel? Or do you mean it just hardens to a similar density?

Yes, it hardens to a similar density. Pardon my mistypes.
Technically it'd still phase around swords, not through them.

Yeah, another edit to be made.

will fix the Lore issue afterwards, as stated.
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Once they're fixed you'll be gucci. Don't post the finished product in the character tab just yet, as you need an acceptance from either Partisan or Savato as well. The whole two approvals thing.
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I reviewed Masato with @Lost in my Mind over Skype, so no fancy blue review will be posted here. I am publicly posting my approval of his sheet now that he has made the requested edits.

insert witty one-liner here
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Sadly, I have to work today, so I won't be able to post my CS until midday/later tonight since I'm not done with it yet. It is in the making though.
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I shall just pop a huge paragraph in the picture-slot.

~Sigh~


Do this and I can provide you with a picture that resembles it. Especially if it's a female. I have countless of pictures JUST for this purpose simply because I spend hours looking for pictures. Males is harder because they all look either overly sexualised or stupid.

Question: Do we need to be providing actual pictures of our characters? Not all of us are artists, or have the easiest time finding "closest to the truth" pictures.


See above.

Oh shit it's TEX AND HATMAN

Imma sign up too!

Writing paragraphs isn't really the easiest thing for me, but if I'm allowed in, I'll do my best!

I'm not going to be doing one liners though, I'll always make sure of that.


One liners are a no-go, but generally if you are in a team with others, and they write 2 paragraphs, it becomes easier to respond with similar sizes.

I'm interested in this roleplay. Though, will this roleplay be a high-casual low-advanced type of roleplay, or is it simply casual?

Also, are you accepting still? Because I read that the IC will be tomorrow, so I would assume no more CS will be accepted to prepare for the IC post.


I second what spodes says, though I want to add that we're 'simply' casual but we're probably closer to high casual given the cast we have now. Don't let that scare you off I guess?

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@Partisan@Savato@j8cobWell, here Akio 11 years later. . .the years and her creator have not been kind to her. Bumped her up to jounin, gave her some added jutsu, of which only the S rank could be a problem. I tried to balance it out, but not sure I succeeded.



Also bringing Tatsuya back as a proper Chunin, since I didn't get to do all that much with him last time. Still working on some minor details in the history, and ignore the A rank, O'm going to get rid of it cause even I once it's just too much. Consider it a placeholder for another technique for now as I figure out whether Tatsuya will even get an A-rank jutsu.

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@Hatman1801 just a reminder, you're supposed to put CS's in the OOC first, then transfer them over once they've been accepted. Unless you got permission before in a PM or something, in which case, ignore this.
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Review in red

Boom. I hate how long this took.

Me too. I hate waiting for stuff.



There's probably a few things I missed, but I'm mostly concerned with his abilities atm.


Egh, I don't really have quarrels with the character. Fix the history and you can post it in the character bin.
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I know, but now I can't figure out how to A delete it, and B get the stupid hider to work. I was spending so much time using the other posts as cross-ref that I didn't even realize I was typing it in the CHAR tab instead of OOC.
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@Raijinslayer Should I grade those two?
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I know, but now I can't figure out how to A delete it, and B get the stupid hider to work.


Deleting posts is impossible, just post it here and edit it into the char bin if you get accepted.
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