The Septonium Concordant
Number of Systems: 1
Name of System : Shao VI

Woooo I started a new page!

Ohhh, and Sigma, wanna create a grand alliance, like in the other RP that never started

Sure, sounds good with me.

-ignore-

Or so your ignoring me now!......OUR ALLIANCE IS OFF!!!

You say that, but how do you think I feel. I've only made 1 post that hasn't been ignored...

Lol, werent we in the same RP before the site went down?

maybe... Which RP was it?

Another Nation RP, I used the same race. Dont remember the name though....eemmt was in it. If you remember that name

mattmanganon said
So, how are my guys on page 9? Anything that you think needs changing?

Okay, here's my review, Mattmanganon:

Male levinti picture is either missing or broken.
Leviniti have 4 traits? I thought we were only supposed to have two? I guess that's a GM question to settle.
Mogg - don't really have a disadvantage trait, but do have an advantage trait? Possibly another GM thing.
Kenris - if one is cut off they do nothing - yet they can communicate so long as they're in the same universe - so how could you possibly cut one off from the hivemind?
Galfan - *wear and tear (minor mispelling)
Maybe collab to have them all run from some other PC race that then lost interest for whatever reason? Just a thought.
Culture/Society: "they landed on the Lush planet that way Brittania" (another minor spelling/grammar thing; I think you meant to say "that they named Brittania")
Galfans and Levinti can breed? Interesting. Kinda neat. Raises a "is Solus real?" question.
Mecha. Ugh. (That's strictly a personal and arbitrary hatred of mecha on my part; it looks fine [in fact, i like how it gives the leviniti a robotGalfan-like form. I think it works, and is therefore an exception toward my general attitude toward mechas. Heck, it even reinforces the "is Solus real" theme.])
Why are Praetorians only sent to code black battles? Too few to have on every field? It makes sense from a meta RP perspective, but it's not quite explained from an in-universe perspective.

They seem interesting. They have a uniqueness to them in that you've got five separate species, so it feels like a federation. One that could fly apart at any moment. So they've definitely got character. I can't speak much to the military side of things. It seems like you care about RP'ing them more than "winning" with them, so that's good.

Name: The Grand Brittanian Federation
(scores out of 5)
Uniqueness: 4
RP-ability: 3 (it might be annoying to have to RP each species' reaction to every event. You've got like five factions in one here!)
Interactivity: 4 (seems like people will be able to interact with your species)
Drama Potentiality Factor: 5
Fleshed Out: 4 (you could add some stuff to history if you wanted to)
Potential to Survive: 3 (I could see them imploding or surviving; it depends if they work together or not)
Theme/Metaphor Bonus: 2

(4/5+3/5+4/5+5/5+3/5+2/5)/5 = 21/25 = 84%

Here's my review on my race, for fairness' sake:

Name: Kerbal Interstellar Program
Uniqueness: 4 (space lemmings seems very unique; stealing directly from a videogame... less so)
RP-ability: 3 (what are you going to do outside of launching rockets at places? seriously!)
Interactivity: 2 (Um. You don't even have a central government)
Drama Potentiality Factor: 1 (They don't even care if they get killed!)
Fleshed Out: 4 (you could add some more history, but other parts seem thought-out)
Potential to Survive: 2 (HA!)
Hilarity Bonus: 5

(4+3+1+2+4+5)/25 = 19/25 = 76%

Thanks, i'll go fix those.

Also, the Mogg do have a disadvantage, in that the average Mogg male has the I.Q. of a glass of water.

Repetun, can I join with a tier 2 nation? A glorious commonwealth of likeminded races that acts more like an autocratic empire while constantly besieged by internal dissent and revolution?

Well, asuras did not put a limit on exact numbers on Tier 2 nations. So I would say go ahead.

Ok, good news. My computer is finally fixed and shall resume regular activity.

Great, now all we need is some regularly activity and we'll be all set... So, what's the news on the IC?

Well, not sure. Asuras hasn't been on for a while.

Sigma said
Well, not sure. Asuras hasn't been on for a while.

oh he's been on, just not here, he posted in ☄For Divine Entertainment☄ about two hours ago =3

Someone should poke him.

not it....

Wait.

Theodorable said
I surmise I can, since I am responsible for the map.

With this said, I feel my time in the thread has ended.

Hope the RP doesn't die on you guys.

Cya.