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Anyways, scrublords, where are those quality posts?

Such disappointment.
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Psh even if I made a post it wouldn't ever be quality
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Almost done with this sheet. Just gotta cobble together the history section--gonna keep it fairly basic, since I revealed some of the juicy bits under the family section.
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Psh even if I made a post it wouldn't ever be quality


At this point, I'd take whatever you squeeze out your buttcheeks (Aka. All your posts).
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Almost done with this sheet. Just gotta cobble together the history section--gonna keep it fairly basic, since I revealed some of the juicy bits under the family section.


I too keep backgrounds simple because they're my least favorite part of a sheet.
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I too keep backgrounds simple because they're my least favorite part of a sheet.


Preeeaaaach. Should be done in the next, uh...half hour? Forty-five minutes? Probably sooner if I get the lead out and actually work.
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Aaaand, done. I'm looking forward to what you have to say--please, be as critical as you need. Took me a damn while, this one did, though I think this is the fastest I've ever completed a character sheet.

It's a real behemoth, to say the least.

I think it's blatantly obvious I began working on borrowed motivation, what, halfway through? If you squint, you can pinpoint exactly where the decline in quality starts.

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@Alkali A few things:

1). You can probably incorporate fears/sexuality into the personality section. I never really got why people feel like it deserves it's own section. lol

2). While I did say you could be brief on the backstory, I'm wondering where her powers came into play (Like when/how did they manifest, etc).

3). You should expand on the power section just a tad... I want to know some examples of some potential applications, etc.


Otherwise, I think she's a good character.
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@Mr Allen J

1. Honestly, that's more of a personal preference of mine--organizational purposes, y'know? However, I can absolutely move it if it's a problem!

2. Added a little segment in about when her powers manifested--and the immediate repercussions. I actually completely forgot--thanks for catching that!

3. Expansion added! If there are any more revisions needed, please, let me know!
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@Alkali Actually, I realized I don't really care that much about the fears section (Get ready for that a lot - I have a dangerous habit of having a criticism about a detail, then realizing it's unimportant later). Everyone else is cool, just one thing....

... Springgreen is also my character Cindy Keagan's color. >:(

In all seriousness, she's accepted. Just advise changing her color so we don't have too much confusion.
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... Springgreen is also my character Cindy Keagan's color. >:(

In all seriousness, she's accepted. Just advise changing her color so we don't have too much confusion.


Firstly, oh my god that comes as such a relief thank you so much this sheet took hours thank youuuu.

Secondly, damn. Guess they have to have a cage match to determine dominance.

Nah, I'm fucking with you. I'll get right on that--man, I could've sworn I picked a different shade. Once I'm done, can I pop her into the CS tab?

EDIT: Color changed. I hope aquamarine is okay with you!
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April and Vee are either going to get along really well or absolutely hate each other, given that they're highly similar people with literally exact opposite superpowers.

I'm excited.
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Can vouch, her sheet took literally hours. I was in Discord with @Alkali the whole time.

90% of it was furious typing. I'm so proud.
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April and Vee are either going to get along really well or absolutely hate each other, given that they're highly similar people with literally exact opposite superpowers.

I'm excited.


My jimmies are officially rustled. Why not both? Vitriolic best buds with poor impulse control and stupid hangout ideas? I feel like Vee's absolutely the type to poke as much fun as possible while still being, like, friendly. She's weird like that.

Also, @Acid, don't lie to yourself. You love furious typerventilating.
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You love furious typerventilating.


I like that and I'm taking credit for it.
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I like that and I'm taking credit for it.


Surprisingly enough, @Acid first introduced me to it. I'm actually creatively bankrupt--the jig's up.
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@Alkali Anyways, if you have any questions pertaining to how to introduce your character and etc, feel free to give me a shout.
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<Snipped quote by FernStone>

At this point, I'd take whatever you squeeze out your buttcheeks (Aka. All your posts).


Im actually half way done a post soooo youll get some written on a train shit
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I'm working on a post.
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@FernStone@TheWizardLizard
Sorry for the delay on my part DX "Deadline" is indeed... dead line for me these few days.

I promise to get my tired ass back to RP on Monday.
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