God damn that just kept growing....
I hope it's all alright. :)
I hope it's all alright. :)
Second, his history is very lacking, even for the section. And confusing? I also would have preferred you run the whole alternate universe bit by me before including it.
Last, his powers. I get that he has to be touching the stone to use them, but how does the invisibility fit into it? Also, the stones themselves, and the corresponding "kryptonite" stones, are not exactly what I was picturing. Not necessarily in a bad way, but in a kind of... Interesting way? Would you mind explaining more about them, perhaps?