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@Xandrya hahahahahahaha

Well theres a lot of pictures out there!

You dont have to change the role, but you might have to choose a different gear pic :P

EDIT: apart from the twin gear pic with Leo, I really really like the character, a strong application indeed!
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Eh, I photoshopped the picture so she's more mobile, but it's still the same one regardless. Let me know for sure if I need to change it.
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Eh, I photoshopped the picture so she's more mobile, but it's still the same one regardless. Let me know for sure if I need to change it.


Id just pick a different picture altogether, plenty of ninja esque suits on the web.
although I will ask did you really really have your heart set on a martial?
because I can see Lily being a very effective SWAT as well with her training. I wouldn't mind if you changed over roles, the you wouldnt be competing with Leo's equally strong application

(I really wouldn't want to choose between these two)
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I thought I'd offer, because this seems up your street.

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Alright, edited my CS. I really really really wanted Martial, but Leo beat me to it and I'd rather not go against them.
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@Dynamo FrokaneHmm... maybe but I also have a lot of stuff on my plate atm.
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Alright, edited my CS. I really really really wanted Martial, but Leo beat me to it and I'd rather not go against them.


Aww you making me feel guilty now! but I think that Lily would make an excellent SWAT and youll be acting as second in command because of that role.

Just one thing, as interesting as the story is it doesnt mention much about her training beyond krav maga (which is still viable as a swat) maybe let me know if shes had a career in some sort of military police or breach training and for how many years?
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What does wheeler gear look like?
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@sassy1085 thats a good question... anything really, Helmet and goggles would make sense.



EDIT: I suppose the 'Male' Helmet could be used for a female too
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Aww you making me feel guilty now! but I think that Lily would make an excellent SWAT and youll be acting as second in command because of that role.

Just one thing, as interesting as the story is it doesnt mention much about her training beyond krav maga (which is still viable as a swat) maybe let me know if shes had a career in some sort of military police or breach training and for how many years?


Don't feel bad, it's no biggie.

I updated her bio to include training from a private security firm. I think she's pretty much set unless there's anything else you can think of.
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This still acceptinf new applicants?
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@Catchphrase you can make a submission yes, I'm accepting as many submissions that are given until I make a decision which 7 make it into the RP (one per role).
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@Dynamo Frokane


Okay I'm logging your submission, some grammatical errors have made it kind of hard to read. Also for some reason the link to your theme song is unavailable, but that might just be cause of my region on youtube?
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@LetMeDoStuff hey did you manage to catch my last post about the Date of birth stuff with your CS?
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The link works fine to me so I guess it the region if you want to I can change it
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Sorry, been busy. I'm off in about 8 hours, I'll finish my 's up before I sleep
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@LetMeDoStuff hey did you manage to catch my last post about the Date of birth stuff with your CS?


I did, But I was waiting for a chance to get in and edit it. Doing so now, matie.
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@XandryaI love the Theme Song, mate...I am completely obsessed with the band.
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@Dynamo FrokaneOh I already had fixed it a while back...He's 29 as you said.

Just as a reminder Greg knows Mack. Do you want him to know him well, or only slightly. They did serve together, but he would've only had taken part on field a few times during Protests and Riots.
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