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It was been my intention to really make Altaea feel like it's in the Late Middle Ages, but I've realized that it's got a Middle Renaissance - Early Modern period vibe. I've also realize that there must be room for more interaction and so far, I don't intend for the story-direction to be linear or one-dimensional. I wanted to keep the story confined to certain section within Voltas, the former Valanian capital so as to keep all the characters together and allow for more interaction and growth, but I'd like to know all your two cents about all this. This next episode will allow for huge opportunities and several major plot developments that may possibly change the future for centuries to come.


I believe that the players should be able to leave Voltas, or even separate from the party for some periods if their agenda requires so, and the plot allows. Our party has many high-profile targets, and having them together in the Capital for extended periods would be a stretch in my opinion, let alone being able to stay in cities that are supposed to serve Royalty that wishes harm for us.

And frankly, Altaea's world has a lot of effort put in it. It feels alive. I think it would be a shame to let the world of Altaea go to waste and for the players to be unable to benefit from the world if that would suit their agenda.

While I don't like Nation Roleplays, Altaea is unique in my opinion because it's about high-profile people who could possibly end up as rulers of nations, or armies. We have a lot of nobility and important people in the party, and I believe that theirs is a fight that needs a political side alongside others to be won, and restricting the party in space would also restrict this part of the roleplay.
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@ Peik - I have an idea of how that could probably work out well and in the present in the future. Due to the circumstances, it's going to very difficult, but not impossible for every character to pursue their own own agenda given how the Lord Regent Conqvist was able to mass invite all the high profile targets into one area and somehow cause great harm against them in one epic fell swoop. The Lord Regent has his own plans and his cleverly orchestrated scheming was instrumental in efficiently stealing Korkud's horses and possessions.

This is where collaborating scheming with the other writers would probably make for some interesting developments and preparations against such dangerous opponents like Conqvist or Emperor Aryanpour, who have many assets, ambitions, and resources at their disposal. Such schemes with the other writers would also certainly complicate and in some cases, completely derail the certain conspiracies in the characters' favor and completely reverse some outcomes that would normally greatly favor the antagonistic characters.

As such it's not a bad idea to separate than to stay together in one massive group! I do advocate and encourage that for this current episode, the characters remain in Voltas until sometime late in the episode or the very beginning of Episode 3. I promise that this episode will go by a lot more quickly than the last one and that we'll be reaching Episode 3 before you all know it!
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@ Peik - I have an idea of how that could probably work out well and in the present in the future. Due ot the circumstances, it's going to very difficult, but not impossible for every character to pursue their own own agenda given how the Lord Regent Conqvist was able to mass invite all the high profile targets into one area and somehow cause great harm against them in one epic fell swoop. The Lord Regent has his own plans and his cleverly orchestrated scheming was instrumental in efficiently stealing Korkud's horses and possessions.

This is where collaborating scheming with the other writers would probably make for some interesting developments and preparations against such dangerous opponents like Conqvist or Emperor Aryanpour, who have many assets, ambitions, and resources at their disposal. Such schemes with the other writers would also certainly complicate and in some cases, completely derail the certain conspiracies in the characters' favor and completely reverse some outcomes that would normally greatly favor the antagonistic characters.

As such it's not a bad idea to separate than to stay together in one massive group! I do advocate and encourage that for this current episode, the characters remain in Voltas until an appropriate time. I promise that this episode will go by a lot more quickly than the last one and that we'll be reaching Episode 3 before you all know it!


I am not necessarily saying that my suggestions should be put into the works right now - I am merely speaking for the grand scheme of things in the RP. While the Altaea isn't a NRP, it never struck me as the sort of RP that has the entire cast of characters partied together throughout either.
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@ Peik - Yes, there's probably going to several avenues, in which characters will decide to part ways. It's interesting because we will be able to see how each character interprets the events as they unfold starting from before the War of Sarifen Agression all the way to the present. Each character has suffered through immense tragedy at the hands of power-hungry aristocrats or corrupt rulers that were able to retain and in some cases, expand their influence at the expense of others. This is what happened shortly after a time period known as the Age of Nobles, which was preceded by the Age of Darkness. We have a cast of characters whose influence could very well swing in many directions given that there isn't any sort of clear definition for black or white. As the story unfolds, there's going to be shades of grey and each character's perspective really adds a unique element to the story. A change in scenery would only add to this in the coming future and expand on this beautiful world 8)
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@ Fern - What sort of colors other than white work better on grey? I feel like light gold or a lighter color like light blue might be the sweet spot, hehe.

Also, I'll admit that I've been working on including a bigger role for both Ash and Cori. We know that Cori is an armorer and shifting towards a genius inventor role. She's the one that crafted Uriel's armor, hence why he's called the armored man in the Iron Mask!

As for Ash, I did have a post written


Lighter colours would probably work, and do work, rather than a darker blue :P So yeah those

I'm quite glad that that's going to happen! As much as I love Dae (which is a lot), she has gotten all of my attention ahah. That's true... So I guess that will become kind of important.

Yeah, Ash was my fault for being bad with not turning up cause of business xD Hopefully that post will go somewhere the episode.
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Also the ability to split up would possibly be good in the future, as long as it doesn't mean us as players having minimal contact between each other
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Need a reminder: who's who in this RP again?

I'm Balthazar Guisemere, faithful royal guard and retainer of then king Delacroix, turned mercenary and sellsword after the king died and Prince Lucius went missing.
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I have three characters, so I'll list them all.

Daedhel, once known as Daelynn L'Fevre, who was a childhood friend of Prince Lucius turned assassin trained in Ivalis (a very deadly and efficient one at that). Quite short, untrusting and violent with somewhat torn loyalties (at the moment) between Ivalis and Lucius/Valania.

Ashradar Rahani who is a skilled Sarifen archer and among Ghazi Korkud's retinue (who also travelled with him to Voltas, and is currently on some kind of thief hunt with Fadl I believe).

Corisande Khavad, a mixed blood teenage girl who is (for the most part) disguised as a boy and a blacksmith's apprentice, (unknowingly, until recently) the crafter of Uriel's armour who is something of an inventing genius.

I think that works for who I've got?
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@ Fern - Having fun with the colors? I know I did! ;^P

The characters splitting up will definitely be more organic this time around because 1) We'll all have the Titanpad links, 2) Use the OOC as a means for sharing and communicating ideas, and 3) Have a larger and somewhat more accessible locations than just the Chateau that turned a flame.

@ DJ - The first OOC post is actually a good reference for the current cast of writer's/player's characters if you'll just scroll to the bottom of the first post's. When I do update the First OOC post, you'll find that there'll be more information about the factions, locations, and characters as well as brief summaries about what happened in the first episode.




@ Everyone - We will have the Titanpad links ready along with an updated list of all the essential NPCs and locations by tomorrow.
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Colours are fun, if done well! :P I like giving characters colours, I have to say...

That will be good then!
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@ Fern - The color choices are an interesting case because they match each character's personality. I personally feel that a character like Dae suits well with dark crimson red while Ash is a nice light blue to signify more discipline. The green works well with Corisande because she's not quite a soldier or trained fighter, but a utilitarian armorer with a ridiculous knack of an innovator - savant.
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I was pretty much lost in all the terms and names and characters the whole time. Mostly because I dropped out a while back and was reinvited recently. I'm hoping to use the new episode as a fresh start and rethink my character.
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Hey Konica, glad you could join us! With new episodes come fresh new meat and potatoes ... and we all love meat and potatoes, yeah? We have to a lot to work with and more to chew on as we let the characters grow and mature. The new updates, overhauls, and references will help out a lot with reacquainting everyone with the story and I'll open to hearing suggestions. We'll be moving very soon because I do have the episode ready for viewing; just gotta overhaul this out-dated OOC.

I'll also be inputting something in the Advanced Interest section so we can get new blood!
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@GourmetItalia Well the colours were chosen because they fit the characters :P I think most shades of blues would work for Ash, to be honest, but that one looks nice. And Cori is definitely a green. Black might also work for Dae, but crimson red is better and shows up more haha.

If I ever redesigned their character sheets I'd incorporate colours xD
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Here are my bullet points

-yay for a link to all pads
-happy to have a list of factions/nations, etc
-having a short list of player and character for easy reference would be a good idea, perhaps in the same location with the pad links so people can quickly reference who is where/doing what
-short posts with more character interaction rather than bogged down with overly descriptive paragraphs are preferable to me. I want to read about the place, the smell, etc but my main draw is the characters and what is going on for them.
-looking forward to seeing where the next part takes us and letting Ona figure out this world a bit more as well as finding a place in it. For now she has simply been with Lucius and trying to understand what is going on in a time that is not her own. Now, she has a use to him and others so that gives me more to write/interact more

Onatha-Al Mayrin seer from another time. Found by Lucius in the remnants of an old building.
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Here are my bullet points

-yay for a link to all pads
-happy to have a list of factions/nations, etc
-having a short list of player and character for easy reference would be a good idea, perhaps in the same location with the pad links so people can quickly reference who is where/doing what
-short posts with more character interaction rather than bogged down with overly descriptive paragraphs are preferable to me. I want to read about the place, the smell, etc but my main draw is the characters and what is going on for them.
-looking forward to seeing where the next part takes us and letting Ona figure out this world a bit more as well as finding a place in it. For now she has simply been with Lucius and trying to understand what is going on in a time that is not her own. Now, she has a use to him and others so that gives me more to write/interact more

Onatha-Al Mayrin seer from another time. Found by Lucius in the remnants of an old building.


1. Where can I find those changes?
2. Was anything ever done with the sororitas?
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@FernStone - I like the fact that we can change text colors and size along with having an edit, quote, and mention function. I come from a bare-basics, old school, defunct roleplaying forum that did not even have an edit button. Once you posted, everything was final. Yeahhhh ... those were the days ... and lairddd ... I'm now talking like an old timer even though I'm not even that old!!

@SkullsandSlippers - Good to see you here, Skulls 8). All valid points considering how far we've come and now that we're starting the next episode, the new updates will supply all the information about factions, locations, incidents, and important characters

@Konica - News on the changes are listed below. As for the Sororitas, they appeared in the beginning and end of the episode and unintentionally became a way to establish and end Episode 1. It began with Fern and Ivory Shadows and sort of culminated into ... ah ... how should I call it ... an unexpected literary pregnancy that involved a prolonged literary one night stand where one of the writers got cold feet? (No offense intended @FernStone given it was Ivory that bawled out X-P) The end result involved the Sororitas taking a back seat, which was sort of like literary child custody coming into picture.

The Order of St. Melitas may yet play a part in this next episode and if you're at all interested in a Melitan sister character, you are more than welcome to share your thoughts here. We'll work something out and see if we can draw a couple connections 8)

@Everyone - The Updates will be a bit lengthy and I'm working on them as we speak so there's going to be quite a plethora of information. I'll have the information posted on the First OOC Post so that it's easily accessible for all.

Here is an updated bullet-points list for the story

Updated List

- We've got an amazing writer-player cast, so thank you for coming this far
- Titanpad links for all the collaborative pads with References to all the Factions, Important Characters, Incidents, and Historical Events
- More discussions about Characters and Collaborations here in the OOC
- More Frequent Posts while retaining Quality without massive 10 paragraph pieces
- More Sophisticated Combat Opportunities that both integrate and avoid bogging down the Story
- Political Elements that work in conjunction with the Periodic Combat Scenes
- Clearer Narratives
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  • Can you tell me more about the sororitas? I have an idea but I need to know more about them first.
  • I'm still lost with all the factions. Is there a list of all the factions with their allies, enemies, and goals?
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@Konica - Sorting through information that as we speak, will have major faction and secondary character updates by tomorrow or Saturday. For now, you will be able to find information on the first OOC post or this link:

roleplayerguild.com/posts/1898770




Current Faction Information Link

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Episode 2




I left Episode 1 as undecisive so as to give you writers the ability to decide on the how Episode 2 would flesh out.

On the one hand, Lucius stepped forward towards a tunnel leading towards the Palais de Voltas while the others moved in the sewer tunnel opening leading towards the Merchant's Quarter.

The most logical course of action is to escape into the Merchant's Quarter where the group can decide on where to lay low, but depending on each character's personality, values, and perspectives there's a chance for the members to split off and join Lucius for a possible counter-attack on the Palais de Voltas.




The choice is in the hands of the writers and either decision will have serious repercussions on the story's future ...




Please list your thoughts and decisions on where you believe your characters will take Episode 2!
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