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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by PatrickDrummer
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@Savo I changed my character's last name to relate to a color, and I'm just wondering if the rest is okay?
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Isn't that just part of influences for the names?


Even if it's just that, Juno's name and not yet mentioned title fit the story as well. After all, Juno is the Queen of the Skies/Space and she usually is better known as Eclipse Princess on other RPs.

*Points to a certain probe flying over Jupiter.*

@KoL

I don't think we're naming Fairy Tales.

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I wonder how long did it took you to notice the extent of the coincidence you created?

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@SavoWell, one thing I was thinking of is that it would be harder to hit her targets in CQC because, for one, less time to line up the shot, and much less room for error. Remember that her shotgun fires slug rounds, so while it hits like a truck, if your aim is off, then you don't have the spread to make up for it. So while she wouldn't have much trouble against slower, tankier targets(though in that case, she'd probably run anyway) faster, more offensive foes will completely overwhelm her if they get close enough and she has no back-up to help her out, as she'd have to due some really risky maneuvers to ensure a hit. Basically, going 1v1 is a bad idea because her opponent can either match or exceed her speed, or take her attacks and keep on trucking with little worry. This is less a problem with Grim, I'd think, since they don't really avoid attacks that much and go down pretty easy if they're the lesser versions.

Is that a good explanation/reason?

Edit: Also, I forgot to put down the types of Dust she uses for the shotgun, so I'll put them down here as:Gravity, Fire, Ice, and Electricity
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I wonder how long did it took you to notice the extent of the coincidence you created?

*Points to a certain 1x1.*


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The fairy tales play part as influence for characters but aren't always strictly applied more than that. I've just chosen to use the fairy tale a bit more than as influence.
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I didn't use a fairy tale at all.
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Oh yeah, I drew my character.

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@Sho Minazuki
I need to get you to draw some of our RWBY cast...
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@Sho Minazuki

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So are applications still open for this RP? I have a character ready besides a few changes to make him more suited for the RP and how I want to use him but i'd rather check before posting so I dont get an awkward "characters alright but we're full so..bye" response.

Also, how far up to the fall of beacon do you want the character history? Most people seem to be putting it at around where they start attending beacon but thought I should double check.
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@PatrickDrummer The name is good, but I'm still curious about the Semblance she has. It's basically just speed, right?

@Raijinslayer Plausible explanations. They work for me so shove it onto the sheet and move it over to the characters section!

I should probably put how many slots there are left on the first part of the post, as well as reserves I can ring up when things get full... anyways, onto reading three apps.
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@SavoI'll get to it later tonight, on my phone right now.
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I changed my mind, bitches.

Allen J is back in the business.

First thing's first...



... You couldn't find a better picture for your character?

Really, dude? lol
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@Savo

is this RPG still accepting characters?
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@Savo Okay, here is Jaden's sheet with the edits, idk what to put during his time in Beacon, or in regards to his team.

accept my character savo

accept it, you whore

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@Mr Allen J

I could not find a better one because it is the best! Dat tail, dose horns, De scales, THEY SPEAK TO ME!

I have no regrets. I will live and die by my decision!
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I could not find a better one because it is the best! Dat tail, dose horns, De scales, THEY SPEAK TO ME!

I have no regrets. I will live and die by my decision!


It's verging on softcore porn, dude. lol

Now, since I got my Co-GM privileges back, I can rightfully shit on judge everyone's character sheets, and I'll start with yours, @Lucius Cypher. The main thing that stood out to me was her backstory... it doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Being raised by animals just doesn't make sense when no animal ever does that (And not to mention that Grimm probably should have killed her long before she was found). Being hidden under a rock just doesn't make sense.

I also don't get her weapon description. You're basically saying that she's strong and durable enough to punch Grimm to death without any semblance, right? I don't recall anyone in RWBY-canon being strong without a Semblance. It works for Yang because her Semblance is strength, and she has a punching weapon. Idk, she could use a better weapon description.

Also, everyone's supposed to be a student of Beacon (Meaning the fall took place a short while ago), so how/why is she going to the ruins of it?
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@Mr Allen J

Exactly. I ain't Lewdci for nothing.

Now then, onto srs bsn. I'll admit her backstory might seem a bit farfetched, but the initial idea is that she is a "feral child", or at least her origins were like one. Raised by wolves and what not. I'm mostly basing the intelligence of animals off Zwei, who if he is a "normal" dog, I figured other canine like creatures have a similar intelligence. At least good enough to let a human child live long enough in the wild for her to be found by humans. As for how she escaped the grimm, that's thanks to her parents. Much like Luna, her parents specialize in drawing agro/attention towards themselves, so after the father hid Luna away, he used his abilities to draw the grimm far away from Luna where she was soon found by regular animals.

As for her weapons, basically her weapons is her claws, barehands, etc. Again, it's to emphasis her more feral nature; unlike other hunters who require weapons, Luna gets by with just what her body gives her. It helps that, as her image shows, she has claws and scales that make her hand-to-hand abilities more natural than your average human. Also in case it wasn't too obvious because I'm purposely dancing around it, her animal type for a Faunas is a dragon. Her semblance, once she achieves full power over it, allows her to take on a full dragon form. Her chain is simple a tool she uses to help her fight, as I intend for her to collect and use more weapons as the story goes on. Some cool, others simple, whatever really works.

Additionally I was a bit confused about Beacon myself. Initially I did write that she was now attending Beacon, but when I read over the first post again, it mentioned that it was already destroyed and Vale overrun. I was uncertain if that meant by the time my character is introduced into the story that she was part of Beacon prior to it's destruction, or if she would have arrived there from Mistral to ply her craft. At first it was the former, then I changed it to the latter, but I can always change that back.
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here is my Character:


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@Savo



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