Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Yin Jingshin
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Hello, and welcome to the OOC! *rawkus cheering and hollering* All right kids, settle down now. We'll use this to discuss finer parts of the plot, just generally chat and post our character sheets and shiz. If anybody is interested in the RP, post here and let me know.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Yin Jingshin
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I'm not sure if you know red, but there's a character sheet for this. Tbf, you've covered most of it, but you've missed a history and some other things. I'll just post it here for convenience.

Character Sheet:

Name:
Hero Name:
Rank:
Nationality:
Age:
Gender:
appearance: (Can write or find a pic. Only comic/cartoon/anime pics, no real people/actors etc)

Power:

History: (This can be as long or as short as you like, but at least give us some bare essential information. Think of it like a hero dossier/document/file bio type history I guess, or do what you find easiest)

Motivations: (A few key reasons that your character is a hero, is it power? Protection? Money? All of those things? Do they secretly want to bring the Hero Association down? What are their motivations for doing what they're doing? These will essentially be your own characters story arcs/plot points etc.)

Now, I'm fine with your character, the only thing I have a problem with is the power. Lightning is fine, and so is calling on animals to help, but I'm just not sure how they're related. What helps with OPM is that each character kind of has a gimmick. This is a world where Hero's are celebrities, so they kind of make their own brand in a way. Not all of them though tbf. But yeah, like, if you wanted to be able to turn into different animals and summon animals for aid, that'd be awesome. But I'm just not sure about pairing lightning with animals. If you really really want it, I'll let it go, but that's my two cents. Edit: Unless the lightning is coming from a gadget? if so that should be specified. Sorry if I'm coming off a little anal, but there's a point to it, trust me.

You'll start off unranked btw
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Dirty Dan
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I'll give it a try.

Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Eviledd1984
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I'd like to try my head at this RP.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Astronaut Jones
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Name: Donny Devereaux
Hero Name: The Blade Runner
Rank: #2 C-Class
Nationality: United States of America
Age: 22
Gender: Male
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Power: A rollerskating god. He can traverse any surface while performing acrobatics and parkour. The Blade Runner is fast enough with skates to commute on freeways no problem.

History: He learned how to fight in a Nova Scotia roller derby rink. He learned how to love in a Croatian strip club. He learned how to cook in Havana, Cuba. He learned how to finally do his taxes in Denver Colorado. Donny Devearaux learned many things in his life, but rollerskating? That ability was grafted into his DNA by the polyurethane gods of the rollerblading tundra. The man with the phantom feet. The hellion of hills. The swan of the streets. His mother calls him Don-Don, but to the rest of the world he is called...The Blade Runner.

Motivations: To put his god-given talent as a rollerskating phenom to use by helping everyone in need.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by greywolf375
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Well, I'm here now. I'll get a character up soon.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by greywolf375
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Alright, my character has a solid CS, i'm putting it up for approval now.

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