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And here I just planned to put a bounty on my co-GM! Aaaaanyways I am off, I need sleep! Keep dem Posts coming, so I have something to read during work!
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Name
Nuvra Kolar
Age
36
Gender
Male
Species
Iridonian Zabrak
Appearance
6'9, weighing in close to 380 pounds. Golden Eyes, grey-white skin and black tattoos.
In Armor

Naturally

Affiliation
NightBrother
Background
Born on Iridonia as Tae'l Kolar, he was raised much more harshly than a Zabrak would have been, if raised on a sister-planet. Iridonian Zabrak's Culture was extremely warrior oriented, and consisted of ritual after ritual of intense training, up until a final rite of passage: A year of solidarity in the deadly environment that is Iridonia. On his 15th birthday, he was sent to begin said expedition. For the year after, the area was tormented with clan on clan warfare, but about one week before his return a distant clan went silent, the following day another clan went silent. Day after day, clans would go silent, up until the final, and closest village was silent. The following day, on Tae'l's 16th birthday, he stumbled back to his home, covered in blood and wounds, with a long staff, decorated with the heads of 6 now-dead Clan-Chiefs. Upon his return, an immediate celebration began, in which he recieved his new name, Nuvra. After the celebration ended, news was sent out to their sister-planet Dathomir of the new, brutal warrior. Immediately, the night sisters sent out an escort for him, and began an intense form of training to prepare him as a behemoth warrior. After 6 years of training, trial, and missions, he was finally deemed ready by the Nighsister's Shaman for the ritual. Infused with the Nightsister's dark magic, he grew a full head taller, and his mass and strength increased. Combined with his latent ability to use the force, he quickly passed the ranks of the Nightbrothers. Soon enough, he decided to work on his own accord, as the profit from home missions were not enough. He moved on, with the blessings of Vistra, his Shaman.
Equipment
Night-Stalker Virta-Armor - 1,800 Credits: Heavily Plated 60 pound Armor, pieced together with micro-weaved Titanium. Slows down his movement by about 30%, but is nearly impenetrable. The armor (when activated) Springs forth quickly from a spine-attached module that covers most of his back.
Dual Silver Vibroblade - 1,400 credits: equipped with cortosis-weave, a Steel alloy plate-system, and a dual engine micro-processor with hyper regulators. (Stronger blade and less likely to blow)
The C-Series Tracking Transmitter -3200 Credits: uses micro-frequency transmissions to locate and track persons of Interest.
Organic Wire - 15 credits per 300 meter: used for restraints etc.
Bio and Vision Link- 115 credits
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R82 Jump Boots - 150 Credits
Bacta Injections - 7 Credits a shot
Abilities
Force Slam - Can use his limited force abilities to propel people a short distance, initiated through Physical contact.
Shadow Heal - Can use magic granted from the Nightsisters to heal himself and others of small to mid-level injuries
Berserker - Can summon forth an enormous amount of physical power, causing him to rampage with an incredible amount of strength, but at a great cost. (After the surge fades, he will immediately black out into a coma-like state for several days)
Credits
1,500 Credits, in various forms.
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Interesting Character! I will give him a though since he would be normally above the rp's current power level but I like him!

Gisk Whadda say?
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@Gravislayer
If you'd like I can go ahead and tone him down!! Just let me know what you think should be changed and I'll make adjustments!!
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I like the character, and he would have very interesting interactions and probably some combined character arc-age with my character.

But, as Grav says, he's a bit OP. I, personally, don't mind him having the Force, but he's a bit more accomplished with it than would be reasonable for the level we want to start with. On top of that, he's also physically very strong. He has a lot going for him in multiple areas. What you might do, is leave his strength, and keep his ability to heal, but drop his other overt powers. Make him a kind of juggernaut character, it's a sort we don't really have yet, and it makes him a foil to the other Dathomir related character.

One last thing, you mention in his appearance that he has armor, but it's not listed in his equipment.

Oh, and he has a lot of credits. Tone that down too.

I don't think they're major changes you need to make. Should be easy without compromising the character.
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Couldn't have said it any better!
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I actually did not mean for Ahjan to be large or bulky, but I know the closest I ever came to describing his physique was in the abilities section. He's supposed to be more lithely built. Dick Grayson, not Bruce Wayne.
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Too late! I will give him the nickname Bulky Butt! And it is your fault!
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Ok, so I made some ability changes, lowered my credits, and added in my Armor information, anything other questions/concerns you guys have?
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impenetrable doesn't mean the shock of the impact will kill you! One or two close range blaster shots will still strike you down if not killing you! Do not forget that!

Otherwise he is ready to go!

I like him really and I am okey with accepting him. Glad to have you on board!
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Awesome!! And yes!! I will make sure he can still go down, if needed!
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Weeellll, I wouldn't quite call 10 or so years a lifetime of melee training, (Or at least 10 or so years of formal training) but I suppose getting into bumfights and bar brawls once in a while, then spending a decade or so as the mall cop apprentice to an eccentric, paranoid Ex-Sentinel would have the same effect.
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I hope the post is fine, dunno, I am kinda dizzy right now since the flu got me!
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Hey, do you guys still have room for one more?
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I guess we do! Send in a character!
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Alright! Here's my CS. If he seems to out there or what not I've got another idea that I'd like to try but that's only if Barr is to far gone to be salvaged as a character.

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Since you are a droid your durability is way larget that ours! We will die in like 1-2 direct blaster hits on the chest, while you would then take some serious damage but it wouldn't mean your immediate end!

So cut down the swoop bike and the light sabers and we are okey!
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By the way....i am a tad disappointed by how slow the rp got....i hope you guys are still with me because if you drop out i would still like a little warning or notice!
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Since you are a droid your durability is way larget that ours! We will die in like 1-2 direct blaster hits on the chest, while you would then take some serious damage but it wouldn't mean your immediate end!


The thing is, though, we can also heal with time and/or bacta stuff, whereas a droid needs to go through the expensive process of being rebuilt. I feel like it would balance out if he could take a lot of damage since he can't heal normally. (Or cheaply, if he's having his durasteel replaced.)
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By the way....i am a tad disappointed by how slow the rp got....i hope you guys are still with me because if you drop out i would still like a little warning or notice!


I'm still in.
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