Fattwan, he is accepted by me. You just need 1 more acceptance and you will be good to go.
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Um...not to sound bitter...but uh....hi I've been waiting for an official second approval. since yesterday.
@MasterJay (Finally saw what you did with your name. Clever,)
Kumori Yotsuki accepted. To the char bin with him.
Kumori Yotsuki accepted. To the char bin with him.
@Nicias Askani
Accepted. To the char bin with your character.
Accepted. To the char bin with your character.
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Ok im not bitter anymore /\./\ Yay.
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Thanks, added.
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Tank you! added
No problem. Now, go and have some fun in the IC. Hup hup. Fly little birds.~
Name: Wukong
Nickname/Alias: Wu
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: none
Parents: Naiga (father) and Laali (mother) Khan
Length and build: 5'7", muscular
Weight: 150 lb
Favorite weather and season: none
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: None
Clan/Bloodline: None
Rank: Chunin
Chakra Nature: Earth
Appearance: http://oocherry-chanoo.deviantart.com/art/Sun-Wukong-221427840
Personality: Wukong is a very quirky individual who likes to joke about almost anything. He is always taking things too far and never knows when to shut up, often making jokes at the wrong time. However, he is rather caring and does it in good heart - he simply doesn't have the same social awareness as everyone else. He is also rather vulgar and immature.
History: Wukong basically forgot his real name. His parents were lame old grocery store owners and he did everything in his power to escape his household at the age of 14. From that point forward, Wukong, commonly know was "Wu or Wuko", sought to tread on the path of the Shinobi as it he felt it was a much better and more honorable destiny than selling herbs and spices. When he ran from the Land of Water, he ended up landing on the mainland countries by sailing as a stow away. Upon reaching the shores, Wu wandered for weeks, barely surviving off of food given to him out of sympathy. Being as silly as he was, he severely miscalculated how much life costs in the shinobi world - he had run away from home with nothing more than his clothes and about 500 ryo. Eventually, he was "saved" by Iosaf, a man who people often shunned due to his cryptic mannerisms. The man claimed to be a hermit, and upon meeting him, Wu felt it was his destiny to learn from and be saved by the man. Hermit Iosaf was beyond happy to find someone such as Wu to be so accepting of his unique lifestyle - one of isolation and self preservation. For a good number of years, Wu spent his life training along side the hermit.
Despite his old age, Iosaf had an amazing physical condition, capable of lifting and tossing boulders as if they were pebbles. He could also jump at heights that left Wu staring in awe. Wu understood that it would take a long time before he could attain such power, but through diligence and hard work, he had managed to impress the hermit enough to receive a small gift. Iosaf called it "Vio", a red and gold staff that held an insane amount of energy within it. It was here that the Hermit bonded half of his chakra with half of Wu's, contained it within the staff, and set Wu off to find his won path.
Wu had lost complete track of time during his isolated training with the hermit, and due to this, he simply estimated that his age. At age "15", he decided it was time to return to his home to confront his parents, as it was the right thing to do. However, when he returned to the Land of Water, he had come to learn that both his parents were killed in a bandit raid that sacked a huge portion of the village's outskirts. Upon learning this, Wu made an oath to become a shinobi and fight the evils that plagued the lands. He became genin not too long after. He was naturally fit, capable of running faster and hitting harder than most. But he had no Shinobi blood in him, so chakra control was always a struggle. Now, Wukong proudly serves in the Mist's Shinobi forces as a genin hoping to be promoted yet once more.
Theme Song: None
Weapons/Items[u][/u]:
Name of Weapon or Item: Mountain Hermit's Staff
Description: Wukong was gifted this staff when he finished training on a peculiar range of mountains located on the mainland (during a short "vacation" from his genin duties at age 18). There was a hermit upon these mountains who could control chakra at a level that Wukong had never seen, and Wukong begged the man to teach him how to do what he did. Due to Wukong's poor chakra control, the hermit simply (out of immense generosity) sealed half his chakra and half of Wukong's chakra within the staff he wielded. As a result, Wukong was given a weapon that held immense chakra that he could control by wielding the staff. It can extend to be lengths from 1-3 meters and augments his Doton ninjutsu.
Appearance: check character appearance
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Appearance:
Skills/Abilities
-Staff wielding ability
Special Traits
-High endurance. He can run extremely long distanced at sprinting speed without breaking a sweat.
-Adept martial artist
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
Jutsu:
Just Basic academy stuff (transformation, substitution, body flicker, etc)
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique: Bo Style • Shatter
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 50 meters
Nature Type: Doton
Handseals: none
Description: This Jutsu (upon activation) causes Wukong's hands and eyes to glow orange, as well as his staff. Wukong focuses his chakra within his staff and slams it into the ground. The force of the blow can travel through the ground as Wukong wishes and burst out of it anytime. For example, if Wukong swung his staff at the enemy and they dodged backwards, he could finish the swing and have his staff hit the ground. A second later, the force of the swing (that would have hit the target were he to have successfully made contact) erupts out of the ground from behind the target (it's invisible - just pure impact force, though some earth may explode upward).
Weakness: Lasts 3 seconds. Uses 5% of total chakra. Requires staff to be held. Must make contact with the ground. Any doton user can easily negate this by manipulating the ground from where the force would explode from. Lightning can also negate this if it is aimed at the ground where the force is suspected to come from, causing the earth to gain a charge that can counteract the force via vibrations.
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Name of Technique: Bo Style • Gliding Pole
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: self
Nature Type: Doton
Handseals: Tiger Horse Rat Horse Boar Rat Tiger (slam staff into ground)
Description: The second Wukong slams his staff into the ground, it channels it's chakra to call upon this energies flowing flowing through the magnetic interior of the planet's crust. As a result, the staff begins to float, and Wukong can use it to "fly" (he must remain within 100 meters from the ground). When flying, he is going at a normal tree hopping pace, but cannot attack or pull any evasive maneuvers without expending 10% chakra for say... a barrel roll.
Weakness: Magnetic users can buttfuck him if they use their abilities correctly (he is levitating due to magnetic response). Range restriction. 1% of chakra per minute activated.
Name: Bo Style • Earth Shower
Type of jutsu: Doton Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Varies
Handseals: Tiger Horse Rat Dragon Boar Monkey Snake Rat tiger (slam pole into ground)
Description: This Jutsu combines Wukong's two primary abilities (shatter and gliding pole). Wukong caused a huge clutter of earth to erupt from the ground around him. Usually it ranges from 20-50 boulders of various sizes, and combined with the magnetic effect, they are left suspended in the air around him. Once this is done, he can control them as if he were a telekinetic user by making contact with them. He can whack them with his chakra infused staff to send them flying towards a target at great speed or use them as cover. It's as if his staff becomes a cattle prod, and he motions for the boulders to take position where he wishes. It last about twenty seconds before the boulders fall to the ground.
Weakness: 20% of chakra per use (varies upon intensity). If a lightning jutsu hit the polarized boulders, they would explode and anally penetrate Wukong. (I mean it would screw him over real bad).
Summons
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uwX6Cfqs
Gerontis "I worry for Hugin, But I worry more for Munin."
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@Kisheto
Sorry Kisheto, but for now only accept genins as student characters.
Sorry Kisheto, but for now only accept genins as student characters.
He's not a student though...
Whatever I edited him to genin
Whatever I edited him to genin
Gerontis "I worry for Hugin, But I worry more for Munin."
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My review mate. :)
Besides : Chuunins are student characters, unless you want him to lead a squad. Though I would go for specialized Jounin then.
1. ) I find the history a bit short. Mind to expand it a bit? I rather would want it a bit more expanded as it seems a a bit short. I ask this cause I know you can do so much better with your skill. ;)
2,) Bo Style • Shatter
Each weakness must be told and be clear. People need to be realistic with their characters and can't instantly know the weakness. Observant and intelligent characters may do some hypothesis and such, but that is about it.(I won't even go on sharingans or such that can predict/see through a jutsu)
Besides, a second is maybe too fast for an 'unpredictable' jutsu. I would go for three. Else it would become more like a whack-a-mole on a distance technique.
3.) Bo Style • Gliding Pole
Sounds more like a C ranked technique. Also, how fast does it allow him to go about and such?
4.) Bo Style • Earth Shower
Sounds more like a B ranked technique to me. Also, the amount is a bit too high with the fact he can control them and with a whack turn them into a shrapnel grenade. (Earth shattering around due an implosion/explosion causes some mean and very sharp rocks to fly about. In other words, a similar kind of shrapnel grenade effect.)
That is for now my review. Hope you have something with it. :)
Besides : Chuunins are student characters, unless you want him to lead a squad. Though I would go for specialized Jounin then.
1. ) I find the history a bit short. Mind to expand it a bit? I rather would want it a bit more expanded as it seems a a bit short. I ask this cause I know you can do so much better with your skill. ;)
2,) Bo Style • Shatter
Each weakness must be told and be clear. People need to be realistic with their characters and can't instantly know the weakness. Observant and intelligent characters may do some hypothesis and such, but that is about it.(I won't even go on sharingans or such that can predict/see through a jutsu)
Besides, a second is maybe too fast for an 'unpredictable' jutsu. I would go for three. Else it would become more like a whack-a-mole on a distance technique.
3.) Bo Style • Gliding Pole
Sounds more like a C ranked technique. Also, how fast does it allow him to go about and such?
4.) Bo Style • Earth Shower
Sounds more like a B ranked technique to me. Also, the amount is a bit too high with the fact he can control them and with a whack turn them into a shrapnel grenade. (Earth shattering around due an implosion/explosion causes some mean and very sharp rocks to fly about. In other words, a similar kind of shrapnel grenade effect.)
That is for now my review. Hope you have something with it. :)
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Gerontis said
My review mate. :)Besides : Chuunins are student characters, unless you want him to lead a squad. Though I would go for specialized Jounin then.1. ) I find the history a bit short. Mind to expand it a bit? I rather would want it a bit more expanded as it seems a a bit short. I ask this cause I know you can do so much better with your skill. ;)
Sorry, I made it on my iPhone. I'm rushing these two characters because you know Kisheto will be my main. I'll still try my hardest to work with all three.
2,) Bo Style • ShatterEach weakness must be told and be clear. People need to be realistic with their characters and can't instantly know the weakness. Observant and intelligent characters may do some hypothesis and such, but that is about it.(I won't even go on sharingans or such that can predict/see through a jutsu) Besides, a second is maybe too fast for an 'unpredictable' jutsu. I would go for three. Else it would become more like a whack-a-mole on a distance technique.
Fixed.
3.) Bo Style • Gliding PoleSounds more like a C ranked technique. Also, how fast does it allow him to go about and such?
Fixed
4.) Bo Style • Earth ShowerSounds more like a B ranked technique to me. Also, the amount is a bit too high with the fact he can control them and with a whack turn them into a shrapnel grenade. (Earth shattering around due an implosion/explosion causes some mean and very sharp rocks to fly about. In other words, a similar kind of shrapnel grenade effect.)That is for now my review. Hope you have something with it. :)
I made it to where they don't explode. He just makes rocks fly out of the ground and he can shoot them at people or use them for weak cover. If I use it ICly, it won't be as strong as you think. It'll be C rank worthy.
Third CS:
Name: Jinkai Yuko
Nickname/Alias: Jin
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, 01/12/460
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: None
Parents: Unknown
Length and build 4'6.5", thin, flexible, but lean.
Weight: 125 lbs
Favorite weather and season Rain. No season.
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure
Clan/Bloodline: None
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Water
Appearance: Here
Wish I could draw my own shit but whatever yo
Personality: Jin is very quiet and reserved. No, he isn't the calculating, behind-the-scenes-mastermind quiet. He's simply awkward and doesn't understand how to communicate, partly due to his amnesia. Interactions with others ultimately end with awkward conversations, but sometimes, people find it somewhat amusing to be around his otherwise humorous fits of social confusion.
History: Jin remember nothing past the day he woke up floating in a ice cold river in the Land of Water. He knew only three things: his name, his age, and his purpose. He was Jinkai Yuko, a nine year old academy student who would die defending his nation. Ever since the strange occurrence, Jin has been forced to live a very difficult life, as the orphans of the Mist village weren't the sad, lonely, and sympathy-attracting kids that they were put out to be. They were harsh, cold, and calculating individuals bred in the shadows of hatred and an overarching desire for revenge. But Jin was different. For starters, he had no idea why he was an orphan or how he even came into existence. Furthermore, he was naturally inclined to try to make friends due to his loneliness and lack of hatred. But despise his every effort, he failed to do so, as the other orphans were simply not friend-material.
Eventually Jin began questioning higher ups about his past, but even they had no idea where he came from and assumed he was merely an abandoned child of a nomadic family. Jin decided he would merely accept his fate and move on, since he still had a purpose to hold on to. He enrolled in the academy once again and began training from day one, managing to unlock his water element rather early. The teachers would always tell him, "You're an academy student, focus less on combat." But it was in his Kirigakurian blood to thirst for more blood. Combat was a game for him - an escape from the dull and unimportant life he was forced to live. Since then, he has lived a rather simple and plain life, graduating from the academy and finally being able to become a shinobi for his country.
Theme Song: yep.
Weapons/Items:
Name of Weapon or Item: Basic Shinobi Weapons Pouch
Description: 15 kunai, 30 Shuriken, 50 m cord
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item: Demon Wind Shuriken
Description: Jinkai always carries a large Shuriken on his back that serves as his primary weapon.
Appearance:
Skills/Abilities
[list]
He has really fast taijutsu and it is extremely fluid.
He is extremely adept with throwing weapons.
Special Traits
Amazing general eyesight (for throwing weapons and noticing small details)
Great precision with throwing weapons and taijutsu strikes.
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
Jutsu:
Besides all basic academy jutsu?
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_GunshotWater Style - Water Bullet[/url
Hidden Mist Technique
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
====================
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
Summons
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxeyRO6j
Name: Jinkai Yuko
Nickname/Alias: Jin
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, 01/12/460
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: None
Parents: Unknown
Length and build 4'6.5", thin, flexible, but lean.
Weight: 125 lbs
Favorite weather and season Rain. No season.
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure
Clan/Bloodline: None
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Water
Appearance: Here
Wish I could draw my own shit but whatever yo
Personality: Jin is very quiet and reserved. No, he isn't the calculating, behind-the-scenes-mastermind quiet. He's simply awkward and doesn't understand how to communicate, partly due to his amnesia. Interactions with others ultimately end with awkward conversations, but sometimes, people find it somewhat amusing to be around his otherwise humorous fits of social confusion.
History: Jin remember nothing past the day he woke up floating in a ice cold river in the Land of Water. He knew only three things: his name, his age, and his purpose. He was Jinkai Yuko, a nine year old academy student who would die defending his nation. Ever since the strange occurrence, Jin has been forced to live a very difficult life, as the orphans of the Mist village weren't the sad, lonely, and sympathy-attracting kids that they were put out to be. They were harsh, cold, and calculating individuals bred in the shadows of hatred and an overarching desire for revenge. But Jin was different. For starters, he had no idea why he was an orphan or how he even came into existence. Furthermore, he was naturally inclined to try to make friends due to his loneliness and lack of hatred. But despise his every effort, he failed to do so, as the other orphans were simply not friend-material.
Eventually Jin began questioning higher ups about his past, but even they had no idea where he came from and assumed he was merely an abandoned child of a nomadic family. Jin decided he would merely accept his fate and move on, since he still had a purpose to hold on to. He enrolled in the academy once again and began training from day one, managing to unlock his water element rather early. The teachers would always tell him, "You're an academy student, focus less on combat." But it was in his Kirigakurian blood to thirst for more blood. Combat was a game for him - an escape from the dull and unimportant life he was forced to live. Since then, he has lived a rather simple and plain life, graduating from the academy and finally being able to become a shinobi for his country.
Theme Song: yep.
Weapons/Items:
Name of Weapon or Item: Basic Shinobi Weapons Pouch
Description: 15 kunai, 30 Shuriken, 50 m cord
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item: Demon Wind Shuriken
Description: Jinkai always carries a large Shuriken on his back that serves as his primary weapon.
Appearance:
Skills/Abilities
[list]
Special Traits
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
Jutsu:
Besides all basic academy jutsu?
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_GunshotWater Style - Water Bullet[/url
Hidden Mist Technique
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
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Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
Summons
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxeyRO6j
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*raised my hand* can Sage's oc join team Hayashi since hes a Kirigakure oc? just wondering.
j8cob The Gr8est / The J8est
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@Sage: I accept both of your characters on this page, provided you met Gero's demands.
And DAYUM SHADOWCATCHER! That AoT gif is distracting as fuck. XD
And DAYUM SHADOWCATCHER! That AoT gif is distracting as fuck. XD
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j8cob said
@Sage: I accept both of your characters on this page, provided you met Gero's demands.And DAYUM SHADOWCATCHER! That AoT gif is distracting as fuck. XD
X3 isint it though?
Shadowcatcher said
X3 isint it though?
It is *.* I've been trying to work on my cs but get distracted by your sig xD
Too tired, I'll finish later
Name: Raiden Saito
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, March 15
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Straight
Parents: Shoske Saito and Yomi Suigetsu
Length and build 5'7; Lean but muscular
Weight 135
Favorite weather and season Mist/Hail and Fall
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: FUD
Clan/Bloodline: Saito Clan - Fukumogan
Rank: Genin-D
Chakra Nature: Wind
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Theme Song:
Weapons/Items[u][/u]:
Usual shinobi tools: Kunai, shuriken, smoke pellets, flash bombs, explosive tags
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Appearance:
Skills/Abilities
Talented Taijutsu and Genjutsu user
Average Ninjutsu skills
Average chakra control
(What are the skills that make your character good at some points or bad. Chakra control, reflexes and such are needed to be placed here.)
Special Traits
(Place unique traits like "High Chakra levels" or "multiple limbs" here. If it isn't here it won't be counted, even if you come from the Uzumaki clan, high chakra won't be accepted unless here.)
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Fukumogan
Clan: Saito Clan
Description:
Being the first person to have ever have the Fukumogan, little is known about its abilities so far.
Jutsu:
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
====================
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
Summons
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxtQDZeR
Name: Raiden Saito
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 15, March 15
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Straight
Parents: Shoske Saito and Yomi Suigetsu
Length and build 5'7; Lean but muscular
Weight 135
Favorite weather and season Mist/Hail and Fall
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: FUD
Clan/Bloodline: Saito Clan - Fukumogan
Rank: Genin-D
Chakra Nature: Wind
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Theme Song:
Weapons/Items[u][/u]:
Usual shinobi tools: Kunai, shuriken, smoke pellets, flash bombs, explosive tags
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Appearance:
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Appearance:
Skills/Abilities
Talented Taijutsu and Genjutsu user
Average Ninjutsu skills
Average chakra control
(What are the skills that make your character good at some points or bad. Chakra control, reflexes and such are needed to be placed here.)
Special Traits
(Place unique traits like "High Chakra levels" or "multiple limbs" here. If it isn't here it won't be counted, even if you come from the Uzumaki clan, high chakra won't be accepted unless here.)
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Fukumogan
Clan: Saito Clan
Description:
Being the first person to have ever have the Fukumogan, little is known about its abilities so far.
Jutsu:
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
====================
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:
Summons
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2uxtQDZeR
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