Fattwan, he is accepted by me. You just need 1 more acceptance and you will be good to go.

Accepted by me as well.

Um...not to sound bitter...but uh....hi I've been waiting for an official second approval. since yesterday.

@MasterJay (Finally saw what you did with your name. Clever,)

Kumori Yotsuki accepted. To the char bin with him.

@Nicias Askani

Accepted. To the char bin with your character.

Ok im not bitter anymore /\./\ Yay.

Thanks, added.

Tank you! added

No problem. Now, go and have some fun in the IC. Hup hup. Fly little birds.~

Name: Wukong
Nickname/Alias: Wu
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: none

Parents: Naiga (father) and Laali (mother) Khan
Length and build: 5'7", muscular
Weight: 150 lb
Favorite weather and season: none



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: None

Clan/Bloodline: None

Rank: Chunin

Chakra Nature: Earth



Appearance: http://oocherry-chanoo.deviantart.com/art/Sun-Wukong-221427840



Personality: Wukong is a very quirky individual who likes to joke about almost anything. He is always taking things too far and never knows when to shut up, often making jokes at the wrong time. However, he is rather caring and does it in good heart - he simply doesn't have the same social awareness as everyone else. He is also rather vulgar and immature.



History: Wukong basically forgot his real name. His parents were lame old grocery store owners and he did everything in his power to escape his household at the age of 14. From that point forward, Wukong, commonly know was "Wu or Wuko", sought to tread on the path of the Shinobi as it he felt it was a much better and more honorable destiny than selling herbs and spices. When he ran from the Land of Water, he ended up landing on the mainland countries by sailing as a stow away. Upon reaching the shores, Wu wandered for weeks, barely surviving off of food given to him out of sympathy. Being as silly as he was, he severely miscalculated how much life costs in the shinobi world - he had run away from home with nothing more than his clothes and about 500 ryo. Eventually, he was "saved" by Iosaf, a man who people often shunned due to his cryptic mannerisms. The man claimed to be a hermit, and upon meeting him, Wu felt it was his destiny to learn from and be saved by the man. Hermit Iosaf was beyond happy to find someone such as Wu to be so accepting of his unique lifestyle - one of isolation and self preservation. For a good number of years, Wu spent his life training along side the hermit.

Despite his old age, Iosaf had an amazing physical condition, capable of lifting and tossing boulders as if they were pebbles. He could also jump at heights that left Wu staring in awe. Wu understood that it would take a long time before he could attain such power, but through diligence and hard work, he had managed to impress the hermit enough to receive a small gift. Iosaf called it "Vio", a red and gold staff that held an insane amount of energy within it. It was here that the Hermit bonded half of his chakra with half of Wu's, contained it within the staff, and set Wu off to find his won path.

Wu had lost complete track of time during his isolated training with the hermit, and due to this, he simply estimated that his age. At age "15", he decided it was time to return to his home to confront his parents, as it was the right thing to do. However, when he returned to the Land of Water, he had come to learn that both his parents were killed in a bandit raid that sacked a huge portion of the village's outskirts. Upon learning this, Wu made an oath to become a shinobi and fight the evils that plagued the lands. He became genin not too long after. He was naturally fit, capable of running faster and hitting harder than most. But he had no Shinobi blood in him, so chakra control was always a struggle. Now, Wukong proudly serves in the Mist's Shinobi forces as a genin hoping to be promoted yet once more.

Theme Song: None


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities

-Staff wielding ability



Special Traits

-High endurance. He can run extremely long distanced at sprinting speed without breaking a sweat.
-Adept martial artist


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu



Summons


Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uwX6Cfqs

@Kisheto

Sorry Kisheto, but for now only accept genins as student characters.

He's not a student though...

Whatever I edited him to genin

My review mate. :)
Besides : Chuunins are student characters, unless you want him to lead a squad. Though I would go for specialized Jounin then.

1. ) I find the history a bit short. Mind to expand it a bit? I rather would want it a bit more expanded as it seems a a bit short. I ask this cause I know you can do so much better with your skill. ;)

2,) Bo Style • Shatter
Each weakness must be told and be clear. People need to be realistic with their characters and can't instantly know the weakness. Observant and intelligent characters may do some hypothesis and such, but that is about it.(I won't even go on sharingans or such that can predict/see through a jutsu)
Besides, a second is maybe too fast for an 'unpredictable' jutsu. I would go for three. Else it would become more like a whack-a-mole on a distance technique.

3.) Bo Style • Gliding Pole
Sounds more like a C ranked technique. Also, how fast does it allow him to go about and such?

4.) Bo Style • Earth Shower
Sounds more like a B ranked technique to me. Also, the amount is a bit too high with the fact he can control them and with a whack turn them into a shrapnel grenade. (Earth shattering around due an implosion/explosion causes some mean and very sharp rocks to fly about. In other words, a similar kind of shrapnel grenade effect.)

That is for now my review. Hope you have something with it. :)

I edited

Gerontis said
My review mate. :)Besides : Chuunins are student characters, unless you want him to lead a squad. Though I would go for specialized Jounin then.1. ) I find the history a bit short. Mind to expand it a bit? I rather would want it a bit more expanded as it seems a a bit short. I ask this cause I know you can do so much better with your skill. ;)

Sorry, I made it on my iPhone. I'm rushing these two characters because you know Kisheto will be my main. I'll still try my hardest to work with all three.

2,) Bo Style • ShatterEach weakness must be told and be clear. People need to be realistic with their characters and can't instantly know the weakness. Observant and intelligent characters may do some hypothesis and such, but that is about it.(I won't even go on sharingans or such that can predict/see through a jutsu) Besides, a second is maybe too fast for an 'unpredictable' jutsu. I would go for three. Else it would become more like a whack-a-mole on a distance technique.

Fixed.

3.) Bo Style • Gliding PoleSounds more like a C ranked technique. Also, how fast does it allow him to go about and such?

Fixed

4.) Bo Style • Earth ShowerSounds more like a B ranked technique to me. Also, the amount is a bit too high with the fact he can control them and with a whack turn them into a shrapnel grenade. (Earth shattering around due an implosion/explosion causes some mean and very sharp rocks to fly about. In other words, a similar kind of shrapnel grenade effect.)That is for now my review. Hope you have something with it. :)

I made it to where they don't explode. He just makes rocks fly out of the ground and he can shoot them at people or use them for weak cover. If I use it ICly, it won't be as strong as you think. It'll be C rank worthy.

Third CS:


Name: Jinkai Yuko
Nickname/Alias: Jin
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, 01/12/460
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: None

Parents: Unknown
Length and build 4'6.5", thin, flexible, but lean.
Weight: 125 lbs
Favorite weather and season Rain. No season.



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure

Clan/Bloodline: None

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water



Appearance: Here
Wish I could draw my own shit but whatever yo



Personality: Jin is very quiet and reserved. No, he isn't the calculating, behind-the-scenes-mastermind quiet. He's simply awkward and doesn't understand how to communicate, partly due to his amnesia. Interactions with others ultimately end with awkward conversations, but sometimes, people find it somewhat amusing to be around his otherwise humorous fits of social confusion.



History: Jin remember nothing past the day he woke up floating in a ice cold river in the Land of Water. He knew only three things: his name, his age, and his purpose. He was Jinkai Yuko, a nine year old academy student who would die defending his nation. Ever since the strange occurrence, Jin has been forced to live a very difficult life, as the orphans of the Mist village weren't the sad, lonely, and sympathy-attracting kids that they were put out to be. They were harsh, cold, and calculating individuals bred in the shadows of hatred and an overarching desire for revenge. But Jin was different. For starters, he had no idea why he was an orphan or how he even came into existence. Furthermore, he was naturally inclined to try to make friends due to his loneliness and lack of hatred. But despise his every effort, he failed to do so, as the other orphans were simply not friend-material.

Eventually Jin began questioning higher ups about his past, but even they had no idea where he came from and assumed he was merely an abandoned child of a nomadic family. Jin decided he would merely accept his fate and move on, since he still had a purpose to hold on to. He enrolled in the academy once again and began training from day one, managing to unlock his water element rather early. The teachers would always tell him, "You're an academy student, focus less on combat." But it was in his Kirigakurian blood to thirst for more blood. Combat was a game for him - an escape from the dull and unimportant life he was forced to live. Since then, he has lived a rather simple and plain life, graduating from the academy and finally being able to become a shinobi for his country.

Theme Song: yep.


Weapons/Items:



Skills/Abilities
[list]

He has really fast taijutsu and it is extremely fluid.

He is extremely adept with throwing weapons.

Special Traits

Amazing general eyesight (for throwing weapons and noticing small details)

Great precision with throwing weapons and taijutsu strikes.

Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu



Summons


Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxeyRO6j

*raised my hand* can Sage's oc join team Hayashi since hes a Kirigakure oc? just wondering.

@Sage: I accept both of your characters on this page, provided you met Gero's demands.

And DAYUM SHADOWCATCHER! That AoT gif is distracting as fuck. XD

j8cob said
@Sage: I accept both of your characters on this page, provided you met Gero's demands.And DAYUM SHADOWCATCHER! That AoT gif is distracting as fuck. XD

X3 isint it though?

Shadowcatcher said
X3 isint it though?

It is *.* I've been trying to work on my cs but get distracted by your sig xD

Too tired, I'll finish later


Name: Raiden Saito
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, March 15
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Straight

Parents: Shoske Saito and Yomi Suigetsu
Length and build 5'7; Lean but muscular
Weight 135
Favorite weather and season Mist/Hail and Fall



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: FUD

Clan/Bloodline: Saito Clan - Fukumogan

Rank: Genin-D

Chakra Nature: Wind



Appearance:




Personality:



History:

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities
Talented Taijutsu and Genjutsu user
Average Ninjutsu skills
Average chakra control
(What are the skills that make your character good at some points or bad. Chakra control, reflexes and such are needed to be placed here.)



Special Traits
(Place unique traits like "High Chakra levels" or "multiple limbs" here. If it isn't here it won't be counted, even if you come from the Uzumaki clan, high chakra won't be accepted unless here.)


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Fukumogan
Clan: Saito Clan
Description:
Being the first person to have ever have the Fukumogan, little is known about its abilities so far.


Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu



Summons


Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxtQDZeR