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I think some of the whites haven't been used?


Wow, racist.

Anyway, I don't see where overlapping colors is a huge issue until potential team-ups come around. I mean, there's a fairly limited palette here, so overlap is going to happen eventually. I say we roll with it and just come to an agreement if the two characters ever need to appear in the same post.
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@nitemare shape: I just realized that the op no longer has a "sample post" section in the character sheet template (the one in the hider does, but not the one that explains what each section means.


hmmm....that's odd. I'll look into it.
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Here's my app, sorry if it doesn't quite fit the theme/is too bland for this RP.
Any bits of constructive criticism and advice is welcomed! ^^




Name:

Jackson R. Thatch
Alias:

Ryder
Speech Color:

Orange
Alignment:

Hero
Identity:

Semi-known: While not too many actually know of him, he's more than willing to share it.
Personality:

Ryder is a saint at heart; he's outgoing, friendly, optimistic, selfless and kind hearted. To him, the job of being a Hero is more than just beating up bad guys in cool costumes and media attention, its about helping people with their issues no matter how small it may be. Some might say he's almost childish in that sense but he's no stranger to how cruel the world can be, Ryders knows what crawls in the shadows and how dangerous it is. Despite this, he shows empathy for villains and crooks believing that they still have a heart and are just lost or misguided.

Fully accepting that he is weaker than almost every other hero, lacking in any special power or training, he makes up for it in spirit with a near indomitable will and faithful dedication to the job although he will always say that "he's just a hero for fun". It can be said that he is a stubborn bastard in that he will continue to fight even if he knows there's no chance of winning; to him as long as he can at least by time for others than he's already won. Ryder's determination is only matched by his willingness of self-sacrifice.
Origins:
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Jackson R. Thatch was born in a well off family with and older brother and a young baby sister but was lived in a dangerous neighborhood. Less than a year than his birth, his father had been shot after he attempted to stop a robbery in the bank he worked in. Jackson would listen to the tales of heroics and goodwill that his father did from his mother although some of them ended up being a bit fictitious. Jackson didn't care though, he loved superhero stories, dressing up as comic book heroes and running around the living room shouting, "Heroes are here to help people!"

As he grew into a teenager, he stopped being so into comic book and more into video games like so many teenaged boys but still loved the stories of bravery and courage that the characters in his games would do. His brother had also been an avid fan of many of the same games and had offered to bring Jackson and their little sister to a gaming convention as a gift (and because he wanted to show off his newly created cosplay). The convention was a huge amount of fun for the siblings but tragedy struck.

Holding the helmet of his bro's costume, Jackson happily walked down the street with his siblings as they walked back home at night. Trouble awoken when a group of men had attempted to kidnap the little sister after she strayed away from the brothers. Jackson and his brother chased after them and the older brother engaged in fist fighting to try take down the kidnappers, Jackson on the sideline cheering his bro on. But then there was a bang. Then silence as the older brother fell to the ground, a bullet now lodged in his neck. Enraged, Jackson charged straight at one of the men, tackling them to the ground but was soon overwhelmed by the other kidnappers. Then there was a second bang; the police had arrived but too late. As the criminals surrendered, Jackson ran to his dying brother who, with his own blood, drew a heart on the sidewalk and smiled at his little bro with what strength he had left, "Y-y-you a-ar... are a-a... he-h...hero..."

Scarred by his brother's death, he half-yelled at a police officer with tears in his eyes why there were no heroes around. The response he got was "Maybe they didn't think this was important enough." His heart broke, Jackson wailed that heroes were supposed to help people but he ended up in tears before he could really finish his sentence.

From that day on, Jackson thought if there would be no heroes to help people like one who could have prevented both the death of his brother and his father, he would become one. He trained long and hard before realizing that he wasn't hero material, lacking any special power or immense wealth. But it was his little sister who had discovered the very first super hero comic Jackson ever owned and asked him why did he like it so much. Jackson replied with a "Since he's a guy who helps people" before coming to the conclusion that heroes didn't need special abilities to help people. Since then, Jackson christened himself "Ryder" and has been training to the fullest of his abilities while taking on all the jobs which other heroes would consider to small to be of worth.
Outfit:

Hero Type:

Normal
Power Level:

Street Level
Attributes:

Strength - Normal
Speed - 20 mph
Endurance - 2 Hours
Agility - Average
Intelligence - Average
Fighting Skill - Trained
Resources:

Average
Weakness:

Ryder is just a normal man. While he has the spirit to be a hero, he lacks any of the superpowers or extraordinary resources of most heroes and gym training can only do so much for him. What other stronger heroes might consider but a scratch could easily prove crippling or even fatal to Ryder.

Additionally, while Ryder isn't naive on how evil and manipulative the world is, he's too nice of a person and is fairly gullible when ti comes to helping people. He just wants to make the world a better place with what he can do even if the world doesn't want him around.
Supporting Characters:

Anna Thatch - Jackson's mother who is supportive of her sons efforts saying that she always knew that he had a "big, caring heart".
Alice Thatch - Jackson's little sister whose now in middle school and perhaps the most supportive of his brother's actions and often boasts to classmates, "My brother is a hero!"
Alex Rodovire - Jackson's best friend whose take it upon himself to a "vow of secrecy" even though Jackson himself doesn't care much for it.
Elizabeth Lovgood - Jackson's girlfriend who while is worried about her boyfriend's safety, is confident that he can prevail through anything.


Looks good, we just need the sample and you'll be approved. Looks like you have an interesting character there

For some reason, as Ded pointed out, the Sample post section of the CS was oddly missing since we updated the OP. That has been fixed.
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@ClocktowerEchos By the way, your character is street-level, right? Well, the Cancer, the Enigma Gang, and the Cowl are all in Lost Haven. Lotsa mooks for you to toss around.

(I, for one, don't care if you take out an Enigma crackhouse or something, Josie's just an enforcer, not really concerned with the management of the gang.)
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Wow, racist.

Anyway, I don't see where overlapping colors is a huge issue until potential team-ups come around. I mean, there's a fairly limited palette here, so overlap is going to happen eventually. I say we roll with it and just come to an agreement if the two characters ever need to appear in the same post.


Hard to be racist when I'm the same color, isn't it?
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Self-hating racist...
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Self-hating racist...


Considering you can't say black, white, pink or polka-dotted in this nation without someone jumping down your throat... Meh! Is all I have to say. :p
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I hate one-eyed, one-horned, flyin' purple people eaters. They're the reason the nation is goin' down the tubes, eating people, and stealing our jobs.
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@nitemare shapeMade added a sample, I copied it back for your convince.


@AthinarI'll keep it in mind. I've also changed the speech color.
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<Snipped quote by Hound55>

Considering you can't say black, white, pink or polka-dotted in this nation without someone jumping down your throat... Meh! Is all I have to say. :p


People just need to learn to hate others equally. Get a job in retail that's the fastest way.

Also. Don't sign the dotted line Marie!! It's a Trap!!

Had an odd misplaced letter. Stupid phone.
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@nitemare shapeMade added a sample, I copied it back for your convince.


@AthinarI'll keep it in mind. I've also changed the speech color.


Ryder is approved. Please post the complete Character Sheet in the character tab. :)
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People just need to learn to hate other ms equally. Get a job in retail that's the fastest way.

Also. Don't sign the dotted line Marie!! It's a Trap!!


It's only kind of a trap. Also, that's the end of Marie's backstory and the next post will be moving into the present. Which brings me to this. @Dedonus , how do I get involved on any level with the Pax Metahumana event?
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Ryder hath been moved.

Now then, can I ask for some details on all the major events that have transpired IC, who the big villain is this time, how/when should I introduce Ryder and who wants to be a friend? :3
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Ryder hath been moved.

Now then, can I ask for some details on all the major events that have transpired IC, who the big villain is this time, how/when should I introduce Ryder and who wants to be a friend? :3


We have some important information in the OP, what past events were, other characters. What the current world arch is. Ded will have the most information about the current Pax Metahumana arch.
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Alright, let's start from the beginning:

The whole universe was in a hot, dense state, when nearly fourteen billion years ago expansion started...

(True fact: I actually hate that show but love the song. C'est la vie.)

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Alright, let's start from the beginning:

The whole universe was in a hot, dense state, when nearly fourteen billion years ago expansion started...

(True fact: I actually hate that show but love the song. C'est la vie.)


...

>.>

Annnyyywwwaaayyysss...

How/when should I introduce Ryder and who wants to be a friend? c:
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@ClocktowerEchos Clearly you want to be friends with Nightmare. :P
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@ClocktowerEchos Well, Lost Haven is currently losing its shit over the Pax Metahumana stuff, and while Umbraxis is ever-looming, they're looking at the problem at hand. So maybe he could be out on the streets, or something?
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@ClocktowerEchos Clearly you want to be friends with Nightmare. :P


Oh yeah. Friends with the mass murder. Sure why not. There's only a slight chance of dismemberment..

@ClocktowerEchos You can introduce your character any time. There's no posting limit, aside from double posting I think. Is that a rule? Or a general note. Anyways throw around a few PMs pitch a few plots and see whose interested. That's the way most of us do it.
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Yeah, I haven't gotten the post up yet, but Josie (The Red Reaper) is causing havoc on a cargo ship, in the bay near Little Ulster. Mebbe he could be patrolling, and EXPLOSIONS!
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