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Love the Jojo fans in here.
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So I wasn't going to make a character for this, despite my interest in it, but then two things happened: I had a great idea for a mythology-based character, and it turns out there's a lot of JJBA fans here. So now I have no choice but to make a character. Aaaand I'll PM it to @ReaptheMusic, I think... just because.
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Revised my sheet as per GM instructions, will await further instructions and fix the broken images when I have time.
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Welp my Internet is busted atm. Can't do too much. @ the latest cs, she reminds me almost too much of that sniper girl from season 3..... I'll review it in full when I can.

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Well apparently it fixed itself right after i posted that... talleyhoe then.
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@Dragonfry This feels somewhat uninspired and I don't feel like I want to learn any more about her character. It's almost too cut and dry and I'm not excited to see where she is going. Since there are only so many slots left, I would prefer for someone more compelling to fill those roles unless you could prepare a CS that I feel you could really make stand out once the roleplay begins.
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Alright, just got around to updating my CS. I definitely fixed a lot of things, so hopefully it'll pass! Also, I changed his name. Russel is apparently the R in CDRL. Shows how much I pay attention to them.
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Alright, just got around to updating my CS. I definitely fixed a lot of things, so hopefully it'll pass! Also, I changed his name. Russel is apparently the R in CDRL. Shows how much I pay attention to them.


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@Turboshitter You know, I think you're right. I did like Cardin's 5 seconds in one of the last episodes, though. Actually looked like he was a fighter.
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@Chickn I love your sincerity. I can tell you really are fond of this character you've created, I can relate to that a lot. There are only a few things I need to inquire about.

-His name needs to have something to do with color in there somewhere

-My partner in crime was president of the mixed martial arts club before they graduated college and currently a black belt in several of them. When you say he is versed 'several martial arts,' that's a very vague and BROAD term. It would mean leaps and bounds if you brushed up on the forms of a few types of martial art and selected a few you think would fit his fighting style. They all look different, and they all do different things, which is why I need to know what you're going for.

Since there's a lot I'll help you out. Do you want him to be free flowing and use imbalance to his advantage, or do you want him grounded, firm, immovable? Knowing what you want him to LOOK like as he's fighting helps when trying to select something out of all the millions of styles that come under the term 'martial art'
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May I put my CS in the characters tab now? :3
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@Turboshitter Nnnnope. Didn't realize it wa 100% ready for me to look at again yet. Let me go do that.
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@ReaptheMusic Yeah, making OCs for RWBY has been kind of my addiction, lately.

-In Gaelic, the name Rowan means "Little red one," or, "red." That should satisfy the criteria, right?

-Yeah, this was something that I wasn't too sure about what to put there in the first place. I'll definitely look into some of the different styles, and see if I can find some that are similar. A little research never hurt anyone.

I appreciate the help, for sure. My intentions were for Rowan to be sort of hit-and-run, where he'd attack quickly and lightly, and focus more on evading hits rather than just tanking them. (Obviously it wouldn't always work, but this would be an ideal scenario).
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*sigh* no, still not good enough. Here, Have some more pointers...

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@Turboshitter Nnnnope. Didn't realize it wa 100% ready for me to look at again yet. Let me go do that.


In that case, my character sheet is 100% ready.
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@Chickn Evasion? mm, try some of the Shaolin Monk styles, they focused on pacifist tactics I think.
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@Mr Allen J I appreciate it very much that you took the time to really consider how to connect your character to lore. That being said, the same thing I said about Rowan applies here. Martial Arts is too vague, too broad. What STYLES were implemented? What did she focus on most? Why?
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@Mr Allen J I appreciate it very much that you took the time to really consider how to connect your character to lore. That being said, the same thing I said about Rowan applies here. Martial Arts is too vague, too broad. What STYLES were implemented? What did she focus on most? Why?


Well, my problem was that I had no idea if there's actual martial arts in the world of RWBY, but let's just say Muay Thai.
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just to be clear, I made the edits.
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