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@Ojo chan 42 Ok, good Cs but powers have either the potential to be OP and weak at the same time. I mean, 1st Op 2nd Weak.

So here's what I would do.

You want godspeed? Sure, you can be fast.

Have Lightning manipulation maybe giving you access to lightning speed. Wind manipulation would also work, running like the wind.

You want angel magic? Sure. Give him Angelic Force Manipulation or Magic.


ah okay, I edited it. but the godlike speed was a term I used from Rurouni kenshin(I assume you watch anime) . it just means he is super fast with his katana.
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@Ojo chan 42 No never seen it, so could you give examples or use another power to give him super speed which all in all would make him stronger. Plus, there is no point giving him lightning AND godlike speed, as both can do exactly the same thing.
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@Ojo chan 42 No never seen it, so could you give examples or use another power to give him super speed which all in all would make him stronger. Plus, there is no point giving him lightning AND godlike speed, as both can do exactly the same thing.


alright so power 1: he is just fast, the term godlike speed comes from the fact that he can read his opponements movements and counter-react the moment the enemy makes the first movement. (godlike, almost as if he can read the future) its no magical power it is an actual samurai skill to read your opponements movement.

power two: ads lightning to his katana, abeling him to elecktrify his oponement.
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@Ojo chan 42 Ok, so it's like Arken's ability. I will allow that and even let you make him be fast too however I still recommend with the second power to give him full lightning manipulation or angelic force manipulation but it's your choice. It will make him a lot stronger.
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@Ojo chan 42 Ok, so it's like Arken's ability. I will allow that and even let you make him be fast too however I still recommend with the second power to give him full lightning manipulation or angelic force manipulation but it's your choice. It will make him a lot stronger.


ah, okay. im gonna think about that. I was kinda stuck on what to do with the second power anyway, cuz I kinda forgot to think about it. so when I was filling in the cs and came by second power I wnet like ''frickkkkk gotta inmagine something for that as wel''
anyway. I'm going off now, g night to ya all ^^
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@Ojo chan 42 Ok well it's up to you. When you make up your mind go ahead and post in the character section.
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@Ojo chan 42

wait does that mean he wont like ophelia doom?
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I just saw it as he was supposed to be in the last group of students he's just that late hehehe
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wait does that mean he wont like ophelia doom?


who knows? :) Ophilia is no witch so he will at least not have the urge to kill her immediatly.
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@Ojo chan 42 Ok well it's up to you. When you make up your mind go ahead and post in the character section.


alright I made him a swordsman( no special power he is just very good) who can be posessed by an angel.

I hope this is alright?
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@Ojo chan 42 That's fine, go post and say you were late or something then have Arken tell you to join the large group and get ready to fight the three teachers.
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@Ojo chan 42
true she isnt a witch but she can summon a demon witch......sooo yh...
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@Ojo chan 42
true she isnt a witch but she can summon a demon witch......sooo yh...


Then a 'come at me bruh' shall occur at least once :) :) :)
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@Crimsonpirate I cannot accept you. One, you posted straight in the Cs section.

Two, personality is WAY too short.

I reccomend you change your power to full psychic as your powers fit in that perfectly.
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@The One what is the name of the tree teachers?
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@The One Oh this is crimson pirates first time on the site
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OK I can work more on it
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Remember to post it here first
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@Crimsonpirate Ok, I will go through one by one what you need to do.

First, add an appearance, I'd like some sort of picture please. I make the Cs the way I did for a reason, you shouldn't be changing it unless you got a good reason to.

Second, make your personality bigger. You did good on your bio but your personality is crap.

Third, optional though. Give yourself psychic, and expand on your second power, transmutation.

Fourth, separate the two powers to Power 1: Power 2:

Five, give your pet an appearance, species, age isn't so important but has to have a reason for no age.

Sixth, grab

Sentimental attachment: Darren (ferret)

Likes money/commodities and alchohol

Dislikes Irrationality nonsense and ciggarettes

and put it all in your first post as I am going to request the post to be deleted. It is a waste of space and I want it to be clean.
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