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@AzazelSlayer I mean, I would recommend reading all of the character sheets. It would be odd to join the game without knowing what has been created...
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*Sidles up*

Sooo

I hear your Demi-Gods, once approved,

Need parents.

Vestec is available. :)


STOP HAVING KIDS FOR FUCKS SAKES

DAD PLEASE

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@poog the pig um sorry

ULL'YANG JUST HAD 20 KIDS
if you haven't noticed yet
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@poog the pig um sorry

ULL'YANG JUST HAD 20 KIDS
if you haven't noticed yet


They don't make Lif any less loved ;-;

Also, coming back in a couple of days. Prepare for some good ol Lakshmi origins when I do.
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I would volunteer Toun to sire the Riddler there, if only to see how someone would convince him to do so. The improvement theme seems to fit there, at least.
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I would volunteer Toun to sire the Riddler there, if only to see how someone would convince him to do so. The improvement theme seems to fit there, at least.


Toun Fangirl No.1: Say, Overlordusperfctus Toun, can you show me the Perfect form of reproduction? Here. Right now.
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They don't make Lif any less loved ;-;

Also, coming back in a couple of days. Prepare for some good ol Lakshmi origins when I do.


Not true!

Lif just needs to,ask Vestec for anything and he'll do it!

I would volunteer Toun to sire the Riddler there, if only to see how someone would convince him to do so. The improvement theme seems to fit there, at least.


Vestec: 'Why Toun...have I ever told you how....Perfect your eye is?
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Toun Fangirl No.1: Say, Overlordusperfctus Toun, can you show me the Perfect form of reproduction? Here. Right now.


There are Toun fangirls now!?! Who could that possibly be-

Oh...

Don't answer that question.

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Vestec: 'Why Toun...have I ever told you how....Perfect your eye is?


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There are Toun fangirls now!?! Who could that possibly be-

Oh...

Don't answer that question.


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So just curious.. How is my Profile anyway.. Does it need to be worked on or is it good ?.
Just wondering
I may or may not have spent about 4 hours watching Harry potter and Deadthly Hollows on Tv
Also I have a idea what my first post will be :P
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@Cyclone I agree with you regarding CKII, but I don't think the strategic element is really its focus: there's a great amount of emphasis on the roleplay aspect. You know, keeping those damn dukes and whatnots in line, not keeping armies raised forever. Or if you start off as a duke or lower tier ruler, working out how to usurp the damn throne through a delicate web of marriages, assassinations and war


Oh you're completely right. The RP element is fun in a different sort of way, but after playing CK2 for a few months it just lacks the luster that it once had to me. I've had many shenanigans and seen much of the hilarious stuff.

EU's strategic depth gives it more replayability for me.

So just curious.. How is my Profile anyway.. Does it need to be worked on or is it good ?.
Just wondering
I may or may not have spent about 4 hours watching Harry potter and Deadthly Hollows on Tv
Also I have a idea what my first post will be :P


Well, the first thing that needs to be looked at is your Domain(Portfolio). The OP explains that so suffice to say that simply putting 'nightmares' down isn't enough. If you're lacking ideas, Nightmares(Fear) or something similar would be a good place to start.

I noticed numerous grammar issues in the CS as well. While a few aren't a big deal, when there's a bunch it gets distracting. Some people here on the OoC were talking about a website called Grammarly that will point out mistakes, so if you want you could try copying and pasting your sheet onto it to spot any problems.

I don't mean to be pretentious (and certainly not insulting) but I'll point out that the expectation here is that the writing will be of a Mid/High Casual level. Just look at some of the posts on the IC and OOC, and make sure you're not biting off more than you can chew.
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Ok will take a note of my Grammar and work on my profile a bit more some more Cant say I will post as large as the ones in the IC Thread though.. Will do my best though !

So if I say his Domain is Nightmares ( Fears ) is that good enough because in other Profiles.. That is what they wrote. So I am going to assume that is what you meant. In any Case I am going over the writing with a friend of mine who is a Editor. I see some of the spelling mistakes I made. But will have him go over it for me with comb

But yeah I am going over it now.. I made some edits already and Clarified that the nightmares he is Domain over is Fears. So anything that has to do with fears is ok ?
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Made some Edits to my Profile thread Mainly to the Domain part and Personality
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Ok will take a note of my Grammar and work on my profile a bit more some more Cant say I will post as large as the ones in the IC Thread though.. Will do my best though !

So if I say his Domain is Nightmares ( Fears ) is that good enough because in other Profiles.. That is what they wrote. So I am going to assume that is what you meant. In any Case I am going over the writing with a friend of mine who is a Editor. I see some of the spelling mistakes I made. But will have him go over it for me with comb

But yeah I am going over it now.. I made some edits already and Clarified that the nightmares he is Domain over is Fears. So anything that has to do with fears is ok ?


Oh don't worry about the size of posts. Matching the length of those IC posts isn't that important. Quality of writing is what we aim for, above quantity.

Nightmares(Fears) works. Previously you had Nightmares as a domain but no portfolio, which is why I just suggested you add (Fears) as the portfolio.

From how you're talking it looks like you're not entirely familiar with what we mean when we say Domain(Portfolio). It's an important thing to grasp so I'd recommend you go back to the OP and read that over.

So anything that has to do with fears is ok ?


I don't understand what you're asking, but hopefully going over the OP's section on Domain(Portfolio) can answer that and any other questions you may have
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I think I am starting to understand it now. So My Demigod is the DemiGod of nightmares. But in that Realm of nightmares, He is most powerful when it has to do with Fears. As that is the Specific Element of the Nightmare.. The Fear part of it is what he is the most powerful in. And since he is a DemiGod.. It is not as strong but it can be as he levels up. Ok I think I understand it now.

Its all about the Specifics which i am starting to understand.. And Now it makes sense why Ancient Egypt Had so many gods and Goddess. because they each controlled a Specific Domain Etc.

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Imagine a God of Dental Hygiene that is worshipped by dentists everywhere. I'd worship that dude xD
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Imagine a God of Dental Hygiene that is worshipped by dentists everywhere. I'd worship that dude xD


I must resist the urge to make European jokes.
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Imagine a God of Dental Hygiene that is worshipped by dentists everywhere. I'd worship that dude xD


Reminds me of the adeptus orthodontus. I'm on my phone right now, so in lieu of searching for and posting an image here, I suggest plugging it into Google image search yourself.

Also, I feel concerned that this was brought up on the day that I had a dentist appointment.
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1d4chan.org/wiki/Adeptus_Orthodontus

I feel proud that the image's tooltip is "The Astartes of the Orthodontus stand ever vigilant against tooth decay."

As if Astarte has ever brushed her teeth.
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<Snipped quote by Frettzo>

Reminds me of the adeptus orthodontus. I'm on my phone right now, so in lieu of searching for and posting an image here, I suggest plugging it into Google image search yourself.

Also, I feel concerned that this was brought up on the day that I had a dentist appointment.


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