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...I won't say anything more this time, but next time, don't write for my character without my explicit permission, in any way shape form or fashion please. I apologize, but godmodding/powerplaying (which that is) is a huge peeve of mine in any RP.

That includes assuming what you think would have happened. Instead, let me write it. Write him bumping into her, by all means, but that should be the end of your post to allow me proper time to react.
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@Rune_Alchemist @6slyboy6 Alternatively you could always co-op an interaction post.
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I apologize. I made the post under an assumption I based on myself. I was making it from my phone, 5 hours before going to Trabsylvania. I had to put in SOME content, preferrably the kind that would not require me to watch it hourly.

But here is the deal: let me rewrite it so Grian will lose his bag, and demand Cheiko will find it for him. There, no godmodding, no stumbling, no anything. Hows that?
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Don't worry about it, it's fine as it is. I'll roll with it for now - just edit her not dropping anything and we'll be fine. In the future please check with me before you do anything with my character yourself.

A collab as @Heckno12 suggested are always a good way to get some quick interaction out of the way without all the needless fluff. Though, at the moment I don't think its necessary. Chieko's about to leave Girian and let him find that bag himself xD
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Then it maybe in need for a collab. Cause Grian win't be letting her escape. I guess we are equal now, am I right?

Edit: what changed in one sentence:
Grian bumped into Cheiko who stimbled but didn't fall, thought Grian lost his bag/purse of coins and is now mad the girl, so he snapoed his fingers to make the girl realise she did wrong and he also didn't give any bags to Cheiko as she dropped nooone. Yep, no problem, it took no effort to fix
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...not really? She is going to attempt to walk away. By all means try and stop her. I'm not just going to have her magically be on the other side of the city. I'll end it with 'So she began to walk away' or something.

Which is then when you can try and stop her.

Just remember this is in a public place. With a bunch of people watching after he ran into her.
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Probably the same public space where Subaro can shout like a retard and people only notice after minutes XD

But oh boy do we love him for that :P
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@ADamnFiddle I wasn't sure if I should mention in the post, but I think it's fairly set up for our characters to meet.
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@ADamnFiddle I wasn't sure if I should mention in the post, but I think it's fairly set up for our characters to meet.


Iigt Ill go work on a post when I get the time.
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@ADamnFiddle Take your time. The main thing I wanted to do in that post is demonstrate just how well Ryan performs when he has no idea what's going on.
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Pretty good. I am still laughing at the image of a boy going around a medieval town with a shopping cart XD
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Posted again.

Will probably be my last one for tonight.
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@ADamnFiddle Take your time. The main thing I wanted to do in that post is demonstrate just how well Ryan performs when he has no idea what's going on.


Got my post out. Hopefully it was satisfactory.
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"Perhaps over a lost coin purse"
I always love when people make references :3
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"Perhaps over a lost coin purse"
I always love when people make references :3


Subtle humor is the best kind of humor imo.
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Welp posted but I wont be up for 6 hours to check out any more posts =x=

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I'd just like to point out, at this point Chieko is going to completely hate Grian and want nothing to do with him. So, good job on ruining that relationship before it began xD
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@Rune_AlchemistI mean... Grian won't take bitchin high school girls losing his money for shit lol.

Also, I think Cheiko will need ro get used to it, cause Grian will stick to her until she pays up. Regarding her current financial status that could take a long time
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Chieko will just go find some sort of guard and tell them he's stalking her, and also assaulted her. She don't take shit from no one. Even a cute fluffy dog.

So yeeeah. This is only going to end badly at the moment xD
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@Rune_Alchemist Yeah, I don't really see either of them salvaging this as things are.

edit: @ADamnFiddle So, how would Maria respond to Ryan panicking saying he accidentally stole all the things in the cart? I mean, technically he didn't do it intentionally...and it isn't like he can return any of it.
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