@Mr_PinkEhhh. . . I know how RWBY is but that's a lot of electricity to be able to do that. Basically shooting out a lightning bolt. If that's what she can do, with a lesset ability of temporarily stunning someone with lesser blasts, than I'd be cool with it. Lightning bolts are strong, and I'm pretty sure if it can split a Tree, it can break through Aura. So make it one of her more trainung abilities and I'd be cool with it.
Well, the way I pictured it was more of a lashing or whipping type deal as well as the throwing. So for instance, rather than throwing a lightning bolt that would cut the tree after a few, it would more be a factor of slicing at it say 6 or 7 times until you reached through to the other side. I'd be happy to nerf this if you still think it's a problem.
@ChronothesisOkay, this Semblance doesn't work for me if the compulsion is absolute and if they can't resist it. You can make it difficult and/or add a bit of a temporary debuff to make it more viable. A suggestion I have is that the semblance is activated upon responding to his call out. That isn't as easy to figure out, can be used sneakily, plus it puts a reasonable restraint.
Reason for the dislike is that it's instant loss in a team battle if you can't look at the others.
@ChronothesisOkay, this Semblance doesn't work for me if the compulsion is absolute and if they can't resist it. You can make it difficult and/or add a bit of a temporary debuff to make it more viable. A suggestion I have is that the semblance is activated upon responding to his call out. That isn't as easy to figure out, can be used sneakily, plus it puts a reasonable restraint.
Reason for the dislike is that it's instant loss in a team battle if you can't look at the others.
Oh, pyro said it was fine. I'll send you the titanpad url to talk to him.
I can't use the pad right now, unfortunately. But yeah, this power is interesting, but absolutes are always iffy in an RP. If Kouki and Pyro are cool with it, then it's out of my hands, but without any limitations or weaknesses, I can't accept it as is.
I can't use the pad right now, unfortunately. But yeah, this power is interesting, but absolutes are always iffy in an RP. If Kouki and Pyro are cool with it, then it's out of my hands, but without any limitations or weaknesses, I can't accept it as is.
We're editing and changing it. I'll just send the edit of the semblance to you whenever we are done.
“I bring down the hammer of justice upon those who deserve it.” -Amari Cross
THE BASICS
Name: Amari Cross
Alias: Azure Cyclone
Team: TBD (Maybe M.A.S.K. ?)
Birth Date
Age: 17
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Designation: Student/Vigilante
APPEARANCE
In-Depth Appearance
Credit: Persona 4 Character is Naoto Shirogane
Character: Naoto Shirogane Persona 4
Credit: Avatar: The Last Airbender its at the base of their neck, in the back
GETTING TO KNOW ME
Likes & Dislikes ✔ You’ll Find Out ✘ You’ll Find Out
Weapons: A pair of curved short swords called Disparate Justice, as well as Dust-fueled rollerblades, which can be used in conjunction with many aerokinesis techniques.
Yes, this can lead to a lot of twirling and kicking
DELVING DEEPER
Personality ♦ Chaotic Good ♦ sees self as the agent of justice ♦ Protective as fuck if she likes you, otherwise, doesn’t care ♦ fiercely independent ♦
Place of Origin: Vale
History The only child of the Cross family, owners of Cross Armaments, a company that makes good weapons, if not the top of the line, their main selling point being who they will sell to, namely anyone, giving Amari an… interesting moral compass. Raised as not only a business woman, but also as a warrior, Amari was trained to fight by her family, and then enrolled in Signal academy once she was of age, graduating to Beacon after Signal.
Her parent’s dealings with all sorts, from crime syndicates to governments, lead to her growing up around some interesting, if shady, characters,from crime syndicate bosses, to anarchists, to the leaders of various thieving crews, and many more. They are what helped her develop that bizarre Code of Ethics, and while she may have fond memories of some of them, the first and foremost lesson she learned from her parents shady dealings is Ruthlessness. If you have a target, you take your target, and let nothing like feelings stand in your way. The one thing she refuses to do is kill her quarries.
During her childhood and young adult life, however, she read what could be easily considered far too many comics, as well as stories of heros and villains, mixed with her particular moral code, lead to her eventually putting together a costume, namely a mask, and going out to fight crime…. Leading to her getting her ass handed to her, repeatedly. She learned quickly, and soon turned into a force to be reckoned with, using her semblance as well as her weapons. While she couldn’t be everywhere at once, and so couldn’t complete goals as grandiose as wiping out all crime in the city. what she could, and did, do, is take on more high profile criminals, quickly earning herself a… mixed reputation. You see, she catches criminals, but her methods are questionable at best, downright illegal at worst, often leaving her quarries, aka victims, beaten, bloody and bruised, though never killed, as well as breaking and entering, exploiting people, blackmail when needed… she is really more of an anti-hero more than anything else. She goes by the Alias Azure Cyclone
Extra Anything extra we need to know
My personal semblance would probably be shape shifting or telekinesis
@greywolf375Those person has my approval, since we've already discussed the semblance, and Silme's respect.
My idea is that these two have a long history having fought each other, and sometimes together when the thugs or some Grimm corner them, numerous times over their respective career, and they only know each other by their aliases.
