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| NAME: |
Xafina


| RACE: |
Human..she think

| AGE: |
somewhere in her 20s

| ABILITIES & SKILLS |
Is able to tame most beasts, can read Braille in multiple languages, good at manipulation of the living brain. Though this dose not work on synths, great charisma and luck

| EQUIPMENT |
Braille leather journal on the occult. Hunting knife, canteen with water,deathclaw gauntlets and mail. staff used for walking, bone carved into whistle. Nuka cola she was saving

| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |
Was born blind, can't shoot, can't survive without her companion, is strong but not trained in hand to hand or anything.

| SAMPLE POST: |
She felt warm, the sun, it had to be the sun that was resting on her skin, a constant ray like the licking flames that she had grown so used to. The moment they walked through the old iron prison she felt as though her ears had popped, sound, so much sound that was unblocked for miles. "We're out, we're actually out." A low rumble beside her she extended her hand till she felt a side of scales, blood pulsing beneath, the side began to move forward, a staff in her left hand she tapped it on the ground that gave way ever move, rocks, rocks were beneath her, she could hear them tumble down what seemed to be a gorge. Falling down the decline like the bodies her companion had thrown out of her way in their escape
Slow footsteps passing by she tried to take in as much as she could, the air growing colder began to tell her the time, worry scratching the back of her mind she patted the shoulder of her companion. "We need to move faster, can I come up?" She didn't hear any growl in protest, the beast stopping his stride, ground no longer shaking from his steps she felt around open air till she found his spines, slick ebony that her entire hand wrapped around, lifting herself with ease. Legs positioned right behind his shoulders she felt as tall as a sky scraper, open air about her she leaned close to his neck.
"Lets go"

| NOTES: |
Growing up in a cult that worshipped the deathclaw she was originally planned as a sacrifice. Throwing Xafina in a pit to her current companion only for them to find out that he refused to eat her. Being the crazed fools that they were they instead worshipped her alongside the scales beasts, calling her the tamer. Yet she grew desperate, in need of escape of the dire prison she let the deathclaw loose, tearing through the halls on their way to freedom. They now wander the city streets and are seen as a ghost of some kind due to the abnormality of the pair.
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For starters, you broke the coding, haha.

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sorry, dyslexic, I'll fix it.
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There we go!
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| NAME: |
Xafina


I certainly like the idea, I fail to see any application for the character in the game, though. I don't think anyone would let Xafine and her Deathclaw anywhere near them, instead shoot first and ask questions later. Beyond that, call it a pet-peeve of mine, but I am not a fan of blind characters as I find the novelty of their condition runs out over the course of a story. For alterations, I'd suggest you give her a different companion, something that would not alienate her from the plot, and consider getting rid of the blindness.

Other points I have are regarding to her equipment, why would she have a deathclaw gauntlet if she does not have any combat skills? The Deathclaw gauntlet is after all a powerful weapon akin to a power fist, nothing someone who isn't trained in using should use, maybe a simpler, less exotic weapon is in place.

And I understand that you're Dyslexic, but make sure you look over your work a couple of times before you post it, I find that proofreading works wonders, even if it is OK not to catch every mistake, I too miss plenty of mistakes in my own writing.

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Accepted.

@Chronothesis The synth would have matching weaknesses to the human it was modeled after. They are created to replicate and replace humans after all, he would have needed a 'base'. DNA to be created after. Besides, you said that he wasn't programmed to know how to fight, or to be aggressive, that's a weakness / limitation. Any weakness a human could have a synth would, too.


Oh, I thought synth's could be created without DNA. o-o
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Oh, I thought synth's could be created without DNA. o-o


Uh, pretty sure they can't, I might be wrong, haha. I know they're created to replicate humans, anyway, so they would still have 'human' flaws.

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I've fixed it. :D
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Aaron Ashworth


The sheet is good, I just don't feel like the sheet seems.. Designed for this particular setting? Like his character could just as well exist in the U.S and not in Japan. Maybe it's the lack of Backstory that's backfiring on me. He is sixteen, did he have time to travel through America before being sent to Japan? What was his credentials to join the NCR, did his father pay his trip to Japan? Elaborate on these things and I'll accept the sheet.

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How to use a recurve bow...


  • Stand perpendicular from your target.
  • Straddle the shooting line.
  • Turn your head towards the target.
  • Hold the bow with a firm, yet comfortable grip.
  • Load the arrow and fit it into the notch of the bow, do this before lifting your bow.
  • Lift your bow to shoulder height.
  • Pull the string back and make sure that your hand rests under your jawbone.
  • Aim with your dominate eye.
  • Relax your fingers whenever shooting the arrow.
  • Stay in position until the arrow is fired.

Can someone give me an example of all of these point's into a RP post?
( My character will rarely shoot his bow unless he was hunting for hostile animals. And if he does have the will to shoot somebody, I want it to be detailed as possible. XD )
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The sheet is good, I just don't feel like the sheet seems. Designed for this particular setting? Like his character could just as well exist in the U.S and not in Japan. Maybe it's the lack of Backstory that's backfiring on me. He is sixteen, did he have time to travel through America before being sent to Japan? What was his credentials to join the NCR, did his father pay his trip to Japan? Elaborate on these things and I'll accept the sheet.


  • Aaron did not have time to travel though his memories were the mix of two people. A Brotherhood of Steel Squire and a boy with adept knowledge. Aaron's adventures are based off the dead squire, though in the sample post that is the dead squire's perspective. Though, Aaron thinks that he was saved after he was transported to a shack with a fire during his unconscious state.
  • His skill's in repairing and his knowledge. Though if needed Aaron could easily learn how to become a battle medic since he can quickly get on the top of things. That's how Aaron survive's in the wasteland, even with a pacifistic nature.
  • No, his father did not pay for the trip. Aaron thought that the trip was free and a synth spy basically had paid cap's for him.


Aaron gain's help of other synth's because he is the only one allowed to have free thinking. ( Aaron help's the Institute gain knowledge of the wasteland without actually knowing it. )
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All right. These are all fine. Accepted.

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All right. These are all fine. Accepted.


YAAAAY!!>!>!>!!!>!!>>>!!
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When are we going to start IC?
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@Castiel


Oh no, it's all in good fun!

Hillan knows I'm just joking. :B
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AAHHH YES!

-Eat's popcorn-

Bromance. :>
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AAHHH YES!

-Eat's popcorn-

Bromance. :>


Uh, yeah, Bromance.. Totally.

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