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I've decided to take a slightly different path on account of the many changes that would need to be made to fit Markus in somewhere, and swap from a silver-tongue to a more conventional lordly archetype -- though a good deal of focus is still placed on charisma and persuasion and intimidation.


Now do me a favor and shower me with criticism. I'm particularly worried about the level of remaining civilization that i've implied the more central polis of the former Atlanteans still retain.
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Although I PMed it to our fancy GM (and received the feedback needed), I'll share my CS here so as to join the cool club of having written something. ^_^



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What is someone from Thule? A Thulian? :D
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Yay! I was starting to think mine would be the only character who wasn't lord/king/overtyrant of something. :p

Thulian, I would think. Maybe Thulite?
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What is someone from Thule? A Thulian? :D


Thule. The nation is Thule, the a person from Thule is Thule both singularly and plurally, and is described as being Thule.

Make from it what you will.

"Corinna of Thule." "Corrina the Thule." "Corrina of the Thule."
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Thulese, I believe is actually the proper usage.
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Thulese, I believe is actually the proper usage.


You know what, scratch what I said, this is much better. I forgot that particular adjective-form even existed. Silly me.

Uhh, anyway, @DeltaV Ioannes looks great. I'm glad we're getting, y'know, some more people that aren't from Thule.

I think your claim to the remaining civilization of Atlantis is justified. They were all in the deepest heartlands of Atlantis, away from the thick of the fighting, and the king of Archarnae was wise enough to know that the worst was yet to come, and holed up rather than try to capitalize on the chaos.

Fun fact: the utterly ransacked captial of Atlantis was known as Aquilonia.
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Thulesque, Thulish, Thuline, Thule-American. all good possibilities.
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My character is posted, so those of you that I've cleared are free to post yours as well.
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Nice little cast we have setting up. I am somewhat curious as to how all these characters are going to be thrown into the mix together; are we looking at like, a Warcraft 3 situation where your character approaches us all with ominous messages about fate and whatnot?
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"A Witch King, a True King, a grizzled old Sage, an Over-Tyrant, a hunter and an alchemist walk into a bar..."
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...The seventh person ducks.
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Flint's done! Sorry I took forever.
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So, no rush, but are we waiting on a few more of the people from earlier in the thread/the interest check, or are we ready to go? I'm rarin' to get started, I think this is going to be very interesting.
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Nice little cast we have setting up. I am somewhat curious as to how all these characters are going to be thrown into the mix together; are we looking at like, a Warcraft 3 situation where your character approaches us all with ominous messages about fate and whatnot?


I can definately see our more imperially-minded characters clashing against each other, and our more roguish, singular characters, while solitary, have enough in common that they should be easy to group together. I can see two or three separate plot threads diverging at the start, with the characters slowly winding together.

Flint's done! Sorry I took forever.


Looks good to me. Bally well accepted.

So, no rush, but are we waiting on a few more of the people from earlier in the thread/the interest check, or are we ready to go? I'm rarin' to get started, I think this is going to be very interesting.


Uhh, I've got one buddy I'm waiting on, really, but since I'm back home and won't be busy with bullshit for a while yet, I'll start working on the IC.

So, how this will work is that as each of you post IC, I'll give each individual player or group of players their own response to work with. I'll be playing my own character, but also playing with each of you directly. So your first IC post should be an intro the the plot that your character will be involving themselves in. First step on their journey, as it were. No time piddling about to start with, we're jumping right into the story.
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Color me interested! Mind if I make a CS?
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Color me interested! Mind if I make a CS?


Sure. Throw one on up on there.
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@Dead Cruiser Here it is. Tell me what you think.

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I like him! I wondered if we'd have a more soldier/warrior oriented character. One question: did you mean to write 'the ends justify the means', in his Ideals, or was it an intentional play on words?

Oh, and just letting y'all know, Emily is going to start her story on a game trail, hunting the biggest, baddest mutant anyone's seen in Borea for a while. Anyone who wants to hop on that train/connect their character's plot to it somehow is hereby invited to do so!
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My only minor, mostly-baseless criticism is that it seems a little bit strange for the ambitious leader of a mercenary company to also value friendship and loyalty. Generally mercenaries were considered to be of very wavering loyalty (which seems to match the character's goal to eventually carve out a kingdom for himself) -- hence why the term nowadays describes someone who forgoes ethics for the sake of money.
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@TheWizardLizard Thank you for the kind words. And no, it wasn't intentional - I must have missed that on my revision. I may have Damion and the Crimson Company tag along/meet up with Emily if they get approved :)

EDIT: @DeltaV I probably didn't make it clear enough - Damion only values loyalty/friendship towards him. He truly does value his friendships though, and perceives them as so. I think it adds a bit more nuance to Damion's character and makes him less of an archetype. Although, I value blank slates, as it allows (in my opinion) for greater and less restricted character development.
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