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Sorry it's so small.
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So I saw that you've started naming the types of the demons. If you're still looking, I'd like to recommend Keter for Class 4, Cambion for Class 3, and Fiend for Class 2.
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Beware my fellow role players, I'm making a cs.
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Beware the slow death of an RP in it's infancy. Seriously, it's like people lost all interest in it.
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I mean, I did make a post regarding Alicia that has yet to be answered.
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Well I mean more people in general.
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Beware the slow death of an RP in it's infancy. Seriously, it's like people lost all interest in it.


Nothing of the sort. We're waiting for this:

Lug said he'd post today, after that I'll have Susanna respond to Alicia and perhaps institute some form of blood event.


I had expected it to come sooner, but not that it's not, I can do another thing myself in the meantime.
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Eyyyy people! I am jsut saying hi before making my character. I know already that all teh cool things are taken, even without looknig at the characters. I will make a wild guess. At least one person with a demon inside them or an item, or with demon blood, one elite fighter, one badass mage, one fully armored guy who is at least 2 meters, and one badass/funny ranger or rouge.

So I'll make a charcater according to these points, and if it overlaps with someone else just tell me :D
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Eyyyy people! I am jsut saying hi before making my character. I know already that all teh cool things are taken, even without looknig at the characters. I will make a wild guess. At least one person with a demon inside them or an item, or with demon blood, one elite fighter, one badass mage, one fully armored guy who is at least 2 meters, and one badass/funny ranger or rouge.

So I'll make a charcater according to these points, and if it overlaps with someone else just tell me :D


All of those are creepily spot on except for the last one. We lack a ranger/rouge type character.
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@Prince of Seraphs if you played as much DnD as me, you'd know that these are all must haves XD
Then i will make a rouge ;D
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And I thought I was being original with my semi-possessed character.
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@Prince of Seraphs I first laughed, then i realised you weren't sarcastic there. I mean no offense (get used to it with my character), but you can't show me many things I haven't seen before. Everyone likes to be demonised. I even wanted to make a charcater like yours before seeing yours :D

Edit: lol spellcheck much
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Actually, I changed my mind. I'm making a winged reaver, try to at least. Gotta break away hahaha
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Actually, I changed my mind. I'm making a winged reaver, try to at least. Gotta break away hahaha


You wanna explain to me what that is?
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So here is my character, hope ye all enjoy him :D
Edit: oh yeah I wanted to mention our amazing GM @Prince of Seraphs

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Might not be appropriate to post twice, but I have a question. Is our mark important? I have some inner knowledge on things, and what I think is

But joke aside, GM can we talk in a PM? I want to ask things without possibly spoiling the fun XD
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So here is my character, hope ye all enjoy him :D
Edit: oh yeah I wanted to mention our amazing GM @Prince of Seraphs



First we don't have vampires, too many cliches, stigmas and contradictory lore surrounding them to be worth including but not make a main focus of the story.

Second the Mark of the Demons is supposed to be from proximity to Veiron on the day of the fall. Ordinary people who encounter demons (assuming they survive) don't come away with demonic marks.

Then there are a couple of things that were vague enough for me to be confused in the last couple of paragraphs. So his dad arranged for his pregnant wife to be attacked by a demon... because that would somehow save his unborn son from a cataclysm fourteen years in the future of which he should have had no knowledge? I'm not sure about the reasoning behind this.

"Magic infused lights and other freaks covered the place, which led to a few conclusions about his fathers real identity." Maybe I'm dense but I have no idea what these conclusions are supposed to be. He has a hidden lair covered in magical artifacts and stuff. There's many conclusions one could draw from that: He is secretly a Djinn demon in a human body who fell in love with a mortal (bit cliched but wouldn't be the first time), he's one of the only remaining arcane smiths capable of making magical artifacts, he killed people and stole magic from them. The list goes on. Overall I'm going to need some more clarity with regards to Tobias' father cause at the moment I'm not sure what to think of him.

Also magical artifacts, especially weapons such as the sword he has are incredibly rare so if you want him to have such a sword there needs to be an explanation of where he got it.

This isn't really related to the CS but Valeria has a thieves town a days journey north of where all our characters are at the moment called Ashbourne which my character was on her way towards if that holds any possibilities for you.
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@Prince of Seraphs oaky well I might need to explain after all. I got REAL lazy and tired halfway through and didn't want to bore you guys, but I'll explain the situation. So father of Tobias from now on TF was a magic user, specialised in arcane enchantements. He held great pride in his work and was really good at it. However as a famous person comes many responsibilities. He lived in the castle, and he confronted the king many times. TF hated demons, and made a few devices that can find demonic activity. One such device revealed the king's dealing with the devil, and after asking the king about it, he learned of the horrible truth. However as expected this angered the demons who wanted to kill him. He ran away from the castle and settled down, hiding as a farmer. He knew the end would come, so he arranged the meeting with the demon (not clarified a vampire, but you can probably imagine a similar demon) who attacked his wife, and then ran away. He intentionally took his son into the forest, so his abilities can grow without being interrupted by the normal people. He sewed the suit for his son, and amde both the dagger and the bow for him. Years later a few bandits saw him entering his home with values, and then followed him into the forest once TF left. The rest is in the RP.

Conculions. Yeah I was incredibly vauge there. I think if you find apalce with tons of enchanted items, you can safely assumee your father was an ecnhanter, and a magic user. And that he knew that you will be in danger. Naturally his son is not gifted with any abilities, insted is corrupted by evil. that would amke him weaker and weaker as he gets consumed by evil, or turn incredibly strong if exposed to pure evil. The suit would both stop him from turning into an evil monster, and stop the corruption. And what else I already wrote down. The bow is jsut a bow, that one is simple. The gemstone is the only thing special about the sword. It glows in the dark. The sword is just a sword. But it would be incredibly helpful for anyone who is about to face demons to have a purifying light right? I mean that dad should be in teh Doomsday Preppers for all he thought of. I hope this explains everything. i can nerf him if you want to, but I feel like this is a minimum if there are people who can hurl fireballs, and or wear full platemail. Or you know have a demon in them (*cough* cliché *cough*)

Edit: Okay imma go sleep not sure if I'll be on in 12 hours or 120 hours.
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@Prince of Seraphs

A form of a swordsman, light speedy but clutch like. Nothing special.
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Bypassing how he found out about the demon deal for a moment he still wouldn't have known when Veiron would fall. The King (who I should really give a name) bargained for a hundred years of paradise in exchange for his soul and his kingdom (the conclusion of this deal opened the Gates of Hell) however through some loophole in the contract the demons collected there prize fifty years ahead of time. Even the King didn't know the fall was coming until a few hours before it happened.

Generally speaking I don't like the term "evil" as it is incredibly absolute but leaving that alone for a moment Tobias has some form of blood disease that over time gives him demonlike traits correct? The magic suit halts the progression of this disease. Now did he get this disease at Veiron or when the ambiguous possibly vampire like demon attacked his mother?

Next the demons wouldn't care who knew about the deal, in fact they'd likely find it amusing seeing at that as public knowledge would cause mass panic. At that point it would be too late to actually break it so the demons don't care. Though the King likely would so you might want to change it from demons to the King declared him an enemy of state and put a bounty on his head type deal.

I'm not totally sure why he'd want to summon the demon that made the deal or why he would do it in proximity of his wife without protection but I can chock that one up to overconfidence and naivety on FT's part.

Aside from that as long as you incorporate everything into your CS you should be good to post.

@everyone, I'm thinking of changing the quote at the top of the OP. I have a number of options and was wondering on your guy opinion.
  • "Abandon all hope, ye who enter here."
  • "The descent into Hell is easy."
  • "The road to Hell is paved with good intentions."

Thoughts?
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