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yet from those flames
No light, but rather darkness visible

- Milton, Paradise Lost




Ten years ago Dagon IV, Emperor of Aldebaran, covetous of the lands he did not rule and fearing his own mortality, enacted a heinous rite with the help of his closest lieutenants. What they did, exactly, is the source of constant speculation: some say they sacrificed the children of Aldebaran's capital, Kuranes, to the spider-god Nyarlthos in exchange for a share in the deity's power. Others that he consumed the souls of the city's populace, increasing his might immensely, though at the price of being dependent on continual human sacrifice to survive. Others still maintain that Dagon found an ancient artifact of immense power and so ascended to become a demigod.

Whatever the Emperor and his circle of followers did, it caused the sun to shine an angry, dull red for ten full days, with no moon at night, only strange and sinister constellations. From the Red Night, which ruined crops and plunged the world into panicked chaos, the Emperor emerged as a being of immense power, whose armies swept over the other nations of Geryon. His circle of acolytes too had become something more than human, wielding powerful and dark magics, and in time became known as the Perfecti, his most fearsome servants.

The powerful kingdom of Varyon, neighbor and ancient rival to Aldebaran, was the first to be destroyed, crushed by Dagon's unexpected onslaught. After the shocking defeat and enslavement of Varyon, some nations bent the knee, others actively collaborated with the new god-emperor, but most were enslaved and destroyed in their turn.

Aldebaran, once a rich and fertile riverland, slowly became a twisted, haunted place filled with the husks of once proud cities, now sinking into poisonous bogs and fens and haunted by monsters and demons. Where once was a thriving culture and economy, now there is only slavery amid ruins, and the omnipresent totems and shrines of the Cult of Dagon. The citizens of Aldebaran are changed too.The Emperor's dreaded Legions are made up of horrible mutants and abhumans, with bulging, vaguely insectoid eyes and sharpening mouthparts and claws.

Now Dagon IV is now nearly master of all, ruling with the aid of his Perfecti. They enforce a strict caste system in the lands they control directly, and demand tribute in the form of children, woman and blood-slaves from the nations they've subjugated. Human sacrifice is offered to the god-emperor night and day in his haunted capital of Kuranes, and the nights grow longer and darker as the world itself begins to sicken. Strange, unpleasant plants and fungus have begun to spread beyond the borders of Aldebaran, and wildlife is becoming increasingly strange and violent.

Some, however, resist still. The Scarred King, the brother to the late King of Varyon Theophilius II, has continued to inflict defeats on the Legions, and is a legendary figure of hope to the masses chafing under Dagon's yoke. The situation of the rebels is growing desperate, but it is rumored the King has learned of an ancient weapon capable of changing the course of this war. Risking all, he has assembled a fellowship of allies and friends to undertake a perilous mission to secure what may be the last hope of defeating Dagon.

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Welcome!

This is a fantasy RP that takes place after the victory of the sinister God-Emperor Dagon over the fantasy world of Geryon. Players will write as characters who have been recruited by the Scarred King into the rebellion.

The setting is what I call "High Fantasy OOC/Low Fantasy IC", meaning that the world would have as many fantastic elements as we like, but there would be limited magic "on camera" in the IC, as both an aesthetic choice to keep magic... magical and mysterious, as well as to put a limit on IC power levels while allowing for maximum creativity and freedom OOCly. There will be no magic system and no 'canon' cosmology for this RP, so competing and mutually incompatible understandings of the world, gods, and magic are fine.

-It is (grim)dark fantasy RP set in a harsh and unforgiving fantasy world slowly succumbing to a mysterious darkness.
-I'd like this to be an exercise in collaborative world building. That means that we want characters that feel like they inhabit a shared world. Players should collaborate heavily on designing their characters and the setting.
-It is low-medium fantasy: magic exists. It is powerful, dangerous, and rare. Rare.

-It is vaguely 1600 AD tech. Gunpowder, muskets, cannon, etc all exist, though they are not used by the Empire of Aldebarran.
-original fantasy races are enouraged
-Inspired by Tolkien, Warhammer fantasy and 40K, Lovecraft, Morrowind, Song of Ice and Fire...looking forward to seeing what others bring to the table.
- Advanced writing standards.

Players can create characters from player-created nations that were conquered or are being conquered by Dagon, or ones which are still resisting Dagon's advance (though I will limit the latter category). Characters need not have heroic motives- mafias, pirate gangs, brigands, cults, etc, etc may all have in interest in defeating Dagon. Likewise, characters may be all manner of fantasy archetypes (including magic users) and races (preferably creative twists on or something different than the bog-standard human/dwarf/orc/gnome/elf lineup). World building will be a big part of this RP.

Some details on Geryon

Aldebaran A once-fertile riverland that has quickly turned into a dark and twisted place, more and more populated by abhumans and strange plants and beasts. Once great cities are now husks of themselves; many are being dismantled for metals and stones needed by the Legions. Dagon's capital of Kuranes is a center of economic activity, however, as slaves are marched in from all across Geryon either to serve as sacrifices or labor on the immense temple-palace the Emperor is constructing. The Empire has reorganized its caste system along the following lines:

The Perfecti: the nobility of the Empire, serving as priests, commanders, elite troops and administrators of conquered territories. Known for their cruelty, cannibalism and decadence, many sport horrifying mutations. They are stronger and faster than an average human, and many are skilled blood-mages.

Aldebaran Legions: abhuman soldiers in service to Dagon, they are disciplined and brutal, fanatically devoted to their God-Emperor. Infamous for their ravenous, cannibalistic tendencies.

Slaves: the rest of the population is made up of various levels of slaves, many of whom are slowly mutating into servile, mindless beastmen as Aldebaran continues to decay.

Varyon Large, human kingdom located amid the fertile valleys of the Godsfang Mountains, Varyon resisted Aldebaran expansionism for centuries, but was quickly crushed by the transformed Dagon. It is now ruled by brutality and fear, its cities burned, its farmlands collectivized to feed the soldiers and slaves of Aldebaran. It's population is harvested regularly for slaves and sacrifices to send to Kuranes. A collaborationist puppet regime 'rules' Varyon from its decimated capital of Valens. King Odyssion V and his circle of nobles (known as the Marked for the brands they bear on their faces that denote them as servants of Dagon) ensure that quotas of feed, flesh and metals are met. In exchange for their service, they or their children can be raised to the status of a Perfecti.

The mountains and pine forests of Varyon are haunted by brutal rebels serving the Scarred King, who continues to elude capture by the Legions and has been a consistent thorn in the side of the pretender-king Odyssion.

Being adjacent to Aldebarren, Varyon's forests and fields are beginning to twist and sicken as the blight that plagues Dagon's lands spreads beyond its borders.



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This looks rather interesting! I have to think on whether I'll be able to join since I have so many rps... But I am super tempted. What would the expected posting speed be?
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All right, just chiming in here to let you know I'm still on board and making progress with my character draft. I've written up some paragraphs for religion, appearance, personality and equipment, and tomorrow most likely I'll finish up personal story (if I decide to spell it out at all - most of it is already stated or implied in other categories, or better left to mystery/interpretation) and skills, as well as some words on a side character I'm introducing along with my main.
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All right, just chiming in here to let you know I'm still on board and making progress with my character draft. I've written up some paragraphs for religion, appearance, personality and equipment, and tomorrow most likely I'll finish up personal story (if I decide to spell it out at all - most of it is already stated or implied in other categories, or better left to mystery/interpretation) and skills, as well as some words on a side character I'm introducing along with my main.


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This looks rather interesting! I have to think on whether I'll be able to join since I have so many rps... But I am super tempted. What would the expected posting speed be?

Hi, not sure if you saw my post, so reposting ^_^

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What sort of characters are others considering? I was imagining either a minor noble or knight, who's lands were taken by Aldebaran, or a noteworthy mercenary/brigand that merged with the rebellion.
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My character concept is looking to be a scholar-swordmaster from an Arabic-middle-east region of nomads. A bit of magic involved.
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My character concept is a man from a tribe of steppe nomads, inspired by such peoples as the Mongols, Turks, Cossacks, etc. You know, horse and bow and all. Spruce it up with a touch of shamanism and tribal magic involving hallucinogens and ritual self-mutilation to channel the power of terrible things (unspecified) that lurk at the precipice between life and death, at the potential cost of the channeler's sanity.

I have an idea for my religious beliefs where it's thought that if a person is murdered, their spirit cannot find rest until they're avenged (some tie-in here with my shamanistic magic is quite possible here, I reckon), and it falls upon kin and tribesmen to carry out vengeance. Debts and especially revenge will be important in my people's culture.

I want to work this into my character's motivations for fighting Dagon somehow, but I'm not sure yet how I'll connect all of this. I've thought of my tribe having a kind of vassal relationship with the kingdom of Varyon, or maybe they're just rubbing up against Dagon's border enough to warrant his wrath. (These kinds of peoples are famed for being a menace to societies that border them, after all...)
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All right, here it is, my first draft. I uh, did not actually include a biography section for a variety of reasons. Here's why: Most of the relevant information that would have come out of it is already in this sheet in some form or another, either directly explained or at least implied. I didn't feel the need to bloat this sheet further with largely redundant or uninteresting details. Secondly, the things that *are* important and that aren't directly explained (such as the incident with Nitsa) are far more effective from a storytelling perspective if left unexplained, so again writing it out would just diminish the quality of the character. So all in all, unless you really want me to do it, in which case I will, I'd prefer to leave it out.

The only detail that would have been addressed in the story, that needs to be addressed, and has thus far not been treated in the sheet is how my duo of characters came to join the Scarred King's ranks. As far as that is concerned, I don't know, I'll leave it vague for now. I don't know much about the King in the first place, or his rebellion, or the company he keeps. Considering their location and my character's origin it can always be conveniently explained that they simply met by chance and saw mutual benefit in working together.

So, well, there you go. Hope you like it.

Edit: Oh right, I almost forgot:
-Inspired by Tolkien, Warhammer fantasy and 40K, Lovecraft, Morrowind, Song of Ice and Fire...looking forward to seeing what others bring to the table.
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Berserk. I bring Berserk to the table. My character is Berserk.

Edit 2: After mulling over it a bit, maybe I'll add the story after all since I have more to tell now. Point stands that it's technically redundant, but it might make for a nice read, round the character off. Will see about it tomorrow. No promises though.

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@FlaggTell me if this sounds too wild to you: I'm thinking up a noblewoman of a province, or a princess of a minor state under Aldebaran's sovereignty. Once loyal to the empire, her house and others allied to it began to renounce their allegiance to Dagon after witnessing the horrors wrought by his pact. However, they found themselves changed by the sorcery ravaging the country, turned into something resembling vampires or strigoi. One way or another, they avoided loosing their minds and fled, escaping Dagon's tyranny, but becoming branded as traitors in the process.
Left with no choice but to join the Scarred King, they fight against their former subjects, hoping that one day, they might see their land restored to normal. Despite their good intentions, the magics unleashed by Dagon's pact have transformed them into vampiric beings, possessed of powerful abilities, but in a constant struggle to remain in control of their bestial urges. On top of this, they are ostracized by most of their new allies, being a product of the magic that they fight against.

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This looks interesting - I noticed that it was intended for a small group and there were a fair few respondents in the Interest Check. Might I be able to join or was I a little late to the party/fellowship?
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My character is the re-realization of a character I never had a chance to fully realize from an amazing concept by @Dead Cruiser.

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This seems interesting. I love world building after all, since this is low fantasy IC wise what are your limits for a wyvern rider or a human with dragon's blood?

As I've had an idea for a dragon-centered culture and society, for my character to hail from.
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Hi, not sure if you saw my post, so reposting ^_^

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Not sure on the posting speed yet- probably once every week to ten days.

Left with no choice but to join the Scarred King, they fight against their former subjects, hoping that one day, they might see their land restored to normal. Despite their good intentions, the magics unleashed by Dagon's pact have transformed them into vampiric beings, possessed of powerful abilities, but in a constant struggle to remain in control of their bestial urges. On top of this, they are ostracized by most of their new allies, being a product of the magic that they fight against.


Sounds awesome to me.

This looks interesting - I noticed that it was intended for a small group and there were a fair few respondents in the Interest Check. Might I be able to join or was I a little late to the party/fellowship?


Nope, welcome aboard!

This seems interesting. I love world building after all, since this is low fantasy IC wise what are your limits for a wyvern rider or a human with dragon's blood?

As I've had an idea for a dragon-centered culture and society, for my character to hail from.


Either of those would likely be fine.

My character concept is a man from a tribe of steppe nomads, inspired by such peoples as the Mongols, Turks, Cossacks, etc. You know, horse and bow and all. Spruce it up with a touch of shamanism and tribal magic involving hallucinogens and ritual self-mutilation to channel the power of terrible things (unspecified) that lurk at the precipice between life and death, at the potential cost of the channeler's sanity.

I have an idea for my religious beliefs where it's thought that if a person is murdered, their spirit cannot find rest until they're avenged (some tie-in here with my shamanistic magic is quite possible here, I reckon), and it falls upon kin and tribesmen to carry out vengeance. Debts and especially revenge will be important in my people's culture.

I want to work this into my character's motivations for fighting Dagon somehow, but I'm not sure yet how I'll connect all of this. I've thought of my tribe having a kind of vassal relationship with the kingdom of Varyon, or maybe they're just rubbing up against Dagon's border enough to warrant his wrath. (These kinds of peoples are famed for being a menace to societies that border them, after all...)


Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

@Ashgan & @vietmyke- will review the CSes shortly and get back to you!
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@ashgan awesome, accepted!

@vietmyke likewise!

Throw those characters up in the Character tab. As I flesh out the Scarred King, it might be good to work out how our characters are related. Ashgan, it is likely Serilda is close with the King, since they are similarly ruthless and are both from Varyon/the Godsfang mtns.

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@Flagg

Shiny, I shall work on a character sheet immediately!
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Not sure on the posting speed yet- probably once every week to ten days.


Okeedokee, thanks! Hm, I'll try to make a character then.
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I'm still working on this CS (bits like appearance/equipment/skills which I have planned out but not had the presence of mind to write up still missing and others needing some tweaking) but I thought it was worth just posting my progress so y'all know I'm not fading away!


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Edit 2: After mulling over it a bit, maybe I'll add the story after all since I have more to tell now. Point stands that it's technically redundant, but it might make for a nice read, round the character off. Will see about it tomorrow. No promises though.
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Just letting y'all know I did just that. It's big, has tons of technically needless details, but fluff can be nice all the same. Hope y'all like it.
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I'm still working on this CS (bits like appearance/equipment/skills which I have planned out but not had the presence of mind to write up still missing and others needing some tweaking) but I thought it was worth just posting my progress so y'all know I'm not fading away!



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Just letting y'all know I did just that. It's big, has tons of technically needless details, but fluff can be nice all the same. Hope y'all like it.


Will have a chance to look both over today!
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