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@Doc Doctor

You could run a truck by me and I still wouldn't understand the amount of edgelord you have bottled up in your body. Saying that Larry is going to be a fucking crazy kid swinging around shovels and breaking into people's home is not something you can just "throw by me" and expect me to be like "OH YA, GOOD IDEA. LOVE IT" Like, I'm a pretty lenient person but for fuck sakes.

Just go away, don't come back. Goodbye. So long. Get kid.




As for EVERY ONE ELSE, I am so sorry that this occurred. Please ignore any and all posts from this person and let's continue on with the roleplay. His character has been expelled, and put into some type of home for people that need help.
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We do have all these users not a part of the rp watching.
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But...I bought tickets...
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17! and 8 guests! Gotta love it XD
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Anyone can interact with my character at the moment just for everyone's general information...


Yeah we both left our characters with no one to talk to. We are both stuck til more happens. lol
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All the corrections are in crimson and underlined. I didn't take the time to fix up every run-on sentence, that would've required some intensive surgery if you catch my drift.

Ronin Tanzini





Ronin stretched in bed, reaching for the alarm on his phone and dismissing it. He instantly plugged in some headphones like he always did and started listening to some music, meanwhile throwing off the covers and sliding into his sweats and a grey shirt that had "NAVY" written in Navy blue across the front, that's where he plans on going to college. He slid the phone in his pocket and walked out of his room and into the bathroom, having already taken a shower last night he only fixed his hair and brushed his perfectly straight teeth. He smiled in the mirror when he was done and with a nod of approval he put his brush away and walked out, hitting the switch on the way.

He hesitated at the stairs then turned and went back to his room, grabbing his sweatshirt and spraying a dash of cologne on underneath. He slid down the granite staircase railing and landed with a slide on his socks at the bottom. He ran and slid around the corner, heading to the modernistic kitchen, half dancing half jumping as the music changed to another favorite. He waved to Hailee, one of the house maids, as she slid him some French toast across the white granite island counter top. He scarfed it down and let out a moan of appreciation as Hailee smiled at him, and then he dashed off and slid on the hardwood floor again and again until he got to the "mudroom". It was kinda like his personal locker room where he kept all his sports gear and shoes. He dug through all his random stuff and found his favorite shoes, slipped 'em on, and naturally grabbed his soccer bag (school stuff inside along with a ball in the ball pocket) and his 60" lacrosse long pole that was almost as tall as he was along with his lax gloves and headed out. He left through the garage, passing by his dads favorite Jaguar that he couldn't take on his current business trip. Once outside he put his hood up and turned up the volume on his music as he ran to school, faster than most would find comfortable, while he "shadow practiced" cradling his lacrosse ball and doing dodges on invisible players as he bounced around to his music.

Once he got to the school he slowed his breathing and put his hood down, scanning the scene, he located where he was supposed to sit and headed that way. When he got to the bleacher he bounded up multiple steps at a time all the way to the top and walked over to the middle and took a seat. He watched as kids filled the bleachers and observed the mixing patterns of students, watching all the freshman separate from most of the other grades. In them he saw Indie, to his disappointment, smoking. Then his eyes fell on Lily... Ronin always dreamed of lily, but she was a loyal girlfriend so he averted his eyes and got lost in his music, ignoring his feelings towards the gorgeous female. He watched his friend Jake and the rest of his soccer buddies show up, debating on whether to go associate with them or not. He decided against it as everyone was released from the bleachers, instead he wandered over to the school and started playing wall-ball with his lacrosse gear, wasting the first day of school away.


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@ArkmageddonCat Let me guess Kas sold them to you.
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@Doc Doctor

You could run a truck by me and I still wouldn't understand the amount of edgelord you have bottled up in your body. Saying that Larry is going to be a fucking crazy kid swinging around shovels and breaking into people's home is not something you can just "throw by me" and expect me to be like "OH YA, GOOD IDEA. LOVE IT" Like, I'm a pretty lenient person but for fuck sakes.

Just go away, don't come back. Goodbye. So long. Get kid.




As for EVERY ONE ELSE, I am so sorry that this occurred. Please ignore any and all posts from this person and let's continue on with the roleplay. His character has been expelled, and put into some type of home for people that need help.


It's one thing to be lenient, and another to suddenly start throwing around insults. I'd appreciate it if you would be a bit more civilized.
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YOU DAMN USERS AND GUESTS WANT SOME SNACK AND REFRESHMENTS WHILE HERE?
*sets out cookies and alcoholic beverages* Watch me beat my head against the wall while we're at it.

get kid
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@Doc Doctor And what you just did was completely and utterly uncalled for. It was rude and not needed. Even with grammatical errors his post had more substance than either of yours.
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It's one thing to be lenient, and another to suddenly start throwing around insults. I'd appreciate it if you would be a bit more civilized.


C I V I L I Z E D?
You breathed heavily on a girl and told her you were gonna fuck her mom and kill her with a shovel.

& I'm the one being told to be more civilized? What world do you live on where you are in the right?
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[Doc Doctor] Really? Fucking really? My fucking god YOU'RE PIssing ME OFF. NOT MENTIONING BECAUSE I DON'T WANT A REPLY.



Ok?? No one cares about those small mistakes. Your post is so short that you couldn't have made any mistakes because that'd make your posts shittier than they already were.
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when doc cant even get kid
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YOU DAMN USERS AND GUESTS WANT SOME SNACK AND REFRESHMENTS WHILE HERE?
*sets out cookies and alcoholic beverages* Watch me beat my head against the wall while we're at it.

get kid


I came for the edge, and I sure as hell got cut on it.

I'm bleeding to death on my living room floor as I type this!

Ten out of ten.
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@ArkmageddonCat Let me guess Kas sold them to you.


The fuck is that? I was given a link for some cash.
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<Snipped quote by MissCapnCrunch>

It's one thing to be lenient, and another to suddenly start throwing around insults. I'd appreciate it if you would be a bit more civilized.


Doc, you agreed to leave. That means you should stop posting here and actually leave. You are actually being uncivilized by the way you are acting. Also, what she said to you was not sudden. It was very warranted. This is her RP not yours so therefore she has the right to kick you out. Which she has.
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@MissCapnCrunch Wow, the edge was strong with that one. It hurt my soul. Good on you. Get Kid.
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@alexfangtalon

You should read back and see that he started acting rude first, and so I responded by kindly helping him as an editor, seeing as he's such a great writer. All great writers need editors to get published. I fancy you as one of the more understanding people here, you know.

@MissCapnCrunch

That's called I.C. What my characters does and what I as a human being do are two different things. I've tried to be friendly O.O.C, but if you don't want to be friends, I'm fine with that. We can part ways as strangers with a mutual understanding that their temperaments are incompatible.
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