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Working on a post right now.

Estimated Time of Completion: Unknown ;D


I don't care much for estimations anyway.
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After the Overload arc is completed, I'm going to get the main plot in motion.
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Holy shit, that is an intimidating Character Sheet. The OP is massive. Looks like I have some reading to do.
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Holy shit, that is an intimidating Character Sheet. The OP is massive. Looks like I have some reading to do.


The sheet isn't that bad when you break it down a bit (It's stuff you usually put in a sheet).

But you're totally right about the OOC.

I fucking overdid it.
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Popping in the OOC chat. Hi to all you people.
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Just to let everyone know; I accepted @sakurasan via PM.
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@Nevix Okay, I don't mean to impose a length requirement on the RP, but I talked with a few people, and they all agreed that this sheet's a tad... short. Like, it could use some more detail about his personality and appearance (Which I barely have an idea of) in an RP where those two things are the most important.
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@Nevix Okay, I don't mean to impose a length requirement on the RP, but I talked with a few people, and they all agreed that this sheet's a tad... short. Like, it could use some more detail about his personality and appearance (Which I barely have an idea of) in an RP where those two things are the most important.


Alright, I expanded on the areas you mentioned. Personality is a bit awkwardly written, I admit, but significantly more descriptive than before.

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@Nevix The sheet's looking better now, there's just two things I have to note;

1). In your backstory... I kinda feel like you likened the MISW to Nazis. lol

I mean, they're very strict on Metahumans, but they wouldn't do something like kidnap a kid from their family (That's supervillain level shit right there).

2). I'm a bit unsure about the power. I think it could be described a bit better (Or the limits could be better established - such as how complex of a suggestion, how often can he do it, etc). And those weaknesses are limits.
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A new NPC has arrived.
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@Mr Allen J Got it. Will fix.

EDIT: I've managed to fix the backstory, and have more clearly defined the limits of the power. I am, however, having trouble coming up with new weaknesses. If the one's I had before were limits, what constitutes an actual weakness?
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@Mr Allen J Alright, both of the things mentioned have been edited.
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@Nevix Accepted.
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@Nevix Give me a shout if you want some ideas as to how to start.

You could participate in the next Overload collab, but idk if that would be good for an intro.
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@Nevix Give me a shout if you want some ideas as to how to start.

You could participate in the next Overload collab, but idk if that would be good for an intro.


Yeah, I could use some ideas.
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

Yeah, I could use some ideas.


Well, if you want some interaction to start off, off the top of my head Lihua's in a bar in Oakdell (Since I didn't mention her leaving at the end of this post) if you want to interact with her.
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Wow new people actually joined, that's quite a bit of a shocker

I have a free character or two (well only really Lihn tbh) if anyone needs someone to interact with for a start.
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@Nevix Actually, @FernStone is a better idea - go give his characters some luv.
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