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Sorry for not posting. I have half one written up and I'll try to finish it tonight. Finals/Ski Trip have thrown off my writing schedule.

As for location, I'll draw it up now.

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No worries, though I was waiting for you before my next update. Though if I hadn't heard from you by tonight, I would have posted an update omitting Damion and Emily.

Anyway, get a post up when you can. Also, your image link is broken. I recommend hosting on imgur.

Also also, as a more general announcement, we may have another new player joining us shortly; my friend that I've mentioned a couple of times previously.
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Anyway, get a post up when you can. Also, your image link is broken. I recommend hosting on imgur.


Will do, and I did. Guess I copied the link wrong -- try now.

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@TheWizardLizard Do you want to post again for Emily before I update you and VoiD?
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Yeah, I'll get a short one together quick-like.
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Let me know what needs changing. I'm pretty sure something will.

EDIT: Also, feel free to give me an idea of where a good place for her to be. I was thinking of having Safiyyah be somewhere in Atlantean lands, or maybe in Thule (not Ultima Thule). Opinions?

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Let me know what needs changing. I'm pretty sure something will.

EDIT: Also, feel free to give me an idea of where a good place for her to be. I was thinking of having Safiyyah be somewhere in Atlantean lands, or maybe in Thule (not Ultima Thule). Opinions?



Okay, so Safiyyah looks good. The only thing I'd note is that the initial invasion of the Lemurians took place about thirty years before she was born, which makes the sudden invasion of her home seem sort of anachronistic. You mention the Ivory Kingdoms a fair few times, so perhaps her home was an Iiramite trade-city somewhere on the border between the Sand and Ivory Kingdoms? Which was then sacked by a southward-traveling fragment of the Lumerian horde?

That's basically my only gripe, I really do like this character.

In OTHER NEWS, uh, it's late where I am and I have a lot to reply to, so I'll try and get a response up tomorrow. Hang onto your butts, things are gonna start getting wild!
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Okay, I can definitely go fix that. I'll drum up a name for the city she's from after I wake up a bit, and then I'll make a few edits. This probably means the wealth and contentment of her family was more of an illusion than anything else...

EDIT: Here's take two. Changes made in the history section (highlighted by yellow temporarily). If I have approval with these changes, I'll post Safiyyah's sheet into the Characters section and make my first post.

Also, I have a fascination with finding music that fits scenes when I write. Would it be out of place if I were to link medieval-ish soundtracks when writing up a post? For instance, while writing about walking through the smoldering ruins of a village and being attacked by bandits, I might insert a link to a soundtrack on YouTube that I feel fits the situation. Like that. Except, y'know, in the roleplay itself. Should I avoid this? Do so sparingly?

Finally, here's where I'm thinking of having her start off. It's a somewhat central location that lets my character get yanked in whatever direction fits the overarching plot best. This puts her near enough to Aquilona (or what WAS Aquilona) and close enough to Thule and Borea to go that way as well.

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@TheWizardLizard Forgot to mention that lances would be identified by the Knight who leads them. So instead of "Third Lance" it would be "Ser Something's lance". Just for future reference.
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@Shorticus

Safiyya looks good! Put her in the character section whenever, and put up an IC post when it's convenient for you.

I don't mind the occasional music link, but keep it sparing so that it stays poignant.

And her starting location is fine, no worries there.
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You guys can work out the meeting however you like, collaborations or whatever. Try not to let the collab be the death of your plotline, though. A little ghostwriting goes a long way, in my experience.
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@VoiD I'm okay with a collab if you want, but I think our dear master GM is correct that it would be most time-efficient for us both to write separately, with occasional ghost writing of each other's characters to keep things moving. I'm perfectly fine with you writing for Emily as much as you think is necessary, just so long as you stay true to the spirit of her character and don't go overboard (I'm sure there won't be a problem).

I can probably get a post up tomorrow if you'd prefer, or you can post first. Whichever you like.
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EDIT: Random double posts are random? My bad.
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@TheWizardLizard Totally fine with that. Feel free to make up characters in the Company and use the established ones as you see fit.

EDIT: It would probably be best for you to write the interaction between Damion and Emily. Just know Damion wants to hire Emily and is initially skeptical of her. I can get a post up tonight if you just want to write that small scene and PM it to me, or I can just sort of walk around it in my post. Whatever's more convenient.
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Howzit goin ladies and germs?
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You changed your avatar. 2spooky4me.
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Pretty good! Also eager to see what happens.
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Sorry, didn't see that edit about writing for Damion until just now. Sadly I will be unable to do so until later, as I'm a bit busy today.

And I think Khaelavna just took a few more levels in 'antagonist'. Holy shit.
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Sorry, didn't see that edit about writing for Damion until just now. Sadly I will be unable to do so until later, as I'm a bit busy today.

And I think Khaelavna just took a few more levels in 'antagonist'. Holy shit.


Boo.
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The moral of this story, my friends, is that when a demon priest offers you candy if you get in his van, you tell him NO.
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