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Name: Jacholaus Lucard
Age: 17
Gender: Male
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History: Jacholaus Lucard was born Lucard Jacholaus, due to the surname being placed before a given name, a Romanian tradition, to a rich family in the country of Romania. Jacholaus was privileged at a young age, living in a large estate with a powerful family of Weapons and Meisters, receiving special training after being discovered that he was a Demon Weapon. Jacholaus, after some time, began to develop strange habits. These habits were simple at first, such as developing a high want for sweets, having them with every meal, which, due to his extremely high metabolism and otherwise balanced diet, did not have an effect on him. Though, over time, they became a bit more odd and, to a point, macabre.
Jacholaus had soon developed a love for undeath and the undead. None of the undead fascinated him more than vampires. He found it fun that they were linked to his country of birth. He also found it fun to mimic vampires. Jacholaus had, for one, had an operation done on his upper canine teeth to where they were extended to almost an inch. Jacholaus also would begin wearing darker formal clothing and preferred the night. Though, it did not stop there. Jacholaus began pricking his wrists every so often with his sharpened, elongated canines to draw small amounts of blood. He would then swallow a few drops after this, tasting the deep red ichor. Jacholaus loved the taste of blood, weirdly enough.
Jacholaus, one day, decided he would move to North America in pursuit of Shibusen, the school he had always dreamed of attending. Along with other subjects, he would by studying and working alongside others like him, finding a Meister soon after and being able to fight Kishin, tainted souls, and Witches alike. This is what he had always dreamed of and he was finally able to go.
Jacholaus soon moved to Death City, in Nevada, having bought a decent home there, by his family’s standards of living. In actuality, though, it was more than one person would ever need. It was a large home on a pricy estate in the city. It was more like a manor than a house, but a house nonetheless. And this house came complete with a workforce of maids, butlers, and et cetera.
Despite all he had, Jacholaus did not like being spoiled. He did not expect anything of anyone. He only would live in the large estate because it would be a waste of his family’s fortune and he did not wish to disappoint them. He planned on at least sharing the large estate with his Meister and making it so they did not have to live on school allowance for students. It was the least he could do.
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Resonance:
Lelket Ivás- Literally “Spirit Drink” in Hungarian, this technique is performed by the blade being impaled into the body, and into the soul. Then, the enemy’s soul energy is violently siphoned out of the victim until death, or until there is enough energy to be used against the victim. If the soul is too strong to be siphoned out, then the Lelket Ivás will siphon the blood out instead until there is no more and the victim dies.

Here is my created character~
I hope it suffices ^^
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Jacholaus and Zubuzi seem to make for a horrible situation! Whatever you do, don't let them cut you.
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...So he's a villain?
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So pretty much if you're impaled you die? Nothing wrong with that at all.
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Jacholaus is accepted.

I might write the first IC post soon. It looks like we have quite a nice group running. Expllo and Hasayo still need to finish their CS and Jett's CS requires tiny adjustments to his history.

In any way, I like this grouping already and enjoy the RP as long as it will last. I will hire Crona to take your souls while you sleep, if you disappoint me, though *evil-grin*
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Rin said
...So he's a villain?


That wasn't my intention. I just wanted a macabre character. He is still very much good, it's just that his methods make him look deranged, twisted, and evil. The first two of which are a little true about him, but the latter is not.

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Jacholaus and Zubuzi seem to make for a horrible situation! Whatever you do, don't let them cut you.


They will get along nicely.

Expllo said
So pretty much if you're impaled you die? Nothing wrong with that at all.


Pretty much.

Dark Eternity said
Jacholaus is accepted.I might write the first IC post soon. It looks like we have quite a nice group running. Expllo and Hasayo still need to finish their CS and Jett's CS requires tiny adjustments to his history.In any way, I like this grouping already and enjoy the RP as long as it will last. I will hire Crona to take your souls while you sleep, if you disappoint me, though *evil-grin*


Yay!~

Also, isn't Crona kind of a wimp?
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Expllo said
So pretty much if you're impaled you die? Nothing wrong with that at all.


...Actually yeah, no idea why I glossed over this. That seems kind of... Unfair, for one thing?

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That wasn't my intention. I just wanted a macabre character. He is still very much good, it's just that his methods make him look deranged, twisted, and evil. The first two of which are a little true about him, but the latter is not.


I think you might have went a little too far then, since... I'm looking at him and all I can see is "villain". ^^; Not saying that's bad or anything, just if that wasn't your intention then, um, yeah.
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The Resonance sounds like a basic drain attack, leaving the user heavily unguarded, as it requires the Meister to keep Jacholaus impaled within the enemy. Small fry will die fast, while stronger enemies can withstand short exposure to the attack.
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dear god Im still confused about Crona. But either way s/he turns out to be, Crona is still one of my favs
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Wait, you haven't finished the anime? Nyo~ >_>
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Neither have I. ^^;
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The gender is still undecided.
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GreenGoat said
The gender is still undecided.


I know I'd go for it either way, so. >.> <.<
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That anime ending made me a sad panda. That ending *eye roll*
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Dark Eternity said
The Resonance sounds like a basic drain attack, leaving the user heavily unguarded, as it requires the Meister to keep Jacholaus impaled within the enemy. Small fry will die fast, while stronger enemies can withstand short exposure to the attack.


But the faults of that are:

If energy is too strong, then it resorts to blood. No matter how strong you are, the body still has a limited amount of blood it can hold. And although you could pull the blade out, the blade siphons blood, so if you pull the blade out (Unless there's a healer around, or a hospital close by) then you're still risking death by letting blood out of the wound especially depending on how deep the wound is.

But even so, I'm not sure how'd you'd be able to pull the blade out if blood is violently being siphoned out of your body with someone on the other end forcing the blade into your body unless the character is a brute character but the fault of that is...Even the loss of blood could weaken a strong man lessening his chances of pulling the blade out (Unless Jacholaus is a physically weak man, although I'm sure if that was the case then he wouldn't be able to pierce an enemy unless the blade is very sharp all around).

Though, you are the GM, and if you're fine with the ability then I'll drop it.
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Just think about it in the regards to the story. Not to mention Keshins are generally more monstrous than man. Also think about the wielder of the blade, resonance isn't exactly easy to obtain with a person how longs for the blood of his enemy. I imagine it will make it far harder to achieve it. I also imagine it will be similar to the black blade that black star tried to use, drained the poor dude almost instantly.
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That ability also leaves you immobile in front of your enemy. So if the enemy is strong, and you are right there right in his face, who is to stop him from just killing you while your weapon is stuck in his body.

However, that also depends on the rate of absorption. Too fast, and it will quickly become OP and very boring,
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Exactly, I imagine they will want to make it exciting not OMG look how epic my character is.
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Please Expllo, do speak up about your concerns. I believe that the ability is quite balanced if handled properly. I also see the concern within such an ability, especially due to the fact that it does not seem to have a disadvantage in it's offense, but like me and Green have stated, it completely lacks defense. Not only is the chance high that a strong enemy can pull out Jacholaus, the Meister is completely open to attacks. He would take the beating nevertheless. The enemy can get a win:win out of this by simply suiciding against the Meister, should he not be able to withstand Jacholaus attack.

Not only that, but as Venom already said, a person who is completely bloodlusting can hardly resonate with a "normal" minded being. If the Meister cannot fully resonate with Jacholaus, the drain would stop or even backfire.
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When I came up with Jacholaus's Resonance, I didn't expect so much controversy xD

Also, 100th post of the OOC~
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