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@Lost in my Mind You're up to post buddy.
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I know, sorry for holding things up. Things came up and prevented me from being here.
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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Akai no Senshi
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Hi there, guys. I'm Akai no Senshi. I'm gonna join this RP at some point so I hope I could be welcomed. This RP looks really awesome.
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@Akai no Senshi I had the chance to read your PM as well. Welcome!

Feel free to post your CS here so it can be reviewed.
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Hi there, guys. I'm Akai no Senshi. I'm gonna join this RP at some point so I hope I could be welcomed. This RP looks really awesome.


They're all crazy, run, run as fast as you can.

Really though, the more the merrier, it's always nice to see someone new to the guild.
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@Lost in my Mind I am disappoint, son.

We'll be advancing today. @Tex That means I'm probably not gonna reply until we advance the plot, and that also means we'll probably not get to fight. @Nero same goes for you. Though, I feel like this'd be good material for a collaboration at some point. Agreed?
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@Blue Demon Digging the avatar/signature combo.
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@Blue Demon Digging the avatar/signature combo.


Blame Netflix for adding Fantasia to their lineup. :D
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@Akai no Senshi Two things:

1) You post your CS in the OOC before posting it in the accepted Character Tab.

2) Fix the coding, please.
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THERE YOU GO.



Edit: So, the things I changed.
1) The appearance thing. Bad contradiction on my part, sorry about that.
2) The double negatives. Shit man that was like a fifth grader mistake.
3) I didn't change anything about it because I think maybe I didn't convey it properly but the truth was basically his father telling him that he is an Uchiha before he died and after Saketsui got Sharingan. Yeah, uh, I think I mentioned he didn't know about that for a good while. I THINK.
Four) Uh, I changed Samurai Sabre Technique to Flying Swallow. I'm not sure if this is more plausible but I'm going to stand here hoping for the best.
5) I didn't remove his Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu bcuz it's cool 2 me bcuz no one likes henge anymore and i like being mr. special snowflake
Six) I can't actually redo his History right now, because it's 5 am. If you think it's bad enough not to deserve approval, that's fine, I'll get to remaking it later on when I'm not half-dead. I appreciate the feedback though. And yeah, Movie style is the only style I got. I haven't been RPing for too long.
7) i tried to make him as naruto as i possibly could but i ended up making sauceke rip
8) there's no more but i like the number 8 so yeah.

But that's all I could manage for now. Small changes, I know, but I mean, it's what my brain can work out right now.
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@Akai no Senshi Hiders don't work because you've messed up a code within the CS.

And here starts your quest at finding it!
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by GrafRoy Zeppeli
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It is horrible to have an error in coding, even if it is only BBCode.

Imagine having to find the error (a MINIMAL error) in 5000+ lines of java code. That was basically what I did for my final project of school ¬¬
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I found them :D

Ahahaha.

(Because I'm bored~)
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@Akai no Senshi add an /indent at the very end of your CS and then put hiders and it will work.

I AM THE BBCODE GOD.
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@Akai no Senshi add an /indent at the very end of your CS and then put hiders and it will work.

I AM THE BBCODE GOD.

He also failed to close an [i]. You can see it floating in the aether.

Edit: Yeah, I wasn't sure how to delete it and put it here so I panicked and just replaced it with a dot. Now this is here. And uh, my hiders aren't working so I just removed them. Sorry about that.

You can't delete anything. Only mods can BTW.
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@Akai no Senshi I've to ask, though.

Are you a fellow weeaboo, Red Warrior?
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@Blue Demon Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu.

Coding is a bitch, even with simple BBcodes.
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@Blue Demon Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu.

Coding is a bitch, even with simple BBcodes.


I love coding. Ish. I'd never want to be a programmer.

And way to point it out. I was trying to make him suffer to find it....

*Is secretlyobviously very evil*
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@Akai no Senshi I've to ask, though.

Are you a fellow weeaboo, Red Warrior?


I am indeed a fellow weeaboo, GrafuRoy Zepperi.
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@Akai no Senshi Give me a minute to clear my table and finish my video and I'll go have a look.
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