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@Raijinslayer No, no, no NOOOO WHERE IS TATSUYA?!

And then Lightning Force.
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@Savato@Blue Demon never hit me up for a Collab and I've got nothing for him to do right now sense it's basically muck around time until j8cob has Mirai tell him his job.
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Technically he's kind of supposed to be in the outpost. And wait until shit happens. Which is soon. Just 'cause I told you your team doesn't exempt Tatsuya from work, young Padawan.
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@SavatoI got that, and he is there, but I'd rather finish doing the previous interaction before I have him actually doing stuff. If shit gets moving before that happens, he's in his room studying up on Kajiya seals and testing out a few of his own.
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@Raijinslayer Yeah well ... You're just a fag!
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@SavatoTakes one to know one, am I right?
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Good damn, now I have to write four IC posts at the same time.

*puts headband on*

I can do this without passing out! I think...
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@Raijinslayer You've been in the chat. You know what I'm surrounded with.

@GrafRoy Zeppeli Go full Korean.
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@Savato Nope, its not working. O_o; I see the BBCode for the hider, and I even copy-pasted from the guide. So what am I missing?
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I fixed it anyway, because I'm a great person. That and for some reason you're barely reachable.

Review is in green. You can remove my retarded comments when taking this.



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That was fucking wild. I am done with my post here. If I screwed up somewhere, I'll fix it once I get back.
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@Savato I go to school from 7:30 to 4, and to be honest, the character itself seemed more daunting than any of the posts I would make. Sort of a hurdle for creativity (that, and a few RL errands). Posting I can do once a day, and these just seem to be a few paragraphs.

Right! Explanation/thought process feedback on the feedback!

Haiyū Chikamatsu Sasori 2.0

Be happy I tried to do something a bit more original than another Uzumaki or Uchiha.
Undecided - Double Agent for the Red Sages Yeah, be aware the death toll is massive if you want to pull a stunt like that. Especially if the guy has family. You've been warned.
Less of a 'Ah, I'm a total badass James Bond,' and more of 'Sh*t, rock and a hard place, and I can't turn anywhere'. He's more or less at the whim's of the Confederation and the Sages.

Haiyū is quiet and insightful, if a bit hard around the edges when dealing with others I'm already smelling the barbecue sauce-ke from France.
I'm stealing this. Stealing and copyrighting.

my name is haiyu, and this is jackass.
YEEHAW!!!!!

you are the only person who has managed to tl;dr this part. Holy shit

I consider it a gift. Something something power, something something irresponsibility.

the insane amount of leverage the confeds can have on him. it's almost sad, except I'm a sadistic dipshit taco

Sort of the idea. The puppeteer is a puppet. Besides, you said this was a Slice of Life and Combat RP, so, I decided to actually have some Slice of Family life.

~Will nix the Mind Body Jutsu. I figured 200+ years was enough for stuff to spread around, but no prob.
~The Dustless Bewildering Cover, never seen it used. I know its in the anime, I know who Mu is, but never actually watched that part. The way I understood it, it was his mastery of the Technique which made him so op. Haiyu of course has no such mastery, but I'd like to imagine its a more basic form of the A rank jutsu. My understanding of it seems to be the same as your compromise; that it was an effective hide from dojutsu. So, win win?
~Eh, the needleshot is just that: no poison, just "I don't have any puppets? NEEDLES!"
~The fire-release seals were my reasoning to try and give my Chunin level character a wrist mounted flamethrower~ Can I haz pretty pleaz?
~The bite is the only poison he has on him... maybe a paralyzing or sluggish poison? Effects are like any of the Sound-Nin's mind effecting stuff?
~Mamushi DOES need chakra threads. Still a puppet, but as chunin and only one puppet, he needs only the five fingers. Fortunately, those are from the hand its coiled on, and they kind of go in reverse. Different finger positions and combinations trigger different effects. The middle finger raised high to the sky shoots a banner that says "Fuck Yoooooooouuuuuu!"

Issue with all puppets is that when they're broke, they're broke, they have limited number of tricks, the joints are weak, and the users are meh at close combat.

Right, all kidding aside, I'll get to the changes tomorrow. Haiyu was honestly not intended to be the annoying Uchiha 2.0, but moreso someone whose just... tired and desperate. Had to grow up quicker than he would of liked, and doesn't have the same mental luxury as some people. He doesn't fight for a cause, doesn't believe in other side, and is pretty much the poor bastard literally stuck between the Red Sages and the Confederation. Any advice for conveying more of that than a delicious dish from France?

Also, I'll probably flesh his history more.
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Sort of the idea. The puppeteer is a puppet. Besides, you said this was a Slice of Life and Combat RP, so, I decided to actually have some Slice of Family life. I guess it is typical of a whimsical life to have an atrocious cat person eat your face.

~Will nix the Mind Body Jutsu. I figured 200+ years was enough for stuff to spread around, but no prob. You figured wrong.
~The Dustless Bewildering Cover, never seen it used. I know its in the anime, I know who Mu is, but never actually watched that part. The way I understood it, it was his mastery of the Technique which made him so op. Haiyu of course has no such mastery, but I'd like to imagine its a more basic form of the A rank jutsu. My understanding of it seems to be the same as your compromise; that it was an effective hide from dojutsu. So, win win? As long as it trolls the Uchiha and Hyuuga, I'm good.
~Eh, the needleshot is just that: no poison, just "I don't have any puppets? NEEDLES!" Wiki said poison. No loose cannons.
~The fire-release seals were my reasoning to try and give my Chunin level character a wrist mounted flamethrower~ Can I haz pretty pleaz? If it's like Sasori's sure w/e, just don't shape it in various BS ways.
~The bite is the only poison he has on him... maybe a paralyzing or sluggish poison? Effects are like any of the Sound-Nin's mind effecting stuff? Sure, DEFINE it in your CS. Poison effects are often useful. But instant death ones are gay as fuck.
~Mamushi DOES need chakra threads. Still a puppet, but as chunin and only one puppet, he needs only the five fingers. Fortunately, those are from the hand its coiled on, and they kind of go in reverse. Different finger positions and combinations trigger different effects. The middle finger raised high to the sky shoots a banner that says "Fuck Yoooooooouuuuuu!"Ok Gud

Issue with all puppets is that when they're broke, they're broke, they have limited number of tricks, the joints are weak, and the users are meh at close combat. Issue with jutsu is that they eat chakra and are often one trick ponies with smurt people. Yeah, they count as jutsu in a way.

Right, all kidding aside, I'll get to the changes tomorrow. Haiyu was honestly not intended to be the annoying Uchiha 2.0, but moreso someone whose just... tired and desperate. Had to grow up quicker than he would of liked, and doesn't have the same mental luxury as some people. He doesn't fight for a cause, doesn't believe in other side, and is pretty much the poor bastard literally stuck between the Red Sages and the Confederation. Any advice for conveying more of that than a delicious dish from France?

The Sasuke sauce joke is mostly a jab at whatever looks like Sasuke. Often calm, quiet and collected individuals with questionable social skills. It's gotten so common here that Barbecue Sauce-ke became a meme I unfortunately created. The character is fine. Also no, I will not share delicious French dishes to you filthy peasants.

Also, I'll probably flesh his history more. k

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@Dawnscroll yes slice of life n all that, we haven't really got to that part yet as we're just setting everything off but eventually I hope we can get to some more relaxed stuff.
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@NeroI edited my post to suit your copy+pasted late one. Don't worry about changing it now.
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I'll post tomorrow after my class.


Cough.
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Whelp. I'm gonna make this official. I'm gonna drop out. Have fun. Hope this doesn't make too many problems.

@RaijinslayerAnd just assume Noriko cleaned you out. :D Because you're not gonna see her again.
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@Blue Demon Well that sure sucks. Hard time keeping up or just fed up? Can be both too.

Welp, it was nice having you around C:
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@Blue Demon Well that sure sucks. Hard time keeping up or just fed up? Can be both too.

Welp, it was nice having you around C:


Just the not keeping up part. I had to take today off too because of RL and I just couldn't find the motivation to shift through all the posts. :\

If you guys ever do a slower placed Naruto game hit me up.
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@Blue Demon Another alternative would just to have one character.

You'd only follow one faction, and often just a select few characters. You'd have an easier time being regular.

Plus the pace now is slower because other people are 'busy' (code name for lazy)

EDIT: Also I realize I riddled my IC post with typos. My retardation can't follow when I'm in a hurry. Won't edit it though, enjoy the typofest.
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